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Reviewer: Extraho Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/10/08 08:07 pm Title: Chapter 3

oh dear, this aint gonna turn out well

Reviewer: Dahlia-Starr Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/10/08 07:29 pm Title: Chapter 3

When Bill ran away I thought something badd was gonna happen!
Cant wait for Tom to be all nice ^.^

Author's Response: haha ya i was thinking about makeing something bad happen, but i did want you guys to kill me for that haha...

Reviewer: Aaliyah_Babygurl Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/10/08 07:27 pm Title: Chapter 3

i love it... your language reminds me of ghetto movies. amazing.... waiting for another chap

Reviewer: more_than_dreams Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/19/08 02:33 pm Title: Chapter 2

YAY
*enjoys the love*
You have got to continue!!!!
I friggin AWh-SUM!!!
^_^

Author's Response: hahaha dankeshon ^__^ und i will soo continue i am woking on the next chapter right now, but my internet is down so it may take a while to post.

Reviewer: stasi24 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/08/08 02:41 am Title: Chapter 1

Oh poor Bill :[
please continue!

Reviewer: Akuji Seyyuki Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/06/08 07:45 pm Title: Chapter 1

ah man I wanna see Tom get all pissed and then go into over-protective brother mode when he makes Bill cry, at least that's what I'm hoping will happen^_^. ~_~

Reviewer: EMO_KAULITZ Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/06/08 05:00 pm Title: Chapter 1

EHMAGOD.P[LEASE GO ON. WHAT HAPPENS? DOES TOM CATCH HIM? DOES HE GET AWAY? I NEED TO KNOW OR ILL DIE. *MAKES RESERVATION FOR COFFIN*

Reviewer: starburst Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/27/08 10:50 pm Title: Prologue

I liked it. You should continue.

Author's Response: thankies ^_^ i am updating tomorrow before i leave for a week

Reviewer: stasi24 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/25/08 09:07 am Title: Prologue

please keep going :]

Reviewer: Jenna Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/04/08 09:17 pm Title: Prologue

It sounds good so far, keep it going! :)

Reviewer: Jenna Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/04/08 09:16 pm Title: Prologue

It sounds good so far, keep it going! :)

Reviewer: liebetub Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/04/08 06:59 pm Title: Prologue

Poor Bill:(
Make Tom tell him he is sorry please^^)
I want to know how this story goes on, so please write another one, okay^-^

Love Liebetub

Reviewer: SaraInes Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/04/08 06:56 pm Title: Prologue

The ice cube inside the boxers is great idea (I might use someday xD)
I think you're onto something here. You should keep going.
*hugs*

Author's Response: awwww thankies im happy that you like that idea, that was definityl one of my favorite [arts to write.

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