Date: 07/05/09 02:38 am Title: Chapter 2
This is bloody amazing! I totes just found it. I love how it was all about the one no one focuses on. You really captured all things Gustav in this one. And all things Bill too, I thought. This was just amazing.
Date: 05/04/08 04:10 pm Title: Chapter 2
I loved your style when you posted it in lj, and reading it again was a pleasure.
Congratulations!!
Author's Response: Thank you so much!
Date: 05/04/08 03:32 pm Title: Chapter 2
Oh my God. Totally awesome. Its a new twist on twincest and delving into Gustav's brain and his opinion of Bill and Bill's psyche. I loved the first two chapter and can't wait for the next. I loved the way you worded things:
To tell the truth, the twins’ relationship has always had a certain steady flow which now has erupted to the surface and crystallized into a final form.
Was just awesome.
Author's Response: I am so glad you liked it. Unfortunately, this story is finished as it is. I will go and edit the entry. THanks for the review!
Date: 05/04/08 03:01 pm Title: Chapter 2
Wow... You do an awesome job of putting us in Gustav's POV -- I totally wanna slap the twins for him ^^
Author's Response: Oh,thank you! I love writing Gustav. I almost feel like I can see in his head:) And the twins need a good spanking you're right!
Date: 05/04/08 02:46 pm Title: Chapter 1
A little OOC (Bill isn't *that* bad) but otherwise it's good and I wanna see the so called "head-on collision". The image of Gustav gearing up for battle is particularly awesome XD Poor guy...