Date: 12/12/08 08:35 am Title: Run!
omg i waited forever i was like yes! n poor Tomi :( im glad Bill killed his dad ^ ^ and i cant wait till the next Chap! ur very good :)
Date: 12/10/08 04:27 pm Title: Where it all begins
plaese update soon i cant live without this stroy. what si going to happen to bill and tom
Date: 12/09/08 06:52 pm Title: Run!
I need to know what happens!!!!!
Evil Cliff Hanger!!!!!!!
Update Bitte, I beg you!!!
Date: 12/06/08 03:59 pm Title: Run!
wow...just wow i haven't been on tokiohotelfiction.com for a while and i've been reading twilight (yay edward cullen) which has vampire so i thought this would go down well with me because i luved twilight and the idea of vampire and ...i think i'll read this again later on
Date: 12/02/08 12:02 am Title: Run!
Please dont Bite me for writning another reveiw But I just wanted to say that Tokio Hotel Fiction should make a new Genre becuase of you! You wanna know what its called? SEXY!!!! Oh yeah, I said it!
Date: 12/01/08 11:40 pm Title: Run!
PLEASE UPDATE!! PLEASE UPDATE!! PLEASE UPDATE!! I'M BEGGING YOU! This story is soooooooooo extremly good and there are not enough words to describe how amazing of a writer and of a story this is!! You are my new Favorite writer!! ;) I really want to know what happens next so please, please, PLEASE update ASAP!
I never really found any Vampire stories Interesting Besides the twilight series. So, to be honest with you when I started reading this I thought "oh, great. I bet this is a waste of my time". Then, I dont know how you did it But, I was hooked from chapter one. You totally changed my whole thinking about Vampires stories!;)(This hopefully to you is a complitment) I dont know how to phase my words correctly most of the time XD. I Love how you descibe almost everything in detail! Just by looking at your writing, I think anyone can tell that you put alot of efort forward! Even the chapters you say wont be very good are beautiful! This story line is awsome and I'm addicted to every Pharagraph, Every sentence and every word! Sorry, I'm probley just bableing on to you... but, I totally love you for writing this story!
After reading Chapter 6. Let him go, I had to go to bed for the night and I dreamed about this whole chapt. and what would happen next! Usally, I dont dream of something like this. I woke up at about 2am and was so wanting to skip school the next day and read the rest of the story all day insted. Is that weird? haha. sorry! I didnt mean to make this reveiw so long! Damn! Its your writing I tell you! It inspires me! lol
So, yes please, please update! I've read tons of stories that dont ever get updated so I kinda lost interest. But your different. You wont leave me and all the other readers hanging will you?
Also, Thank you so much for taking your OWN, personal time to sit down and write this. To me, there is somethimes just not enough time in the world. For you to take that little and use it to make other people happy is so wonderful! aww, I'm getting all sappy on you! XD
Again for like the millionth time, Please write more soon and while your hopefully doing that I'm gonna tell everyone I know to read this story!
Thank you!
Author's Response: It is you, my little lady, that just left me speachless..... wow ..... What an amazing review. Gosh, I've never recieved such a nice review..I...I...I'm speechless. This is by far the best birthday present I've gotten...Well, my birthday's tomorrow but..yeah! You so made my day, and yes, love, I will update really soon :D Gosh, I'm glad you like it so much, I totally love people who love my stories, so I guess I love you for loving it :D Keep reading and I hope future chapters won't disapoint you :)
Date: 12/01/08 12:23 pm Title: Run!
ok wasn't expecting Bill to kill his father but why does he have to run?! He's the next king? If he's king can't he just change the rules? Can't he choose a woman to give him a baby and he and Tom get to live happiley ever after? Tom could be a vampire or at least hang out with Bill and then everything could be ok?
Date: 12/01/08 11:56 am Title: "...What?..."
Tom in a dress?! OMG *eye roll*
Date: 11/30/08 09:36 pm Title: It's in his nature
whoa, This chapter was deep and supenceful! Love it!
Date: 11/30/08 08:54 pm Title: A whole different perspective
So hot! I love Bill eating the ice cream!! So sexy!
Date: 11/27/08 05:11 pm Title: Run!
Oh my god. You have to write more. This is so effing good.
Date: 11/27/08 01:03 am Title: Run!
OMFG i was amazing write more soon!!Bitte i will give U a cookie if u do!!!LOL
Date: 11/26/08 04:55 pm Title: Run!
OMG!!! I went to hit the Next button, but there is none!!! I love this story so much and I cant wait for there to be more chapter!!! *faves*
Date: 11/26/08 01:53 am Title: Run!
oh...my...gosh...i wanna marry this story!! XDDD i love it!^^
Date: 11/25/08 02:17 am Title: Where it all begins
to the reviewer below me :
for realz
Date: 11/25/08 01:08 am Title: Run!
AH!!!!! O____O;;;
WTF??? lol. crazy. Dx
POOR TOM!!! he's all nekked on the floor. Dx
And Bill killed his father! Dx
Amazing update.
more soon???
Date: 11/24/08 10:44 am Title: Run!
wow, that was simply amazing!!!!
i cant wait to read more!!!
ur doing a great job :)
Date: 11/23/08 09:34 pm Title: "Let him go..."
oh sad Bill's always dissapearing at the part where it starts to get good!