Date: 05/02/08 11:54 am Title: Family
aww, really good story :O
More :D
Author's Response: thank you :)
Date: 05/02/08 10:33 am Title: Family
Eez good, yes! Please continue, I'm loving this. :)
Author's Response: I will. Patience :D No, seriously. I'll continue as soon as possible.
Date: 05/02/08 10:31 am Title: Family
I like it, it's good, but!
Kids at the age of 3 don't really talk much yet... I have a cousin who is 10 now, and when he was 3 years old he didn't talk yet. Just a few small words... He didn't understand much, AND, he doesn't remember those years. So it's highly unlikely that Bill remembers his familie's faces, and the memory of when he bumped into Tom.
Author's Response: I know that MOST don't. But I was a freaking chatter box from the moment I learned how to say my name. And that was way before I turned 3. rnrnAnd as for the memories... well, I never said that he remembered it. ;) and besides, I know for a fact people can see flashes even from time before 4. rnrnBut thank you, I do appreciate it. And I'm glad you liked it :)
Date: 05/02/08 09:56 am Title: Family
Awww this one is cute you know! I hope you'll post soon because I'm getting curious - was he adopted first by his first family and then adopted again by what is truly his family, which is Tom's?
Author's Response: uh... I really don't know what to say to that. Just see it how it goes :D I'll try to make it one hell of a emotional ride :D Yeah, I'm evil little... thing :D And I like it.rnrnI will continue soon. Thanks for reading, I'm glad that you like it.
Date: 05/02/08 09:20 am Title: Family
That was sooo cute! I love your style of writing. And Awwww, Bill and Tome are adorable!
Author's Response: thank you, you're the first one to comment. :D so you made my day. rnrnhope that you're gonna like it as it develops, too :)