OMG! I loved it! It was awesomely written! It's so sad about Bill because I would come home to an empty house ever since I was seven. My ONLY big brother burnt off on me and my mom worked during the day and partied at night, coming home with her douce of a boyfriend. It still happens to this day, I'm sixteen. I know exactly how Bill felt about wanting to have someone. I don't have any friends or people who love me to hold me. My mom would promise to hang out or buy something for me then turn around and speand it on him. I never said anything because she'd be so mad and never understand. She knows everything about that man but nothing about me.

Oh. My. God.
LOVEEE ITT! =]
Amazing job!