Date: 05/02/08 11:52 am Title: Chapter 9
awwwwwwwwwwwwwwww!!!!
update sooooon!!
xoxox
Date: 05/02/08 09:27 am Title: Chapter 1
it is just soooooooo good xP
wonder what s tom gonna do to bill
Date: 05/02/08 03:18 am Title: Chapter 7
wow. i like this so far. n__n
moar. :]
Date: 05/02/08 12:09 am Title: Chapter 8
You said this was based on a dream?*.* Then I want to have your dreams too!! So unfair!><
This story is so good, and how you writes it and all...^^ I envy you....
But now it's bedtime, so if you update more now, I'll have to read it when I wake up...T.T I want to read more....
Author's Response: haha you don't want to have my dreams. i'm totally nutso, so not all of them are nice ones about tom and bill. hehe ^ ^rnrni'm kinda running out of imagination juice, so it might take a bit longer before i can think of what to do next...
Date: 05/01/08 11:37 pm Title: Chapter 7
wow...i really like where you've taken this.
all i did was give you the first paragraph and a brief backstory about two kingdoms, and you turned it into this gorgeous masterpiece.
i salute you.
i really don't deserve as much credit as you do :)
keep going! Bill is mean, but so cute! Gah!
Author's Response: hehe thanks. hey, what you contributed was important. the first paragraph was so cute. and i guess it drew lots of readers into the story. :)
Date: 05/01/08 10:36 pm Title: Chapter 7
I'm in love with the story!^^ Even though I almost figured the whole plot out pretty early, -chapter two actually xD But that ending were cruel!*_*
Author's Response: hehe, you mean about bill being a double-crosser? bill is too pretty and smart to let himself be captured so easily. hehe. :)
Date: 05/01/08 09:08 pm Title: Chapter 7
I can't say I'm supprised that Bill did that but I don't think he was counting on feeling the way he did. Are they ever going to realize they're brothers? How did Tom get there before he did. What does he think of Bill's world? Don't let him stay mad for long. I love how many time's you've updated today btw. Keep it up if you can!
Date: 05/01/08 08:23 pm Title: Chapter 6
hey this is really good! I'm so surprised it hasn't got more reviews
Date: 05/01/08 06:56 pm Title: Chapter 5
I like the plot, man. Very original.
Author's Response: haha thanks, um, man! :) rni attribute it to my own insanity.
Date: 05/01/08 06:25 pm Title: Chapter 5
Oh yeah!! They kissed^-^
But what's going to happend next??
Please write another chapter soon, okay?? I really like this story^^)
Love Liebetub^-^
Author's Response: aww thanks :)
Date: 05/01/08 04:52 pm Title: Chapter 4
nooooo horrible man!!!
update soooon!!
xoxox
Date: 05/01/08 04:40 pm Title: Chapter 2
awwwww!!
update sooooon!!
xoxox
Date: 05/01/08 04:15 pm Title: Chapter 2
That was quickly^^
Keep going!
Author's Response: thanks :)
Date: 05/01/08 04:10 pm Title: Chapter 2
Woah, that update came soon...oO
Author's Response: hehe. i had a short dream about tom and bill last night (get your mind out of the gutter;) ) and this story popped into my head. i'm just spilling it all out now before i forget any of it. rnthanks for reading and reviewing :)
Date: 05/01/08 04:00 pm Title: Chapter 1
I loved the start!^^ It's so interesting, and I really want to read more! Prince Bill seems so hot :3 Hihi
Update soon!^^
Date: 05/01/08 03:47 pm Title: Chapter 1
OOohhh, Prince Bill. I like the sound of that! x3
Interesting beginning you have here; I'll have to continue reading it. well, I would, but you'd have to update. which you WILL, or else...!!
:P jk
update soon, though!