Date: 05/14/08 12:23 pm Title: Chapter 1
I loved this story... :)
Date: 05/13/08 04:43 am Title: Epilogue
JEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEJ!!!!!!
Date: 05/12/08 04:45 pm Title: Epilogue
aw, that was a beautiful ending :)
Date: 05/12/08 01:48 am Title: Chapter 12
WHy in almost every long story does one of the twins die!??? so sad that bill has to die now! btw i loved it!, just not when he dies!
Date: 05/07/08 02:42 pm Title: Chapter 12
Oh god! that was like soo beautiful and soo sad :')
Date: 05/05/08 09:48 pm Title: Chapter 1
the end was so sweet :( poor tomi all alone. you need to write bill coming back, or i'll just be sad for the rest of my life.
i really like your drawing :)
great story.
Date: 05/05/08 09:47 pm Title: Chapter 1
come on, boxofhappy! i need something um...happy! hehehe. pull it out of your box XD.
this story was beautiful. i think the sad ending fits. but an epilogue wouldn't hurt :)
come on guys, we gotta convince her!
Date: 05/05/08 02:40 pm Title: Chapter 12
Nooooo!!!!
I did'nt want Bill to die!!! *cries*
Even tough, it was a beautiful ending, so romantic and hopeful, full of love^-^
Please write an up coming on this story!! I want to reade it when Bill comes back, was'nt that what you wrote^^)
So please continue^-^
Love Liebetub
Author's Response: hehe yeah, i've been thinking of adding an epilogue. writing bill's death was so hard :( rnif enough people ask, i'll write one :)
Date: 05/05/08 09:01 am Title: Chapter 12
awwwwwwwwwww!!! *cries*
this is lovely!!!
xoxox
Date: 05/04/08 06:04 pm Title: Chapter 12
OMG I cried so hard in the end....T.T! It was so sad I hoped Bill wasn't dying...:S Oh well... You're good at writing suspense and drama, and don't forget romance!^^
-Sorry for not reviewing on the other chapters, I've read them though, they're good as well, but my friend have been over so I was busy^^ But I feel so inspired by this story, I want to draw something from it myself!^^
-And you're a really good artist! Your drawing is so cuuute!^^
Thought about writing a sequel? I know the story fits to end there, but I want moooooooore!!!D:
Author's Response: i'd love to see your drawings! i am so honored to have inspired you :) if you send them i can add them to my story. rnrni've been thinking about writing an epilogue or something b/c writing the bill scene almost made ME cry -_- so we'll see :)rn
Date: 05/04/08 05:37 pm Title: Chapter 12
Oh! What a sad end! But I liked it, and I liked the emphisis on nature through out the story. It was a plus. You're a really good artist btw. I can't draw that well. Beautiful ending, sad but hopeful. Good job!
Date: 05/04/08 05:55 am Title: Chapter 1
omgosh. you drew that?! god you're amazing. :D
*worships*
Author's Response: heee. it's ok, i think. bill looks really girly XD
Date: 05/03/08 11:47 pm Title: Chapter 9
oh btw, i like the new scene you added. :)
it gives a wholeness to the story. bill and tom are so cute when they're getting along ^ ^
Author's Response: aww thanks :) i shoulda put the scene in earlier, but i was too busy trying to get the whole story out of my head :P
Date: 05/03/08 11:44 pm Title: Chapter 1
yarghh. what is this "THUNK"??
*pulls hair*
you can't! update now! oh, and i love the songs btw :) really add to the story.
Date: 05/03/08 11:33 pm Title: Chapter 11
You are such a liar! You so did not kill him! Right? ... Right? Ahhhhhh! I know nothing! Update! And Tom better be alive!
Author's Response: ...o.O can't reveal anything, sorry! :Drnoh i took your advice to have more scenes of bill and tom getting along and added one to ch 9. hope you like it :)
Date: 05/03/08 10:44 pm Title: Chapter 11
agh. the chapter combined with the song made me want to cry T_T
Date: 05/03/08 04:59 pm Title: Chapter 11
O_O noooooo.......
more soon!!
xoxox
Date: 05/03/08 04:43 pm Title: Chapter 10
awwwww!! =(
more soooon!!
xoxox
Date: 05/02/08 05:41 pm Title: Chapter 10
Who wanted them dead? I doubt it was Tom's adopted parents so it must be some third party. Right? And make them get along for goodness sakes! I liked them both so much better when they were sleeping together! They were both much happier and it improved the mood of the story in general! I'm not being critical btw, I'm just venting.
Author's Response: aww yeah. i wish they could be together too :( but there's a war going on, and they've been raised on different sides of it. oops i sound like tom. hehe. i want to try and make it happier without sacrificing reality. :P
Date: 05/02/08 02:46 pm Title: Chapter 9
You must be exausted but I'm super happy at how fast you're updating. This is moving a little fast but I like it that way. Can't they just find a way to work things out? Update soon.