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Reviewer: trlne Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/26/08 10:48 am Title: Chapter 5

O.o
You create feelings in me, by writing :O -I've never tried that before? You have to go on with this story, I love it!! :D:D

Author's Response: Wow, thank you so much! ;D

Reviewer: xEmoPenguinx Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/26/08 05:34 am Title: Chapter 5

ooooohhhh tomi.

*shakes head*

xD

Author's Response: ;D

Reviewer: hcimetter Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/26/08 12:54 am Title: Chapter 3

AHHHH, date! date! date! Sweet chappie! :D

Author's Response: Thanks! ;D

Reviewer: hcimetter Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/26/08 12:45 am Title: Chapter 2

LOL. omg poor Tom. how embarrassing! heh. btw , i thoroughly enjoyed all the scenes on Tumble and Fumble! They make me giggle so bad! ^^

Author's Response: Hihi, glad to hear that :)

Reviewer: hcimetter Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/26/08 12:34 am Title: Chapter 1

OMG. it's really cute so far! LOL at Mr. Tumble! ;P

Author's Response: Hehe, thanks :)

Reviewer: Tamara Kaulitz Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/25/08 10:49 pm Title: Chapter 5

Awww. Tomi's lil man is asleep again eh.
Im sure it'll come to its sense soon. Bill will do something so orgasmic it'll just have to. Well can tom (troy) do it for his pornos?

Author's Response: Tom/Troy gets pumped and viagra'd up in his movies :)

Reviewer: pppoynter Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/25/08 10:42 pm Title: Chapter 5

Aw. :( Poor Tomi and Billa.

BUT OMG! I LOVE IT!!!! :D It's so cute and original and I have never stumbled upon anything like this one before! Great job! You made my day with this one. :)

"Troy, the coy boy with a toy." HAHA. I really like Tom's porn-name. :D

Update soon! :D

PS. It's not a dumb plot! XD

Author's Response: Hahaha, thank you so much! :D And thanks for telling me that ^^

Reviewer: Jodine16 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/25/08 08:48 pm Title: Chapter 5

OH wow that is an interesting pairing. I'm totally eager to find out how Bill finds out about Tom. Are you going to put that in the next chapter? Can't wait to read more.

Author's Response: You'll see :) Thanks!!

Reviewer: Kablatow Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/25/08 08:07 pm Title: Chapter 1

LOL BAT BOY =D
♥!!

Author's Response: Hokeee!! ;D;D;D

Reviewer: SaraInes Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/25/08 07:14 pm Title: Chapter 5

He didn't tell him! This is gonna end badly.

Author's Response: Vielleicht :P

Reviewer: Scream-till you believe itx Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/25/08 06:03 pm Title: Chapter 5

Awww
Hmm but when will he tell him???
Write More Please!!

Author's Response: More will come soon :)

Reviewer: Deliciouskamepi Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/25/08 06:01 pm Title: Chapter 5

Tom fucked everything !

Say him to take viagra please >_< !
Or place a camera ,maybe that bring him exiting thing ?

MMMMh Bill should leave him XD

Author's Response: Wow, you're the first who thinks Bill should leave him xP

Reviewer: Chi Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/25/08 05:20 pm Title: Chapter 5

Great chapter :D Continue soon ;)

Author's Response: Thanks! :D

Reviewer: billliebttom Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/25/08 05:15 pm Title: Chapter 5

Uwahh... Poor Billa. D:

And damnit, Tomi! Tell that boy the truth. Anyways, lovely story! It's coming along nicely. C:

Author's Response: Thanks :)

Reviewer: liebetub Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/25/08 05:10 pm Title: Chapter 5

Poor little boys:(
Feel so sorry for the bouth of them...
but help Tom with his little member, so that Tom and Bill can fuck;)
Write another chapter soon okay^-^

Author's Response: New chapter will come asap :)

Reviewer: heiligsein Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/25/08 05:06 pm Title: Chapter 5

Tom should take some cyalis or viagra, or whatever he needs to get it on with Bill

Author's Response: Aye, he does.

Reviewer: Girle456 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/25/08 05:03 pm Title: Chapter 5

hehe i love it sooooo much billa was jelous lol nways update soon!!!!!!

Author's Response: Hehe :P Thanks.

Reviewer: guurgle Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/25/08 05:03 pm Title: Chapter 5

aww.... my first dedicationthingymajig *does happydance*
I really am loving this story... and I agree with RosePhantom.. the boy needs some Viagra...

Author's Response: Haha :P Thank you :D And so do I, but I think Tom doesn't want to... :O

Reviewer: Hekki Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/25/08 04:58 pm Title: Chapter 5

Tom's gonna have to tell Bill eventually. And he should quit his job. He can't possibly enjoy it!

Author's Response: I actually agree on that. Let's see what they'll do :)

Reviewer: RosePhantom Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/25/08 04:53 pm Title: Chapter 5

Tom needs some Viagra. ;(

Author's Response: Aye..

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