Date: 06/08/08 02:47 pm Title: Chapter 10
Jeeej! No more porn for Tom!!! Wooohooo!
You did great, as usual! xx
Author's Response: Ah, thank you!
Date: 06/08/08 02:44 pm Title: Chapter 10
^-^
Author's Response: xD
Date: 06/08/08 02:36 pm Title: Chapter 10
write sequel?`
*puppy-eyes*
Author's Response: Haha! What would it be about?
Date: 06/08/08 02:34 pm Title: Chapter 10
oh , a sex-scene xD
write more for gods sake! :D
(A)
Author's Response: Nein, this one is over
Date: 06/08/08 02:07 pm Title: Chapter 10
Oh Alva! I Loved it!
Perfect ending! Really!
Gaaaah! I wan't Bill in my tummy!
Author's Response: Aww, thank you! :D
Date: 06/08/08 01:56 pm Title: Chapter 10
YESSSSSSSSYESYESSSSSSSSSS!
oh fuck.
Author's Response: xD!!
Date: 06/08/08 01:56 pm Title: Chapter 10
Loved it! =)
Author's Response: Thanks!
Date: 06/08/08 01:31 pm Title: Chapter 10
neeeein, its..donnnee?? what about..their porn film!?!? xD awww, alva, you know i loved it.
Author's Response: Hehe, thank you! :)
Date: 06/08/08 01:19 pm Title: Chapter 10
I really enjoyed this story, to bad that it's over but I totally loved the ending.
" He was now one with him and they had shared something so deep, that it would be damn near impossible to break them apart. At least, very improbable."
I loved this line, how you give an other meaning to the title :-p
Well done, your a great writer and update one of your other stories if you can ;-)
Author's Response: Wow, that review right there put the biggest smile on my face! ;D Thank you!
Date: 06/08/08 01:15 pm Title: Chapter 10
fantastic end for a fantastic fic!! ;)
Author's Response: Aw, thank you!
Date: 06/08/08 01:12 pm Title: Chapter 10
wow this is amazing story and i like how Tom say his cock to solider, it's make me laugh :D
i love this ending and Tom quit his job for Bill, that's so sweet :P
Author's Response: Aw, thank you so much :D
Date: 06/08/08 01:11 pm Title: Chapter 10
lovely fic!
and that was steaming hot
Author's Response: Thank you! :3
Date: 06/08/08 01:03 pm Title: Chapter 10
Is it just me or do nearly all your fics end at about ten chapters?
I'm not in the mood to review at all, so forgive me if this is a rather shite one.
I just felt I had to.
As per usual it was fucking amazing.
I'm sure everyone else has told you that, if not they should have.
I loved it, don't know what else to say tbh.
Author's Response: I guess I'm not one for extremely long stories ;P Thanks for your review! It wasn't shitty, it made me happie! :)
Date: 06/08/08 01:03 pm Title: Chapter 10
I hate to say this in a review, but this is one typo that needs to be corrected!
And it was the greatest love of wall.
Other than that, YAY. Tom deleting the message was so awesome. And the sex was good too, of course. ;) Congratz on finishing! It was a joy to read. :)
Author's Response: Oh dear xD Thanks for telling me! I am too lazy sometimes :/ And thanks for your review! :D
Date: 06/08/08 01:00 pm Title: Chapter 10
Wow! Amazing chapter and amazing story! I enjoyed this a lot!
Author's Response: Thank you :)
Date: 06/08/08 01:00 pm Title: Chapter 10
Yay! *_* You made me so happy! (... although I was shocked to red "Completed: Yes" xD)
Author's Response: Aww :P It was heartbreaking to end, but you know.. It had to :)
Date: 06/08/08 12:57 pm Title: Chapter 10
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAWWWWWWWWWWWW DAVID IS COOOOOOOOOOCK-SUKEEEEEER!
loved it!!!! ^^
Author's Response: Aye! xD Thank you! :D
Date: 06/08/08 12:56 pm Title: Chapter 10
wonderful.
just wonderful.
i loved it with every cell of my body.
it was sweet, and funny, and so so good.
and the sedx was just the right mix of hot and sweet.
i´m so happy that Tom deleted the messagee.
He has all he needs now that he has Bill.
Author's Response: Aww, thank you so much! And yes, when Tom has Bill, he needs nothing more ^^
Date: 06/08/08 12:55 pm Title: Chapter 10
awwww yay for tom!
Author's Response: ;D
Date: 06/08/08 12:52 pm Title: Chapter 10
hahaaaaaaaaaa oh my alva, that was great
I just loved how you put everything together so nicely again!
my favorite part; the woman in the park saying that they should stop kissing OMG xD so fun, I can imagine Bill blushing and Tom smirking cockily ,p
thanks for writing this alva, Tom as a porn star really is too good to miss out on ,)
Author's Response: Aww! Thank you so much! Means the world!! :D <3<3