Date: 06/11/08 05:09 am Title: Chapter 3 As we want to be
I think you played out this scene perfectly. I didn't feel like it was forced at all and I like how well it flowed. :)
Author's Response: oh my God, thank you so much! that really made me smile so bad!
Date: 06/09/08 12:54 pm Title: As we became
-explodes- I loved it. And there was rimming. -drools- Awesome story. Not a very coherent review but oh well...
Author's Response: what on earth is 'rimming' ? ah well, I'm taking it as a compliment ,) thank you so much girl <3
Date: 06/08/08 05:54 pm Title: As we became
Once again you've delivered a wonderful story -- endless thank yous!
Author's Response: and thank you for reviewing this, there is no way I could have done this without support :)
Date: 06/08/08 05:45 pm Title: Chapter 7 As it was always meant to be
This chapter was pure love... It wasn't cheesy, it wasn't corny, it was simply beautiful and so sweet, I wanted to cry.
Author's Response: thank you so so so so so so much !!!!!!! man that meant a lot to me <3
Date: 06/06/08 10:03 am Title: As we became
♥
Author's Response: love :)
Date: 06/05/08 04:01 pm Title: As we became
What a pleasurabe, fitting and satisfying ending, my biggest and meanest congrats :D and yes, I'd be up for a sequel anytime ;P
Author's Response: hihi thank you so much, it really means a lot to me! *hugs* ~Luce
Date: 06/05/08 02:04 pm Title: As we became
Lucy darling! This was the perfect ending! I'm so happy you updated so soon. I came home and went on line, not really expecting you to have updated yet and here it was! You made this day good! I'm all for a sequel but not until you finish in the Attic! I'm so hooked on that that I almost want to tell you you're not allowed to write anything else! But you'd get tired of it so do whatever you want. I love how this chapter cleared everything up for the peope who were in the dark about some stuff (not me, we cleared that up last week) ;)
This was a great ending. I'm not really sure what else to say. You're brilliant never stop writing?
Talk to you soon!
Author's Response: awww Queeny <3 thank you girl! oh and about In The Attic, I'm so wrapped up in that story so I could probably write it without break, but I have The Kaulitz Residence to write and I also should make another chap to my Vamp fic, but that's not prioritated above that one! God I'm in love with itA xD hopefully, I will never stop writing ,) that would just make my life plain boring! Lots of Love, Luce
Date: 06/05/08 11:53 am Title: As we became
awww, this is amazingly sweet. So beautiful. I felt all warm and happy for them. Thank you for the lovely ending.
Author's Response: and thank you for a lovely review, means the world to me :)
Date: 06/05/08 11:02 am Title: As we became
Absolutely beautiful!
Author's Response: Thank you!
Date: 06/05/08 10:13 am Title: As we became
HI! aww i love this story soo much!!
nooo... the end!!:( hihi
well it was great and sweet the whole time!
i would love to read a sequel :)
well..take care! write more! bye
*gives u kisses and hugs* :D:D
Author's Response: *hugs and kisses back* thanks a lot girl, it made me smile :) there might be a sequel sometime in the future! :)
Date: 06/05/08 09:38 am Title: As we became
It's sad to reach the end, but this was heartwarming and makes your belly feel fuzzy, sweet, tender and delicate just like the rest of the story. Thank you once again :)
Author's Response: thanks Saol, you've been reviewing me all along and it really helps me and encourages me a lot! so, lots of hugs and kisses, Lucy
Date: 06/05/08 09:27 am Title: As we became
that really does SUCK!
this story is like, one of the best I've ever read.
so much emotion, and quite hott, too ;]
a sequel would be so cool,
or really, anything else you write.
I worship you. hahaha [:
♥
Author's Response: awww *goes all heart eyed* thank you so much for this, it means a lot to me that you liked it and wow *blushes* praise ,) hope you'll like my other stories, maybe I'll make a sequel of this one day! love, Lucy
Date: 06/05/08 09:25 am Title: As we became
Sequel? *hope in dixxi's eyes*
Although I could live without it, the end was so good that there's no need to write more... But you always surprise your readers :P [you will surprise me for 100% because I can't really imagine what else you could write]
Have you already seen this reaction?:D
Firelucy + fluff + sex = dixxi sublimates n___n
The sex scene was hot. I like them making it from behind XD. But hey, they're The Kaulitz Twins, i love it however they make it:P
Am I perverted? [yes/no, mark the correct answer. try to mark yes and you're already raped ];-D]
I like when B&T don't know about their mutual feelings. They can do a lot of stupid & hot things XD. And when the story is written by such a good writer, Dixxi's in heaven ^^.
Heyyy you say that you like girls, and I like girls, too... *wiggles her eyebrows*
When I told my les friend about it, she was like "omfg, is it my fault? o____o" fault, fault... I don't think it's anything bad.
I will be buried in a jar instead of coffin, cause I melt everytime I read your stories. That's for sure.
buzi;*
Author's Response: izaaaaaaaaaa xD omg ! I was thinking a sequel of Bill and Tom telling the Gs and maybe their mother (very emotional of course) but it's far off in the future cus I'm guessing some people wants me to continue In The Attic (just a hunch) the kaulitz twin's could do it upside down and it would still be damn hot...wait, is that a plot bunny? o.O *tries to mark 'yes' cus that's what it says on my form* thank you so much Iza! hahaaaaaaa does that friend of yours by any chance think a LOT about herselves? I mean seriously, just because we like girls dosn't mean we're gonna jump just anybody! ,) Lots Of Love, Luce (LoLL)
Date: 06/05/08 09:23 am Title: As we became
"Can I make love to you forever?” guh, that's beautiful.
Great chapter.
Author's Response: hihi thanks :) makes me smile
Date: 06/05/08 09:19 am Title: As we became
God, Lucy, you are AMAZING.
This was a great, wonderful, beautiful, AWESOME ride. For sure. This is definitely one of my favourites of my favourites. XD. Wow. Damn. Again, the emotion you pump into this fic was just exhilarating.
Yes, I understand now, Bill's point of view, thank you for explaining it. XD. Very nais.
Wow. I just, god, i cant get over how very beautiful this whole fic was. *tears in eyes* I dont think anything will compare to it in the amount of emotion you have in every sentence.
Author's Response: O.O *blushes* ... *tries to make sentence* ... *fails* ... *blushes some more* ... OMG thank you a thousand times girl!!! seriously xD wow that is so great of you! shit, I'm just gonna go glow some now :) you just made this girl VERY happy! hugs, Luce
Date: 06/05/08 09:10 am Title: As we became
A perfect ending. Aww they were so blissfully happy together. Well, you know already how much I love your stories, but this one has been kinda special. A real heart warmer. Normally I'd be sad when a great story ends, but with this one I'm actually not. Because it's perfect, and it feels like that was the right place to stop, if you know what I mean. Just brilliant. XXXX
Author's Response: I know exactly what you mean girl! It's like at some pint the story just makes you content, the end is just peasfulyy put out there and axeptet. Did I get you right? :) thank you so much for this Rosy, it means a lot to me to see your reviews all around my stories, makes me feel like you care :) thank you! Love, luce
Date: 06/05/08 08:11 am Title: As we became
oh my.... *blushes*
you did great in this chapther! =*.*= so sexyyyyy
you describe it so ... okay..im not even say. you know already..
you're the best bla bla, no one writes like u do bla bla bla this makes me horny bla...
u know that already xP
i can only say one thing: u own my respect oh Queen of all Queens.
lol
Author's Response: HAHAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA *points at you* you SAID it !!! you said it makes you HORNY, not fuckin FRUSTRATED xD xD xD hihiiiiiiii that's when I know my story is good, when andy slips up and shows her real emotions...you perverted little girl (sais the girl who wrights twincest every day) thanksies Andy :) love ya <3
Date: 06/05/08 07:34 am Title: As we became
You.. you horribly talented writer! How could you do this to me? ;_; This chapter was so smexy and I can't breath because it was so damn intense and sugary sweet and and.. JUST PLEASE MAKE A SEQUEL?! D: Waah~, I can't stop crying! ;_; Thank you for this amazing story and God bless you (He better!) just thank youuu~ TT_TT I really dunno what to say anymore, 'cus this chapter which screams awesomeness got my tongue. Just.. make a sequel oki? Pwease~ ;w; Hugs from Finland!
Author's Response: hihihi Oh my god :) thank you so much! *wipes your tears* sorry bout that ,) hmm and I'm not so sure of God will bless me considering I'm writing porn...twincestual porn xD but Satan might ,) thank you so much for this, I will absolutely make a sequel, but it's gonna be some time into the future though, gotta focus on In The Attic at the moment :) hugs and kisses, Lucy
Date: 06/05/08 07:13 am Title: As we became
It says it's not finished.
This was pure love!
How innocent Bill was and how Tom treat him with so much care made my heart melt.
I can't find the words to tell you how great this is.
I can't find the words to tell you how good of an author you are.
Well, I can, but they wouldn't begin to describe what I think.
It was just woow!
Author's Response: shit, yeah I noticed that...fixed! :) thanks. my god you're spoiling me xD and I love you oh so much for it! I guess your like the twins, heart speaks clearer words than we ever could ,) thank you, love Luce
Date: 06/05/08 05:54 am Title: As we became
Oh really?! I don't know where a sequel would go with this. That doesn't mean I don't absolutely love the thought though! So you put it into my head now, I think you're obligated to write a sequel. XD Well, you don't have to I guess. *sigh* But I'd really like to see what you'd do with a sequel. =D Anyway excuse me. I'm a little loopy right now. I have a final exam tomorrow...today, and I've been up studying. X_X Thought it was a good time for a break though. And what a lovely break it was. Great update, Lucy. =]
Author's Response: oh hunny, you make me smile so bad! :) the sequel would probably senter around Tom and Bill's issues with telling the Gs and maybe their mother, but I'm not quite sure yet. And anyway, I'm gonna write a lot of other stories before I wright that one so it might take some time ,) awww *pets you* poor Summer, exam sucks! I'm glad I can be your breaktime buddy ,) thank you so much for reviewing everything I wright girl, you have no idea how much it means to me, lots of love, luce