Date: 08/20/08 03:46 pm Title: Chapter 1 As we were
I'm completely mesmorised by your description, this story and entire feeling it hover over my screen now.
You are a genius, thats all there is to it.
I mean it.
Author's Response: OO *blushes...then blushes some more...is blushing really REALLY bad* oh my God, thank you so, so, so much !!! God, that means so much to me !!!
Date: 08/16/08 10:18 pm Title: As we became
I just re-read this story and it was just as fucking amazing this time! I'm on the edge of my seat the entire story, loving every angsty and sweet second. Just perfect in every way.
Author's Response: *squeals* I LOVE it when people re-read and tell me, makes my stomach tingle with the knowledge that my fic is worth a second run ,) thanks you so, SO ,much !!!
Date: 08/12/08 07:17 pm Title: As we became
THIS.WAS.PERFECT.
Nothing less.
Now I can sleep really good tonight, thank you :-)
Author's Response: oh, thank you so much *heart eyes* love <3 luce
Date: 08/11/08 05:39 pm Title: Chapter 7 As it was always meant to be
Oh my god. I don't know whether I'm burning because of the hot, or melting because of the aww.
Author's Response: lol, that's a good thing right ,) thanksies darling
Date: 08/11/08 05:30 pm Title: As we became
only sex and dialog, you say? i say it's sweet and a perfect ending for our darlings. this has been a lovely read.
Author's Response: awww thank you so much girl, really happy you liked it !!!
Date: 07/28/08 03:05 pm Title: As we became
awwwwwwwww. this was so amazing, the descriptions of tom's feelings were so rich, so beautiful...
i especially loved that description (a few chapters ago - maybe #6?) of bill's eyes and they were tom's stars. so sweet :P
*favorites this*
Author's Response: oooh, thank you so much. It means a lot to me that you take your time and review this, lots of love <3 luce
Date: 07/10/08 06:57 am Title: Chapter 1 As we were
Yesterday I just realized that I hadn't read the last two chapters of this WONDERFUL story. I don't know how I forgot it but my friends made me read all this other stuff and halfway through an extremly, bloody violent fic I was just like- Oh my god, I still got two chapters left of My little Brother! Jippiee :D! Heeeh, heeeh, and now i've read them, loved them and i'm totally depressed about the fact that it is over! And you won't write a sequel *looking very pissed off*. I'm sorry to say that i am too, well, modest? to review sex in any specific way... but, hrm, yeah, it was great. :D
Author's Response: okay, that just made me blush! you're too modest to review sex? oO what does that say about me for writing it? xD lol. anyways, thank you so much for reviewing, really happy you liked this (and remembered) hugs <3
Date: 06/21/08 06:47 pm Title: As we became
I promised you a long review and i shall try to give you one!
Sometimes in life, you acounter someting that is almost larger than life. i'm not saing that this is, but it remindes me of it anyway!
The art of writing isn't something one stumbles on everyday, but after reading this, i can only say this: You certenly have the gift!
You manages to write different kinds of fic's, all ranging from pure smut, via hillarious humor, and fluffy romance, to angsy hell! All i'm saying is, your future might not exlude a published novel or two!
This fic is of that kind that it's impossible to stop reading untill it's finiched. (so i'm glad i diden't come across it when you hadn't finiched writing it)
My mind is in a place of content happiness after reading this wonderfull, pacefull, happy, angsty and just soo very sweet fic!
I've said it before: I'm a sucker for tru romance!
In the end i think this slides in to second or third place of the fic's i've read so far, that is written by you! Not counting The Attic!
The sex is as always good, but it almost felt malplaced here. The fic didn't require sex to be compleate!
But gratuitus sex is always welcome ;)
Up untill the last chapter there were almost none dialog at all. Only Tom's thoughts broke the pattern of silence! It's rather unusual of you! And i liked it very much!
You must NOT write a sequel to this! it would be a sacrilege!
I'm probably the only one to think it,(i haven't read any of the other reviews) but this storie is finiched. There isn't anything more to be said about it. You may write something in the universe you created here, but the storieline is compleate, at least as i see it!
I'm rahter tired at the moment, so my thoughts on the subject might not be all that coherent!
If you are still reading this, (you might have become a bit bored and skipped to the next review, in witch case all this rambling is for nothing ) all i wanted to say realy, is this: I liked it!
Thank you so very much!
P.s: not very long after all... Sorry D.s
Author's Response: This was...how to you put it? divine! Your reviews have always made my heart flutter in the most wonderful of ways, but this was just pure bliss for me. I'm not very good at taking praise and this just kind of put me off guard, like it broke into me somehow and just flipped something over inside. And about the sex, I just wrote it as a scene into where I could put the upcoming thoughts, it seemed right that it would be meaningful in a way that wasn't actually abou the sex at all. And no, I saw the thing about the sequel as well, there will not be one. It would just not be possible for me to break out of this line of thought and emotion and I on't think I could fit that into a proper plot anymore, it'sa like you said, it is finnished! and how could I ever be bored by you? you seem to think in the lines of my own mind and it is so extreemly sweet of you to allow me to see what you think hen reading my stories! Much love for this very lond review and those very sweet words, yours luce
Date: 06/21/08 03:47 pm Title: Chapter 3 As we want to be
Unbeliveble perfection!
Only one scene, yes, but what a scene it IS!!!!
I can't find words to praise this enough!
Thank you seem so... meagre!
I will give you a very long review at the end of chapter 8!
Author's Response: 'Unbelivable perfection' that is like...the nicest thing anyone has ever said to me, this is where I get what you're saying about 'thank you' not being quite enough, I don't know how to thank you for this! it just blew my mind away <3
Date: 06/21/08 03:22 pm Title: Chapter 2 As we are
OMG's!!!!!! This is SOO beautiful!!!
The angst is almost tangeble but still not overbaring! Tom realy LOVES his twin!
This storie will be fantastic, even if it dosen't have a happy ending!
You realy should consider a carer in writing!!!
Thank you for giving so freele of your creations!!!
I love it!
Author's Response: OO <- those are my eyes now! and if you could picture a deep vine red than that would be my cheeks! holy HELL you're spoiling me! and lord only knows I'm enjoying every moment of it xD God, thank you so so so much for this! see, I can't even sum up a decent reply cus you're taking my breath away! love <3
Date: 06/21/08 03:03 pm Title: Chapter 1 As we were
WOW! Amazing! I don't think it's depressive though...
Wow!!! If this is how the rest of the fic is, then this will be the best so far...
A very slow, quiet, sweet, happy chapter!Nothing realy happend but what did happen were FANTASTIC!!!!
Tom's love for Bill realy were shining thruh!
Thank you!
Author's Response: oh I'm so happy that you found your way to this one! it was a fic that meant a lot to me and hearing your oppinion on it is just great! haha and yes, the rest of the fic will be much of the same thing, maybe a little more action some places though ,) thank you for this !
Date: 06/19/08 07:33 am Title: As we became
+coughyouturdmeoncough!+
^^thanks for the waffles hun!
loved this story!
They were both longing for the same thing, but were afraid of hurting each other. In the end they found their love though^^ so SWEET!
thanks for writhing this story:)
greetz from Betje:D
Author's Response: hahaaaaaa xD thank you so much girl, it meant a lot to me that you liked this one! thank you so much for reviewing and I'm sorry I *coughturnedyouoncough* ,p
Date: 06/19/08 07:22 am Title: Chapter 7 As it was always meant to be
hot! smokin hot! ^^
Author's Response: hihi thanks ,)
Date: 06/19/08 04:22 am Title: Chapter 5 As it isn’t
this story is so sweet!
i wanna have waffles for breakfast too:D
Author's Response: *makes you waffles* thank you so much! <3
Date: 06/19/08 03:34 am Title: Chapter 3 As we want to be
0_o dude that was so,...
sensual.
everything going so slow, the thought in their heads, the way you write is simple brilliant!
Author's Response: hihi thanks ,) I'm so happy you like it! means a lot to me!
Date: 06/18/08 08:29 pm Title: Chapter 2 As we are
aww it keeps getting sweeter and sweeter!
Author's Response: aw, me is happy <3
Date: 06/18/08 07:48 pm Title: Chapter 1 As we were
awwww cutest first chapter i've ever read i think^^ Love it!!
Author's Response: hihi thanks ,)
Date: 06/13/08 06:42 pm Title: Chapter 3 As we want to be
tsk tsk tsk
Tomi scared billa, nuh, XD it's hard to keep control when you know that you're in love, and, well it's pretty difficult XDD I know that!! and very well
Author's Response: oh thank you so much, means a lot to me that you liked my story ,)
Date: 06/11/08 05:51 pm Title: Chapter 1 As we were
I just start to love the story with this chapter, it's like an impossible love, so far that you can touch it, if you understand me.
I love it!!!
Author's Response: oh thank you so much, that was really poetic of you .)
Date: 06/11/08 05:34 am Title: As we became
That was agonizingly beautiful. Every blurb at the beginning and end of the chapter was so perfectly crafted. I read this fic in one sitting and I have to tell you: I love it :) You are very poetic with your writing.
Author's Response: oh wow, you just love to spoil me don't you ,) and I love you for it hun! I'm so glad you liked my story, it was a pleaure to write that's for sure <3 *hugs*