Date: 05/04/08 03:35 pm Title: Chapter 2 As we are
Yah, I want to make you happy if you want to make me happy! :D
This is very nice :) I like that touchy-feely Tom. It's quite rarely when you bump into that kind of Tom-character in Fictions.
And in other ways this is pretty unique. For example that sweet, fluffish relationship between the brothers... Well you can read about that kind of stuff once in a while, but here, I think, it just feels different. Very well written, and somehow you can keep it still realistic. (As realistic as fiction can be kept :D) Hopefully you get what I meant by that.
But, thanks for great story! You really do great job. (That's not too big suprise, though. If I remember right, I've added you to my "Favourite Authors" list :D)
So I'd be very glad if you continue soon ^^
Whit love,
Gry
P.S. I love it how you make Bill so innocent!
P.S.2. Oh, and what I meant by that "if you make me happy" thing: I'd really prefer happy ending in this story! :D
Author's Response: oh my god, you are just too sweet to me :) I have a tendency of writing Tom a little more fluffy than he appares to be ;) it's just how I like him. This really made me happy girl, it meant the world to me, and I'll try and give you the ending you want, but the question still remains, what makes them both happy ?
Date: 05/04/08 02:43 pm Title: Chapter 2 As we are
you make us happy dear lucy with your marvellous stories.
keep going one of your miracles and make Tomi happy ...
of course you know how perfect do this:)
love you
Author's Response: aw *blushes* you spoil me :) love it, thank you so much
Date: 05/04/08 02:18 pm Title: Chapter 2 As we are
Aw, it's making me so sad for Tomi but I love this!
Author's Response: I know, poor Tomi, thanks :)
Date: 05/04/08 02:08 pm Title: Chapter 2 As we are
awww this is so cute and make me heart melt
update soon :)
Author's Response: thank you so much, I promise to do so as soon as I can !
Date: 05/04/08 02:06 pm Title: Chapter 2 As we are
T_______T the last sentence was really heart-crushing.
Haha i am dumb xD i didn't read whose story it is, and when i was reading second chapter i thought "hmm... this fluff smells like Firelucy..." XD
"When the car stopped the band was immediately welcomed with loud shrieks from the female fans hovering outside the doors."
Me reads: "welcomed with loud shreks from the female fans... WHAT? WHO WOULD WELCOME ANYBODY WITH A GREEN MONSTER? rotfl xD
Update soon, Firelucy ;* Diksi wants new chapter.
Can I call you Lucyna? [polish Lucy xD]
Author's Response: aw Diksi, you crack me up you know that love? *blushes* I have a fluff adiction, can't keep my fingers from writing it :) hahaaaaaaaaa to Shrek, seriously someone should do that some time, just to see what the boys thinks ;p corse you can call me Lucyna, that's really sweet <3 thanks again, this really means a lot to me !
Date: 05/04/08 01:59 pm Title: Chapter 2 As we are
Yet again I love you :) Please, update :)
Author's Response: thank you so much girl ;)
Date: 05/04/08 01:37 pm Title: Chapter 1 As we were
aw this story is soooooo cute
Author's Response: oh thank you so much :)
Date: 05/04/08 01:33 pm Title: Chapter 2 As we are
I love it! Its so beautiful! Please keep writing!
Author's Response: *blushes* promise I will !!!
Date: 05/04/08 01:31 pm Title: Chapter 2 As we are
Ok, now I've read it. This is quite the web you spinning my dear. I liked the puzzle peice comment, about them fitting together. It's a romanitic idea and it makes me think of my foavorite poem (extra points to you!) It seems like Bill's feeling something but is it b/c he actually might be able to love tom like tom loves him or is it b/c of how tom makes his body feel despite the protests of his mind? I wish you would update this one sooner but whatever you want sounds fine to me. Update soon!
Author's Response: hi Queen, I know the updates for this is rather slow, but I'm writing three stories at a time and I only have enought time for about one a day :) show me the poem some time will you? I'm trying to put in hints about Bill's emotions throughout this and you will most likely get to know more in the next chapter, see you soon darling :) love luce
Date: 05/04/08 01:25 pm Title: Chapter 2 As we are
Oh, that made my heart ache. It's so good Lucy. I think this another favourite! The scene when they were hugging was so beautiful. Tom is so sweet, I really feel for him.
Author's Response: this is where I blush right? oh darn *blushes* thank you so much Emma, your opinion really menas a lot to me and it's so nice of you to review my stories :)
Date: 05/04/08 01:20 pm Title: Chapter 2 As we are
You sure just made me happy.
So amazingly intense. Poor Tomi, how can he not see how badly Billa is aching for him as well o___0
Author's Response: haha now you don't know that darling ;) maybe Bill is just being naive, Tom is after all his big brother, thank you so much sweety :)
Date: 05/04/08 01:19 pm Title: Chapter 2 As we are
Yay! Lucy! You updated! I actually haven't read this chapter yet, I've just been dying to tell you a couple things, then I'll update properly. Ok, #1: Go see Iron Man. It wasn't really my type of movie but I really liked it and you MUST stay until the end of the credits, no matter what anyone else says, STAY UNTIL The END OF THE CREDITS!!!!!
#2: Have you read the story When in Doubt? It's been driving me insane! Talk about problems, That stories almost too much for me. Just wanted someone to complain about it to besides the author (I don't think they'll take it the right way).
Sorry if this is too personal. You're simply too nice to me. You can tell me to stop at any time.
Also congradulations. A couple of you stoires got awards. I don't know what the link is but I found it by accident and I was really happy for you.
Ok, going to read and review now...
Author's Response: gosh Queen, you know I just love making new friends and I can tell you're gonna be a good one ;D I LOVE when in doubt it's just seriously messing with my head and they are updating so fast *jealous* I partly feel like slapping Tom and partly feel like slapping Bill ;) so glad Lena is out of the picture though, she was a real bitch, I'm not to fond of het, but I can read it in that story :) what awards ??? I've only recieved e-mails about being nominated *is very happy* I don't know who did it, but it was just great :) Hope I'll see you around girl, you're totally too nice to me ;p thanks
Date: 05/04/08 01:03 pm Title: Chapter 1 As we were
I loved how loving this was, so gentle and sweet and just awww. Therefore I'm a bit scared with you mentioning it turned out depressive, as this just has the best fluff ingredients. It would work as a chapter-fic as well, just a personal opinion/wish that if it's going to be multi-chaptered with angst then maybe just narrow it down a bit and keep the fluff :D
Author's Response: well, I must admit that I'm conusing myself here ;) The comment about this turning out more depressive then I thought was because I didn't see all of Tom's thoughts coming before I had written them down already, it's his thoughts that were angsty, the action is just fluff :) thanks girl
Date: 05/04/08 12:48 pm Title: Chapter 2 As we are
Aww....thats so cute! I love this, i really hope you continue!!
And, its "break" not "brake". XD.
Author's Response: thanks
Date: 04/30/08 11:15 pm Title: Chapter 1 As we were
Heh...how WOULD Bill get dressed without Tom?
I like it so far. I would love to see more. I'm always happy to read new fic from you...and old fic from you. Okay, ANY fic from you! :-)
Author's Response: ooooooooh *blushes* great lord, thank you so much !!! haha I guess he would stay in bed ;p
Date: 04/30/08 02:35 pm Title: Chapter 1 As we were
awww^^
Tom is really so sweet in this one
Author's Response: thank you !!!
Date: 04/29/08 05:10 pm Title: Chapter 1 As we were
if you edited it some and posted it as a one-shot I would probably beg you to not make it a one-shot XD so, I think you should definitely go on;)
Author's Response: haha I will definatly continue it as a story then :) thank you so much!
Date: 04/29/08 02:03 pm Title: Chapter 1 As we were
aaaaaaaaaw
LUCY!!!
I want more
no I need more
this is good
really good
I love angsty stuff ;)
Author's Response: Em *smiles like a madman* thank you girl, I'm so writing more !!!
Date: 04/29/08 01:35 pm Title: Chapter 1 As we were
Definitely write more! I wanna see when Bill finally cottons on ^^
Author's Response: hahaaaaaaaa by the looks of it, it might take a while ;)
Date: 04/29/08 01:18 pm Title: Chapter 1 As we were
Lucy! I was afriad you had gone on vacation or something! But here you are so life is good! I'm impressed you read my bio btw. I didn't think anyone would. Anyway, on the the important stuff, your wonderful new story. If you arn't in love w/ it just keep it short b/c I am. I like it better than the vampire one you wrote a little while ago (which you have yet to update btw). For all I care you could just write one more chapter but it had better end happily! It's a little sad but you could just have something overly convienient happen to make Bill realize he loves Tom too and they'd hook up and live happily ever after. Obviously I'm hoping you had something a little bit crazier in mind but I'll take what I can get. Personally I like these stories the best. Where one or both twins loves the other one but it takes a while for them to figure it out. It's better than starting in medias res where they've already established a reltionship and then a monky wrench gets thown in and shakes things up. Alright, I'm babbling, Update this story soon please.
Author's Response: oh my queen :) of course I read your bio, I do that to the people I care about to get to know who it is that I'm talking too !!! haha, ys I will update the vampire story, posibly tonight. And I'm thinking about doing this story a little longer, not too big, but just long enough to get all the feelings right and I also have some scenes that I really want to write! And about your babbling, LOVE IT !!! I don't know if you keep me saine or make me crazy, but eithe way it's doing magic to my writings :) so thank you queen, loves from luce