Date: 05/11/08 11:44 pm Title: Chapter 3 As we want to be
I'm really not good at giving two reviews to same story :D But I'll try.
It was great! I also think it was time for Tom losing his control. Sadly it ended that fast :( But in next chapter more something interesting, right? ;)
I was hoping they would kiss, but I quess you know better what's best for your story. And it probably would've been too early for that :D But I can always wish!
In this story it's funny (I mean positively, ofcourse) that though it's said quite many times that Bill is fragile etc and still I feel that Tom might be somehow even more fragile.
Dunno, does that make any sense? Well for me it does :D
By the way, you might have noticed that I really compliment about your Tom (story-Tom :D). But it's understandable, this is the best fanfic-Tom I've read of. Okay, I may not remember every single fic I've read, but I still think so. ^^
After this once again weird review I have to ask you to continue...ASAP! ;)
With love,
Gry
Author's Response: oh Gry, you melt my heart! I couldn't really have them any closer to kissing yet, I know it's frustrating, but I really love wriing it :) and yes, I'm trying very hard to make Tom fragile, I can't make him innocent (cus of his feelings obviously) but I needed something that would make him 'weak' in a way. *blushing* cus of the Tom comments, wow thanks :D I will continue as soon as I can find the time! promise
Date: 05/11/08 09:50 pm Title: Chapter 3 As we want to be
Oh my god. You literally had me holding my breath, and by the time Tomi lost control, I was shaking. So, so good. ::favorites::
Author's Response: * blushing BADLY* thanksies I really spent some time trying to get the anticipation just right and I'm very happy it worked out for you!
Date: 05/11/08 08:11 pm Title: Chapter 3 As we want to be
I think this is a very good story and I like that it is Tom that likes Bill more than he should unlike every other story when Bill likes Tom more.
Author's Response: I really wanted to try it out, how it would be to write Tom like that and it really means a lot to me that you like it! thank you
Date: 05/11/08 06:11 pm Title: Chapter 3 As we want to be
Ohhhh :O well... Bill should know sometime, dont you think? ;) more more more!
Author's Response: he's being really naive yes :) guess we'll have to wait and see
Date: 05/11/08 04:59 pm Title: Chapter 3 As we want to be
oh shit!
that was absolutly amazing^^
yeah I know, my vocabulary seems pretty small, but your stories tend to do that to me:D
oh, and btw you can call me Silje, that's my real name...just call myself Erica cuz it's cute and I hate my name XD
Author's Response: aw thank you darling, and yes, I'll call you silje :) I was lucky when it came to naming, but I really don't think your name is bad :) *hugs*
Date: 05/11/08 04:43 pm Title: Chapter 3 As we want to be
really cute
Author's Response: thanks :)
Date: 05/11/08 03:16 pm Title: Chapter 1 As we were
It sure is something I'd be interested in o.o more more more!
Author's Response: hihi thanksies !!!
Date: 05/11/08 03:06 pm Title: Chapter 3 As we want to be
Great job. That's what I think
Author's Response: hihi thanksies girl !!!
Date: 05/11/08 02:59 pm Title: Chapter 3 As we want to be
That was the best ff I have ever read:)
Author's Response: oh my GOD thank you, thank you, thank you !!!
Date: 05/11/08 02:44 pm Title: Chapter 3 As we want to be
oh Lucy my baby,how you can do that??
you capture my mind and soul with your stories.
my personal opinion is Tom must lose his control immediately.
Love your inspiration.
more sweetie more..
Author's Response: naw *blushes* thank you so much :) God you just made me sqeal worse than ever ;p thanksies *hugs you*
Date: 05/11/08 02:02 pm Title: Chapter 3 As we want to be
The detailness of tom's struggle and their contact is amazing. Tom lusting for bill and not getting him is something I love to see. But I hope they will proceed soon. ^^
Author's Response: oh thank you, that comment really made me happy cus I was working very hard on Tom's feelings on this :) and all in good time my dear ;)
Date: 05/11/08 01:39 pm Title: Chapter 3 As we want to be
*scream* UPDATE!!!PLEASE!!!XD
Author's Response: I will, when the time is right ;)
Date: 05/11/08 01:24 pm Title: Chapter 3 As we want to be
holy crap
...
is bill really that clueless?
I feel soo bad for Tom
but I would like to know what Bill thinks about this...he must have noticed that Tom sometimes looses control...
this fic somehow gets under my skin, and I cant stop thinking about it..
Author's Response: it gets under your skin? aw that is so sweet :) makes me smile! I'm trying to put in a paragraph here and there of Bill's thoughts and feelings, just small hints, I think there are about eight by now or something :) love ya Em *kisses*
Date: 05/11/08 01:06 pm Title: Chapter 3 As we want to be
Talk about some serious UST! This chater was very intense, I wish they both would just come through and confess, be honest with each other, as they clearly both want it.
Author's Response: I have no idea what UST means :p but I'm taking it as a compliment! so thank you!
Date: 05/11/08 01:04 pm Title: Chapter 3 As we want to be
that was good :D
can't wait for Tom lose his control~
Author's Response: he just did love ;) that was Tom loosing control! thanks
Date: 05/11/08 12:50 pm Title: Chapter 3 As we want to be
Good! It was time for Tom to loose control! xD It was seriously very good! Continue again soon! This story is great! :)
Author's Response: the time really did seem right :) thank you so much, I'll continue as soon as I can!
Date: 05/11/08 12:43 pm Title: Chapter 3 As we want to be
aww! I loved it! keep going! Don't stop! Poor Tom, I wish Bill would realize that Tom loves him as a lover and would fall in love with him or have the same feelings!
Author's Response: don't we all? :) thanksies, you really made me smile!!!
Date: 05/11/08 12:37 pm Title: Chapter 3 As we want to be
Ah. Oh my god. That was so beautiful. Ah. So very painful...and torturous. Ah. Gods. I wish i could get more of Bill's point of view, but i do like it only from Tom's. Ah. Man. That was a great, slow, and as i said, toruture-filled read. Ugh. Man. I think it even turned me on a bit. And that hasnt happened from reading porn in a really, really long time. ^^'
Author's Response: wow :) longest review I've recieved from you so far :D I'm leaving Bill-point hints all over th chapters! there are quite a few of them. Maybe it's cus this really wasn't porn love ;p
Date: 05/11/08 12:37 pm Title: Chapter 3 As we want to be
GREAT!!! mmmm sooo Hot!! i'd like to know what are bill's feelings...i mean is he that inocent??...well i hope you continue soon!! XDXD bye *kiss*
Author's Response: I'm leaving hints about Bill's feelings throughout the chapters! but there will be more of them. Thank you so much girl *hugs*
Date: 05/11/08 12:30 pm Title: Chapter 3 As we want to be
OMG, I really think that Tom cannot control himself for a long time.. :P :D
It's great how you describe the inner struggle of Tom :)
Author's Response: thank you so much, I speant a great deal of time in getting Tom's feelings just right so it means a lot to me to hear that !