Date: 05/18/08 06:34 pm Title: Chapter 4 As it is
Maybe Bill feels freaked out because he likes it...I don't know. This fic is interesting because it's diferent from the other ones. Bill doesn't feel the same right away and knows that it's wrong.
Congrats ;)
*hugs*
Author's Response: thank you so much darling, it really means the world to me to get great reviews like this one :) *hugs back*
Date: 05/18/08 04:27 pm Title: Chapter 4 As it is
YOU BETTER UPDATE SOON OR I WILL BEAT YOU UP!
I want to know ! I want to know if Bill have feelings for his brother. aaaaghhhhhh how could you end there? That's unfair. buubububububu TT_TT
OK now I stop complaining cause it was very very very good chapter and it was worth waiting. [update took you ages, though... for me every day of waiting is like... three years!]
i am being a bitch. sorry x_x i can't help it, maybe it's PMS :D i enjoyed this chapter. I hope that next will be longer and you'll update soon.
buzi, Lucynko Lucyneczko Lucysiu;*
Author's Response: eeeeeeeeek *runns to hide* I'm so sorry for the late update and I'm sad to announce that the next one will take some time as well :( school is bitching me around at the moment. I can perhaps try to make next chapter longer and maybe contain more then one single scene (sorry bout that by the way) and about Bill...you'll see ;)
Date: 05/18/08 03:43 pm Title: Chapter 4 As it is
I feel so bad for the both of them. Both of them are so stretched thinly, emotionally, there has to be a breaking point eventually yes? They need a happy ending :(
Author's Response: a breaking point is inventiable, but I'm not quite sure when it will be. As for the happy ending...only time will tell I guess :) thank you *hugs*
Date: 05/18/08 03:14 pm Title: Chapter 4 As it is
Lucy babe, always make me breathless...
i love Bill there, but i need him to understand his big brother's love.
come sweetie, give them together and closer.
you re genious, your writing way mesmerize me:)
Author's Response: oh christina *blushes in a millions shades of red* seriously you're spoiling me, and I love you for it ;) it really keeps me going to hear these kinds of things from people and it's so nice of you to review me. Thank you !
Date: 05/18/08 03:01 pm Title: Chapter 1 As we were
This story is AMAZING!!!
So so so cute! ^^
And adorable! Love it!!
Can't say much else!!
Except your're an AMAZING writer!! +HUGS+
Author's Response: *hugs you back* oh my God that is so nice of you, I'm smiling so bad right now :D
Date: 05/18/08 02:56 pm Title: Chapter 4 As it is
Yes it did! *dies to read more*
Author's Response: *will update more in a while to prevent you from dying* ;p
Date: 05/18/08 02:35 pm Title: Chapter 4 As it is
I really like most of your stories, but I feel that you have outdone yourself with this one. You already know it, but I'll say it again, I love it! And I can just say thank you for draining yourself over this, because it really paid off - strong emotions all over the place :)
Author's Response: thank you so much love, you have no idea how much it pleases me to hear you say that (you probably do considering I've told you before ;p) it is just one of the nicest gestures and it really makes me smile ! so thank you, this is worth draining oneself over :)
Date: 05/18/08 02:11 pm Title: Chapter 4 As it is
Hmm, I've just read it through again; I'm trying to think, what it might be that I missed. Bill seemed scared at the start. But I'm not sure if it was fear of what his brother was doing, or fear of his own reaction to it. It seemed that he didn't want Tom to wake up... Why would it be more pleasant when Tom was asleep... Is he thinking that Tom's actions are innocent, purely brotherly, whilst he's having thoughts that aren't? Is he having thoughts/dreams about his brother that he can't understand? This is so interesting Lucy; I can't wait for more insights ;)
Author's Response: ooooh *squeals* you're getting really close Emma :) but not quite ;p it is soooooo extreemly fun to write when I get such nice coments and to see that people actually give their time to ponder on what's going on is just great! hope I can satisfie some of your questions in the next chapter, and maybe even reveal what everyone's missing out on ;p
Date: 05/18/08 01:49 pm Title: Chapter 4 As it is
Aw, this story is so adorable and saddening. I mean, Tom struggling to keep his control over his feelings for Bill and still keep that physical closeness then Bill not even understanding the nature of Tom's 'mishaps' and then thinking Tom is still innocent in the things he's done that made Bill cry. Its just so ah, I can't even think of a word to describe it, so I am just going to sit here and wait for the next installment.
Author's Response: oh my, thank you darling, that just made my heart melt ! it's so nic to see how people understand the boys' relationship, makes me happy :) I'm so grateful that you reviewd cus it makes the writing easier to know that someone reads the story :)
Date: 05/18/08 01:40 pm Title: Chapter 4 As it is
This was an amazing chapter this story is so well written and you can tell why it takes so long to update. Can't wait for the next chapter.
Author's Response: thank you so much love, it really means a lot to me that people review this, it makes it easier to write !
Date: 05/18/08 01:20 pm Title: Chapter 4 As it is
Worked well enough for me ! Bill Bill Bill, he can't help but be so adorable, I would not have even that much self-control as Tom is having. I hope they both realize that if it's love, it must be right and just go for it.
Author's Response: hmm I can't help but to picture Bill being...well, Bill and anyone trying to keep in control of the situation...nope, not gonna happen ;p thanks girl, means the world to me
Date: 05/18/08 01:18 pm Title: Chapter 4 As it is
Woow. I love it! it's so good!
Author's Response: thank you sooooo much !
Date: 05/18/08 01:17 pm Title: Chapter 4 As it is
Hey Luce! This was a great chapter. Really sad but super good. There is so much emotion in this story! You're a really good writer fyi. I feel so bad for the twins right now. They're both hurting. Bill's scared and doesn't know what he's feeling, and tom knows exactly what he's feeling and loves bill too much to act on it. Although I'd say you could solve all these problems by getting them or at least bill drunk, I'd advise against it b/c he'll regret it in the morning. Tom needs to get him to a point where he's comfortable enough to hear the truth. Does a little part of bill think about tom when he's dreaming? or when they arn't around each other? It's obvious bill's on tom's mind 24-7 but does it go both ways right now? Or two days ago? Before bill started getting too uncomfortable? Update soon. This is my favorite of your stories right now!
Author's Response: oh Queen, your spoiling me :) *all smiles* thank you !!! however great the image of drunk/horny Bill and lovesick tomi is, most likely not gonna happen, where's the hurt if their drunk huh ;p I tried to make this chapter more about Bill, but it seems no one really caught on to the biggest point of the chap, you got fairly close with your musings, but what I'm talking about is a bit bigger ;) maybe you'll see it later on. thank you so much Queen, I'm really feeding off of your reviews these times !
Date: 05/18/08 01:17 pm Title: Chapter 4 As it is
Aw, Bill is so cute; he's definitely got some feelings for Tom, but he's so confused and innocent. This chapter was nice; the insight into how Bill was feeling was interesting.
Tom loves Bill so much, that's clear. Can't wait to see what happens next; I'm loving this ;)
Author's Response: You've got Bill right there love :) alhough there is one single little thing you missed. I tried hiding a very important hint in Bill's actions, but it seemed I hid it too well as no one has been able to find it yet ;) thank you so much Emma, I don't need to tell you hom much this means to me, how much you mean to me :)
Date: 05/15/08 03:03 am Title: Chapter 3 As we want to be
woah Tom really did lose control there. Yeah, I reckon that was a good time for him to do that =D. That was sad in a fantastically written way (did that make any sense lol?). Awesome chapter. Can't wait for the next one hun.
Author's Response: oh stars :) *BIG smile* you're really good to me you know that! thank you so much, and don't worry, you make total sence to me and it makes my heart flutter, so thank you :)
Date: 05/12/08 11:39 pm Title: Chapter 3 As we want to be
OMG {[dies}} that was so good!! Took my breath away :D I love this fic to no end! Update soon before I lose it lol =P
Author's Response: oh, thank you so much :) it really means a lot to me!
Date: 05/12/08 11:09 pm Title: Chapter 2 As we are
AHHH!! Im so happy you are still doing this fic ^_^ {{claps hands}} this came out great!! I looove it!! {{runs off to read chapter 3}}
Author's Response: hihi, I have a habit of doing many fics at once, but I still havn't abanded any :) thanskies
Date: 05/12/08 10:56 am Title: Chapter 3 As we want to be
I actually want Tom to loose more control;) hehe:)
Loved it hunny^^D
Please keep up with the greate writing, okay?^-^
Love Liebetub
Author's Response: hihi I'll write more soon I promise, and who knows, maybe Tomi'll loose his preacious control yet again :) thanks sweety
Date: 05/12/08 05:04 am Title: Chapter 3 As we want to be
Okay I need to stop. I've read this chapter twice and I can't help but review again. It's just so...Wow.
The movements between them are so slow and delicious, and the descriptions of how Bill is so enticing and intoxicating to Tom are amazing. Each time I read it I could picture it clearly in my mind every single movement they made. More so this second time around since I wasn't shaking in excitment like the first time. XD
Anyway, I just thought, after I cleared my head from the first round on this chapter ;D, that you would like a better review of what I liked about it. And how I'll most likely obsess over this one chapter for the next few days until the impossible happens and I get tired of reading this one scene. Who knows, it could happen maybe most likely not. =D
Author's Response: aw Summers I love you so much for taking your time and reviewing me (twice) I have to admit I spent quite a lot of time trying to get this one scene just right and I'm so happy it came out in a way that pleases you! I feel like this is one of my better stories and I can't help, but to smile at the wat you let me know you like it too. Thank you a thousand times Summers, for being the sun that shines on my life (and this is where the drama queen goes yay!)
Date: 05/12/08 04:39 am Title: Chapter 3 As we want to be
Let's see...
Symptoms of Summer's Chapter Enjoyment:
Teary eyes
Hyperventilating
Gasping to some higher being as well as speaking to herself.
Yep I believe those were all present. I'm afraid I have the fever! O_O The must have more fever! >=D
Alright, you heard the imaginary doctor! Give me more of that hot stuff! ;D It's the only cure! I think this might be fatal! *_*
*eyes fill with hope that her plea will summon another chapter from the creative mind of firelucy*
Author's Response: oh my...*wraps Summers in close embrace and tries to calm down her...disease...* I know it is considered rude of me to laugh at such a foul thing as you being sick and especially when it was my doing in the first place, but I can not help it...you make me smile so much!