Date: 06/05/08 04:32 am Title: As we became
aww this is so swwet and melt my heart, i really really love this story
Author's Response: thank you so much *hugs* :)
Date: 06/05/08 04:30 am Title: As we became
this is a very wonderful fic.
Cheers to your beta! :D
Author's Response: hihi yes, cheers to my beta, she rocks! thank you so much! ,)
Date: 06/05/08 04:30 am Title: As we became
this is a very wonderful fic.
Cheers to your beta! :D
Author's Response: yes, cheers to my beta, she rocks! thank you so much! :)
Date: 06/05/08 04:05 am Title: As we became
Oh sweetie i almost melted inside.
You touched my heart again and again.
This adorable scene of their love action exploded my mind.
Tomi really really really loves his baby brother.
i really really really love my inspired writer.
And trust me , i dont want to pay back for my reviews.
i just mean every single word i ve wrote for your miracles.
Keep it up until the end, that i imagine will be amazing!!
Author's Response: *BLUSHING* when will it stop??? xD my god chris, you treat me so well! I had such a good time writing that scene and it touches me that you liked it so much! and here's pay back for your reviews *hugs and kisses and hugs and kisses and hugs and kisses* xD thank you so, so much for this chris! lots of love, luce
Date: 06/05/08 03:55 am Title: As we became
now Im angry
I had written an amazing comment, but when i tried posting it the site went down on mwe...*cries*
So..I ahve to try again
I think this was a perfect ending to a perfect story, you write so calmly, so bloissfully Lucy, even when its sex, you write as if it is the most common, normal meant-to-be thing in the whole wide world. I do think you are the best writer around here...
A little explanation on my part,. why have I not read a few of your fics? because I never read paranormal och altenate universe, its just no my thing.
Other then that i read all your fics, and I love every singel word. And this one is no exception, if you ever decide on a sequal you can count on me as your forever loyal reader!
hugs and kisses / Em
Author's Response: oh Em, you kill me with your reviews you know...and then I go to heaven :) poor baby *smacks site* don't do that to my Em! okay so, *BLUSHES* wow, that is so amazing to hear! and the thing about paranormal, I LOVE it xD but the stories I've written arn't extreemly wierd...just a little mind connection xD okay, so very wierd ,) there might just be a sequel for this sometime in the future, thank you so much Em, you mean the world to me you know that right? <3 love, luce
Date: 06/05/08 03:45 am Title: As we became
Aww!!! That was so adorably adorable xD Really, it made my heart melt.
"I can't just fuck you, Bill. I want to make love to you. Can I make love to you forever?" Favorite. Line. EVER.
The beginning of the story always makes me smile because Tom is all sweet and cuddly and Bill's all innocent. Well, not so innocent we found out, but still. This is really the best fluff I've ever read.
"I really, really love my little brother"... *tear* So beautiful.
Author's Response: Oh my *blushes* thank you so much Muse :) this means a lot to me! haha I love writing fluff ,) it's just something I can't get past! love you for this girl! hugs, lucy <3
Date: 06/05/08 03:37 am Title: As we became
What I meaned with dreamy is that they are so wrapped up in each other that they only see the other. It was like Tom couldn't believe that Bill was finaly his.It was like a dream. It just shouted out love ;-) I loved the ending but I must say that I was suprised that Bill felt more for his brother a long time before. It give the impression that Bill was just scared when Tom losted controle and the way he felt then was like he did like it and was scared because he did like it to much but that he wasn't very aware of what it was :-p You get were I want to go? It's kind of hard to explain it al in english :-p But I guess it's not logic to think like that, none can be that naieve ;-) I liked how he just misinterpret all the sins that Tom gave, he just thought that it was his fault. He was so blind, he made Tom believe that it hurt him. luckely then that Bill lost controle. Tom really, really love his little brother, doens't he ;-) I enjoyed this story all the way and all though the ending was perfect I wouldn't mind if you write a sequel to it ;-)Keep on writing girl *hugs*
Author's Response: okay, first of all; WOW *blushes*. second of all; you totally got my point xD Bill loved Tom, but was to scared to tell him. When Tom lost control Bill got scared of his own feelings and also of the fact that he was manipulating Tom (at least that's what he thought he was doing) :) and yes, Tomi really, really loves his little brother! <3 thank you so much for this kris. much love, Lucy
Date: 06/05/08 01:49 am Title: As we became
Beautiful, Luce. This is one of my favorites of your fics. You completely topped yourself on this one. :-)
Author's Response: *blushes* hihi thanks sweety, credits to you though, now they can enjoy without grammar mistakes glaring at them ,)
Date: 06/05/08 01:46 am Title: As we became
*claps* I enjoyed every bit of this story. Loved the descriptions, how you narrated it and how beautifully it was written. Great job!
Author's Response: oh my, thank you so much! it means a lot to me that you liked it :) *hugs and kisses* luce
Date: 06/03/08 12:16 am Title: Chapter 7 As it was always meant to be
Oh, I love this! Great fic!
Author's Response: thanksies :)
Date: 06/01/08 10:26 pm Title: Chapter 7 As it was always meant to be
Aww, there's nothing better than Tom and Bill love. Makes me feel all warm and fuzzy lol. I'm sad this story has to end next chapter, but I know your new story will be awesome! Please, please let this end perfect for them!!! XXX
Author's Response: oh thank you so much rosy :) and you're right, Bill and Tom love is the best! I really hope you'll like my new story as well! thanksies girl <3
Date: 06/01/08 10:02 pm Title: Chapter 7 As it was always meant to be
This story is so good I am sad that there is only one more chapter left. Bill was cute in this chapter. Can't wait for the next one.
Author's Response: thanksies girl, I will update as soon as I can :)
Date: 06/01/08 05:59 pm Title: Chapter 7 As it was always meant to be
I fucking love this!
I actually feel bad for swearing, but I needed to, to tell you how great it is.
So bloody sweet!
I didn't expect sex though, Bill still seems to innocent.
But it was just wooooow!
Author's Response: thank you! I tried to make the sex as innocent as Bill ;) *hugs*
Date: 06/01/08 05:44 pm Title: Chapter 7 As it was always meant to be
finally! they're together.!
you write so beautifully, it takes my breathe away.
no one else can write this the way you do!
I'm so sad that this story's almost over.
but hey, all good things come to an end.
♥
Author's Response: *blushes* oh thank you so much, what a sweet little review :) this really meant a lot to me girl! thanks *hugs you*
Date: 06/01/08 05:34 pm Title: Chapter 7 As it was always meant to be
Hm. Not that this wasnt INCREDIBLE. Because, believe me, it was. It was so very hawt. Really.
I'm just a little confused. At Bill. The whole story all we really got was Tom, and even though you sorta explained in that one chapter that Bill was becoming sexually aroused by Tom, you really didnt explain this very well. It came out of no where that "innocent naive Bill" was the one to instigate the sex. I know the point of the chapter was to show that Bill can surprise Tom, but i dont think it was in the right way. I thought Bill was...naive to Tom's ministrations. So, i guess i just dont quite understand.
But srsly, dont even let that get to you, because the sex was awesome. And i still LOVE this fic, because of the emotions you pump into it. Its, like i said, incredible.
Author's Response: thank you :) ah, your confusion will be answered in the next chapter love. You say you thought Bill was naive to Tom's ministrations, but that dosn't mean Bill can't feel anything himself does it? ;) it will all be explained though! thanks
Date: 06/01/08 03:39 pm Title: Chapter 7 As it was always meant to be
Luce..
Give me a break.
the truth is that a lot of stories have captured my heart or my mind, but what can i say for this..
You re a star of fics, this erotical scene is just a poem.!!!
So beautiful, so tender, so real.
I m pround of you babe.
Your well written story is my addiction
Author's Response: a poem..that is by far one of the most incredible things anyone has ever said to describe my writing! thank you so so so much Chris, you mean the world to me right now you know <3 *hugs you til you squeal*
Date: 06/01/08 02:28 pm Title: Chapter 7 As it was always meant to be
AWESOME!!!!
FIRELUCY ROCKS
Author's Response: hihi *blushes* thanks darling :)
Date: 06/01/08 01:59 pm Title: Chapter 7 As it was always meant to be
Loved it! Aw, I can't believe it's ending! Very awesome story =)
Author's Response: thanks a lot, it's been a fun journey ;p
Date: 06/01/08 01:26 pm Title: Chapter 7 As it was always meant to be
:O if there were words good enough to express how I feel about this I'd use them, but... I feel like words aren't even worth being used for such beauty. Just... oh so powerful.
Author's Response: *blushes and is awestrucken* THANK YOU, great God are you trying to kill me? I don't know if one can die from praise, but I'm pretty close now :) thank you so, so much!
Date: 06/01/08 01:08 pm Title: Chapter 6 As it can’t
*_______________________________* like... words can't express how good this feels to read.
Author's Response: oh, I'm so glad to hear! thank you girl :)