Date: 12/19/12 02:11 am Title: Chapter 1
Is there going to be more to this? The way it ends gives the impression that there will be or that there should be.
Date: 04/14/12 10:55 pm Title: Chapter 1
Oh Tom ... i'm disappointed. *facepalm*
Date: 06/19/09 05:58 pm Title: Chapter 1
OH MY GOD, I JUST...I JUST HATE TOM, THERE, I SAID IT, THIS FIC MADE ME HATE TOM
Date: 03/11/09 06:49 pm Title: Chapter 1
Ah, shit. How depressing.
Date: 12/24/08 09:09 am Title: Chapter 1
Awww! Poor Bill, and Tom! He really wanted to change, but he couldn't =(
Awesome story though!
Date: 09/23/08 12:37 am Title: Chapter 1
ah!! this was so beautiful and heartbreaking and tender. and then stupid tom ruins it!! i need more. i want him to regret this and not make this mistake ever again. You write great one shots but i would love to see a long story written by you, that would be quite the gift.
Date: 05/01/08 08:31 pm Title: Chapter 1
Uh. That end part was really weird.
but other than that, it was all right.
Date: 04/28/08 05:25 pm Title: Chapter 1
oh fuck, the ending was mean!!! xD
MEAN YOU!!!
everything was so fine..
well...that was different =)
Date: 04/28/08 04:48 pm Title: Chapter 1
Jerk! Poor Billa D: *gives him a endless hug* good job.
Next time, use these -> "bla" for dialogues ;)
Date: 04/28/08 04:34 pm Title: Chapter 1
I liked it until the end. It just sounds like Tom's back in a downward spiral again. It's depressing. But it's still a sweet story (with depressing aspects). If you felt so inclined you could totally write a sequal.
Date: 04/28/08 04:30 pm Title: Chapter 1
*hits tom and david* yay!!
Date: 04/28/08 04:16 pm Title: Chapter 1
This was written so beautifully, I really liked it. I think the ending might have lacked some of power the rest of the story had, but I still really enjoyed this story. I was listening to the Transformers soundtrack while I read, and it really fit well, hehe
Date: 04/28/08 04:00 pm Title: Chapter 1
HOLY...ejskkldmzk...*speechless*.
Beautifully written! Gosh...
Gasps at the end! Tom didn`t changed...
Date: 04/28/08 03:52 pm Title: Chapter 1
COME ON TOM! Crap, he forgot already? what a dick... poor Bill. You write this really well. I loved how you were so descrptive of all the feelings and thoughts and the back story and all that. Great Job!
Date: 04/28/08 03:44 pm Title: Chapter 1
Are you going to write a next chap! OMG, poor Tom. I think I can understand how he feels...
Date: 04/28/08 03:44 pm Title: Chapter 1
0MG!! This was written beautifully. Great job on thus. Soooo adorable. :-)