Date: 10/18/13 02:23 am Title: Chapter 1
Whoa. I just read this years after you published it, but it was great in a confusing and emotionally turbulent way. The whole story was full of emotional pain, and I'm not sure if I got the right ideas from it or not. I was thinking that Bill and Gustav still have feelings for each other but that Bill ran away from Gustav in favor of Tom because he was scared. But now, he's probably just as afraid and stuck at the same time, and it just seems like a lot of difficult feelings. Just fantastic.
Date: 01/02/09 11:21 am Title: Chapter 1
I'm so confused. I like it, but I'm confused. I confess I don't really know what's going on...
Date: 05/28/08 04:16 pm Title: Chapter 1
When you said this was full of issues, you weren't lying. I felt like Gustav was trying to exorcise a demon, and it happened to be in the form of pretty Bill. I didn't know who to feel sorrier for, and I love you for it. Great textured story.
