Date: 05/27/20 06:18 am Title: Chapter 1
this was a really good story!!
Date: 06/18/12 01:30 am Title: Chapter 1
I've only ever read one other fic where Bill was suicidal. That was on FanFiction.net, and it sucked XD This one was pretty good. I don't think Bill's so weak that his only reason for living is his brother, but if he WAS, and he thought Tom truly didn't care about him anymore... well, I can see your Bill doing something like this. Also, the way Tom saved him, and the way Bill confessed after being saved... amazing job. Really well done. There were a few spelling mistakes, and only one grammatical error, but you kept repeating it: When writing a story with dialogue, each time a different person speaks, it's a new paragraph. Sometimes you did that, and sometimes you didn't... ANYWAY! Well done, Kurotenshi-san ^-^ (Kurotenshi means Black angel... and "-san" is an honorific)
Date: 05/04/10 02:16 pm Title: Chapter 1
awww =D
so sweet!
i love what you did there!
so AMAZINGLY BEAUTIFULLY written xo
*hugs*
my fave line is >"You're my star too, Billa."
plus i loved the smut 2 ;)
Date: 04/22/10 06:01 pm Title: Chapter 1
cute...but they where soo inocent and then bill go:Fuck me :D=)
:))
still love it
Date: 09/01/09 07:04 pm Title: Chapter 1
Wow, that's certainly one of the most touching and nicest stories I've read. I'd love you to do another one or continue. You can really voice the passion. It's not all about the sex. I think I'm gonna recomend this one to my friend!
Date: 08/01/09 02:48 pm Title: Chapter 1
I hate it
Nah just kidding^^ I LOVE IT!
Like duh how could I not like such a sweet story with tommi on top of billa hihi! You rock! And keep rocking like this! or else you won't get Twinsie cake xD
XxJennifer
Date: 07/11/09 11:56 pm Title: Chapter 1
my god that was fuckin beautiful... *adds to fav*
Date: 06/16/09 04:10 am Title: Chapter 1
*sob* gorgeous!!!!!!!!!
Date: 05/12/09 12:18 pm Title: Chapter 1
Awwwwwww. i love this story!
Date: 02/09/09 05:42 am Title: Chapter 1
*squeal*!!! awwww!! amazing!:D
Date: 01/25/09 04:42 pm Title: Chapter 1
Fucking hell love it. This is fucking amazing. Omg, one of the best one-shots I readed =)
Date: 11/05/08 04:30 pm Title: Chapter 1
Aww. the emotional rollercoaster and the make-up sex! A perfect read for pervs like me!
Date: 10/08/08 02:18 pm Title: Chapter 1
I liked this alot, even though it broke my heart to see Bill so sad. *sigh* I'm glad Tom loves him back.
Date: 09/19/08 07:06 pm Title: Chapter 1
I love it! Such a sweet and emotional story. well done!
Date: 08/30/08 02:07 am Title: Chapter 1
absolutely adored it. you write just heartbreaking angst, but the love and tenderness is just as vivid. i love this piece. please keep up the great work. :)
Author's Response: danke! I love romance and fluff, but for some reason my best writing is angst. I'm glad you like it. I work really hard to make this type of writing as heart felt as possible and I'm glad it worked =)
Date: 08/07/08 01:09 pm Title: Chapter 1
Amazing! This story was just awesome Kudos. And cookies! And Tom/Bill smut. xD
Date: 08/04/08 09:07 am Title: Chapter 1
definitely love it! love it, love it, love it!!! :D
Date: 07/11/08 04:54 pm Title: Chapter 1
I like this story it's beautifully written and very sad, my favorite type of story so you just made my day, thank you *bows* ^_^
Author's Response: I'm so glad. I love it when my stories can make people feel something. Thank you for reading <3
Date: 06/24/08 01:51 am Title: Chapter 1
You had me crying throughout. Well, untill the kiss scene and after that-Then I had a goofy smile plastered on my face. You are a pretty amazing writer! More, Bitte? *Shows Pic of Bill pouting*