Date: 04/27/08 11:29 pm Title: Chapter 1
Wow... that was amazingly good. You hit all the right notes of angst and waffiness, AND kept them completely believably in character. Thank you!
Date: 04/27/08 11:20 pm Title: Chapter 1
loved it!!!
seriously, you are an amazing writer:D
Date: 04/27/08 11:20 pm Title: Chapter 1
Love It!!!!! I really loved the beginning, it was like titanic only better!
Date: 04/27/08 11:07 pm Title: Chapter 1
Wow.
That made me tear up a bit. This is really good.
Date: 04/27/08 10:41 pm Title: Chapter 1
Bill tried to turn his head to hide, but Tom grabbed his chin and forced him to look him in the face. “Why?”
Tears began to form in Bill’s eyes, and he whispered painfully, “Because you don’t need me.”
My absolute favorite part!! I can totally picture this in my head and not only is it sad but it's also beautiful!! I really wish that this wasn't just a one-shot, I would love to see this continued. ::looks hopeful??:: You have amazing talent, keep going with it!! :)