Date: 05/20/08 06:39 pm Title: Chapter 1
This is such a beautiful story. It's so sad yet also romantic. I really love this fic.
Date: 04/28/08 03:50 pm Title: Chapter 1
Awwwwwwwwwwwwww :) sweet.
Date: 04/28/08 03:24 pm Title: Chapter 1
It was so aaaaah!! XDD sorry, but I just want to go out and have a boyfriend like this Tom XD but, back to reality, I love your story!
Congratulations, it's so good!
Date: 04/28/08 03:20 pm Title: Chapter 1
omg I LOVE IT! :'D
It was a really wonderful piece of fiction (: the emotion was so real and I was on the edge of my chair the whole time reading. What would I do without fics like this? xD
Date: 04/28/08 03:02 pm Title: Chapter 1
Awsome!!! make a sequel;)
Date: 04/28/08 11:31 am Title: Chapter 1
That was awesome !!
I loved all of it xD
There was so much emotion and feeling in it even though it wasn't long.
I love the tattoo references and the title
Broken-Glass
xo
Date: 04/28/08 10:38 am Title: Chapter 1
Amazing! I nearly cried when Bill tried to kill himself.. Please continue writing, you clearly have a gift to do it! :)
Date: 04/28/08 09:45 am Title: Chapter 1
oh that's just a breathtaking story.
I m in tears now.
Please girl give us lot of these stories.
so emotional so tender so lovely like the twins'relationship.
bravo.
Date: 04/28/08 08:10 am Title: Chapter 1
It was excellent. Well done!
Date: 04/28/08 07:03 am Title: Chapter 1
I loved it! Angst, fluff and smut, my favourite combination ^_^
Date: 04/28/08 04:03 am Title: Chapter 1
I like it, it's so sweet!
Date: 04/28/08 02:10 am Title: Chapter 1
angsty fluff smut! YEY!
Date: 04/28/08 01:11 am Title: Chapter 1
wow, this was amazing. I really liked how you described everything with elecant detail. You made it less like a porno and more like a love story. Extrememly well written!
Date: 04/28/08 01:10 am Title: Chapter 1
Loved it! So angsty, so smutty, and so incredibly sweet. Perfect mix. I really look forward to reading more of your writing :)
Date: 04/28/08 12:05 am Title: Chapter 1
I don't like it. I certainly don't hate it. I LOVE IT!!!! I was so scared Bill was actually going to end up dead. Thank god!!! SOOOO SEXY btw!!
Date: 04/27/08 11:54 pm Title: Chapter 1
that was so great!
sad, sweet, and..HOTT!
lol XD
keep writing more of these!!
♥
Date: 04/27/08 11:38 pm Title: Chapter 1
it was cute :)
I like it very much.
Date: 04/27/08 11:35 pm Title: Chapter 1
I liked it, and before this i dont think i've read a suicidal!Bill, so it was different.
One note on grammar though, you dont need to capitalize a word in the middle of a sentence unless its a proper noun, like a person's name or a place. When you wrote "I'm in Love with you," you dont need to cap the L in love. Just thought i should let you know.
Other than that, i liked it. ^^