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Reviewer: duodeathstar Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/02/11 09:37 am Title: Chapter 23

omg you have to kee writing this. i wanna know what happened to jamie and hoot.

Reviewer: TH4everbaby Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/23/11 11:41 pm Title: Chapter 23

ugh i hate you lol, how dare you leave it at that lol

Reviewer: ingold Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/20/11 11:14 am Title: Chapter 23

Imádom!!! Lehet kérni folytatást!! Persze ha még feljársz ide. Ha nem, akkor magamban szomorkodom. Egy másik lány Magyarországból.

Reviewer: ThouShallRock Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 04/30/11 01:44 pm Title: Chapter 23

O.M.G.

I can't believe you left us hanging exactly when he was gonna spill!

Please come back and finish this? :(

Reviewer: diddlemouse Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 04/14/11 01:05 am Title: Chapter 23

wow..its been a year since I left my comment on here..I really hope that you havent left this story behind.

Reviewer: Elianna Eldari Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/13/11 04:43 pm Title: Chapter 23

I just started reading this,all in one go, and I really really really hope you finish it- its quite good, and on a CLIFFHANGER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: sarahyellow Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/02/11 12:51 am Title: Chapter 1

I'm re-reading this, and I guess I didn't really appreciate the way you characterized Both Bill, and Tom and his relationship with Bill before. I liked how you described Tom as loving and personally accepting of his little brother, but also that he knows how other people perceive Bill, and feels like he has to both apologize for him and protect him.

Reviewer: fuji Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/13/11 01:33 pm Title: Chapter 1

P.S. I see I have some catching up to do: first Keepers Universe, that I saved but was incomplete, and then the new things you wrote. :)))

Reviewer: fuji Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/13/11 01:20 pm Title: Chapter 23

Hi!!!!! OMG, I've found you! Just how stupid could I be? When you disappeared from the other community I never thought of checking here, though I've been a member for quite a while and you already were among my favourite authors... Oh well, blame it on age or on RL that gave me some bad moments...

I missed this story so much! I loved it, you know it, and I still do, I literally "drank" these two new chapters. The way you are able to describe Hoot's humanity and Bill's strength and healing power really touch my heart. And I'm glad to read that you want to end the story even though (if I remember correctly we discussed this once) the end of a story, whether you're the author or the reader, is always a bit sad, like a definitive goodbye.

May I ask you why you chose to leave the other comm and go on only here? It was easier there...

Reviewer: EmilyExorsist Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/09/11 01:04 pm Title: Chapter 23

I was sort of putting reading the final chapter off ;___; I don't want to say goodbye to Hoot and Bill just yet. I've become so attached to their characters over the course of reading this fic and wow, it's blown me away! Your writing is phenomenal and so detailed. You've created such a wonderful, believable world I could picture it so clearly every step of the way. God this fic is gorgeous. One of my favourites on the site :)

I am bursting to find out what happens in the rest of this story, even if it never made it to paper ^_^ I guess I'll email you soon :) Thanks so much for writing this, it was such an amazing read! Take care :)

Reviewer: EmilyExorsist Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/05/11 07:34 pm Title: Chapter 22

Ooh Hoot, I guess in the next chapter we're going to find out about his past ;__; I'm nervous but excited and I'm hoping both Bill and Hoot won't be too put out by anything that happened in Hoot's past. Oh God, I really don't know what to expect in this next chapter!

Reviewer: EmilyExorsist Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/05/11 04:15 pm Title: Chapter 21

First of all, WHOA that was so so sexy! I forgot to breathe through most of it xD I can't believe I'm not going to be able to read about their first time properly together! But this more than made up for it, it was gorgeous!

Second of all, asoidhsaiodhe I did not see that one coming! I can't believe Hoot has a criminal record! I hope we find out more about his past in the final two chapters I have left to read o__O God this fic, I hate how close I am to the end. It's so beautiful!

Reviewer: EmilyExorsist Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/05/11 03:24 pm Title: Chapter 20

Oh my God so much teasing in one chapter xD This was almost too much to handle! Man I loved it, it was beautiful and sexy and just Bill and Hoot! I can't get over these two, they're such a perfect couple ^_^

Reviewer: EmilyExorsist Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/05/11 01:31 pm Title: Chapter 19

Aw so so lovely! The idea of Bill and Hoot out in nature together, alone, naked, is almost too much to handle! I'm all *___* over this couple and god, they're just magnificent! Your writing is magnificent! I adore it ^_^

Reviewer: EmilyExorsist Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/03/11 06:39 pm Title: Chapter 18

Aw I love Rita and Tom, I never thought I'd say that about a Tom/OFC moment but they're so beautiful in this fic ^_^ This fic gets me again and again and I really can't get enough of it!

And Bo meeting Bill, well I really like Bo and I'm glad he and Bill got along, it was a fabulously written first encounter!

Reviewer: EmilyExorsist Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/03/11 06:02 pm Title: Chapter 17

Ooooh so where is Hoot taking him? Aw God this couple, they are just so magical! I want to watch every step in their relationship. Damn and it makes me want to have my ~own relationship, too. This is a love anyone would be lucky to experience!

Reviewer: EmilyExorsist Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/01/11 07:10 pm Title: Chapter 16

Oooh my God that was just so far beyond beautiful I don't even know! God I adored that, it was so sexy in such a magical way. I really am becoming addicted to this pairing. No, I've become addicted. All because of your writing, this fic is just so wonderful! I can't believe I'm coming to the end so soon .-.

Reviewer: EmilyExorsist Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/01/11 06:30 pm Title: Chapter 15

Oh man, I knew something like this was due. Poor Bill, god poor Bill. I hope Hoot will be able to kiss away the hurt in upcoming chapters. And you've promised smexing.. so maybe that might be able to help him, too? ;) God this fichas totally swept me up, I'm head over heels for it!

Reviewer: EmilyExorsist Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/01/11 05:21 pm Title: Chapter 14

Bill doesn't know what!? Oh man I'm burning with questions now xD I enjoyed meeting Bo, it was interesting and his character made me chuckle. I love how happy he was to see Hoot doing as well as he is with Bil ^_^ I can't wait for Bill to meet Bo :D

Reviewer: EmilyExorsist Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/01/11 04:39 pm Title: Chapter 13

Aw, aw aw I just adore Tom and Bill's twin relationship in this fic! I'm so used to reading twins as in twins together but this is just as wonderful and I love it! I love Tom's position as protective older brother and the fact that he and Hoot both take such wonderful care of Bill in this fic, aw it's so beautiful to read ^_^ I LOVED this chapter, it was so great :D

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