Date: 11/22/09 04:17 pm Title: Chapter 21
Oh, no! I'm not sure whether to applaud an excellent chapter or to lament the cliffhanger... so a little of both! Amazing chapter, you really sucked me into the story yet again. The ending is a perfectly horrible place to stop! I'll be waiting on the next update, almost literally holding my breath! ;)
Date: 11/22/09 02:58 pm Title: Chapter 21
didn't see that coming... oh-oh, seems like Bill's perfect boyfriend not so perfect after all, ha?
Date: 11/22/09 02:40 pm Title: Chapter 21
Oh nein! Oh, please update again soon so I know what is going to happen. Bill was trusting Hoot so much and I'm afraid this will completely destroy that! On a side note, I'm so glad you wrote about them using the toy. So freakin' hot! Loved that!
Date: 11/22/09 02:03 pm Title: Chapter 21
omg no wai how could you do that?!
update soon plz, i can't wait to find out what happens.
Date: 11/22/09 01:51 pm Title: Chapter 21
just wanted to say that i luv the new chap and in a paragraph you wrote that bill has a face that could of lauched a thousand ships and i was wondering if you ever thought of doing a crossover with troy bill as the one taken by paris or bill the cousin of paris and is the one taken to achilles and whatnot its just a thought but that would so be bloody wickked if you did the crossover or even do one with twilight bill going to forks and edward finds out that bill is his true mate and bella is just his singer and whatnot that would be bloody wickked to just these are just my thought and i think that you are a great writer and i luv your fics and i believe you are one my fav and thank you for writing your fics thanks laters
Date: 11/22/09 01:50 pm Title: Chapter 21
OH SHIT.
Well that was a slap in the face. It was all smooth and mellow and then BAM.
Does Hoot have a warrant? Body attachments?
-rips hair out-
Why must you tease us, woman?!?! Can't wait for the next update!
Date: 11/22/09 01:31 pm Title: Chapter 21
-“Sir, it seems you have a criminal record.”- WTF?
Really!
It's such a perfect, sweet and sexy chapter how can ... I mean I know as a writer you have to keep interested your readers, but this i'ts totally unpredictable! Maybe his past crimnal recodr involves his ex-boyfriend.
Date: 11/20/09 07:00 pm Title: Chapter 20
luved it please update does anyone know if it is possible for an author to do a crossover with the kaulitz's twins and troy or alexander or 300 because that would be so bloody wickked and it was just a thought
Date: 11/18/09 03:56 pm Title: Chapter 20
Oh god! what a cliffhanger! Please update soon!!
Again a great chapter, very sexy!
Date: 11/16/09 08:31 pm Title: Chapter 20
They need to wait util he's 18. Isn't it statutory rape before 18? Hoot is a gentleman, waiting. Even though his waiting is rooted in his fears and insecurities...
Date: 11/16/09 05:42 am Title: Chapter 20
very frustrated!! but you do deserve a review for that tension building hotness. i think you enjoy making us wait though. a bit too much. :P
Date: 11/14/09 11:00 am Title: Chapter 20
man, you are so mean to us!! its torture. good torture, but still. thanks for the super hot update!!!
Date: 11/14/09 04:26 am Title: Chapter 20
Oh GOD, please write the next chapter soon! For some reason, one guy using a toy on another is way hotter than them just fucking. Also, how big is Hoot supposed to be, down there? I'm trying to form a visual, but I just have no idea. You make him sound freakishly big sometimes. Super sexy chapter. And as always, sweet and intimate too.
Date: 11/14/09 01:16 am Title: Chapter 20
plain evil you are.
Date: 11/14/09 12:57 am Title: Chapter 20
Wow! how big is he? I'm afraid for Bill now. Don't hurt him Hoot.
Date: 11/13/09 09:22 pm Title: Chapter 20
Tease much? I know it'll be worth it but holy hell.
Date: 11/13/09 08:34 pm Title: Chapter 20
u want me to die of a heartattack D:
omg, at this pace bill is gonna end in 2 halfs
and hes gonna like it SOOOO much DX
Date: 11/13/09 07:11 pm Title: Chapter 20
Now I was not expecting that! I think because it seems like Bill would reject anything that wasn't Hoot, but then Bill just wants Hoot to love him, too. And if that means Hoot uses that first, AND they have the bonus of getting Bill more read, then yeah, I could see that.
No, I'm not really frustrated. I think your pace is good! That, uh...doesn't mean I'm not looking forward to the next chapter, because of course I am. :D
Date: 11/13/09 07:03 pm Title: Chapter 20
I'm not gonna say anything mean, because it'd be rude and you've done an awesome job with this story.
But WHY MUST YOU TEASE USSS?!
Ah, I'm sure it'll be worth the wait, though.
-exercising oatience-
Date: 11/13/09 04:34 pm Title: Chapter 20
Goodness, how big is Mr. Hoot anyway? Never mind Bill, honey, give him to me, lol. I’m over 18. Sadly, he’s besotted with Bill. Heck, I’m besotted with Bill. This is really a beautiful love story. I love the way you detail their thoughts, feelings and emotions. You are a truly gifted writer. I don’t mind the build up and am a very patient person cuz I know you will blow our minds when they finally make love. Thank you for this chapter and looking forward to the next update.
Author's Response: LOL Well, let's say Hoot could definitely be a port star, but he is not as big a monster as he sees himself to be. He's had some bad experiences which sort of distort his view of himself. As Bill said, he was only a bit bigger than that dildo...so I guess it will be fine. :D I just felt the need to clear this. Also, thank you so much for the praise. I'm so happy to read that you're enjoying the story.