Beautiful story, I love how you have potrayed the relationship between Bill and Hoot, as well as between Bill and Tom. I'm looking forwards to the next chapter, it should be quite interesting, considering what just happened in the story. :)

Finally get to catch up with this.
Last 2 chapters was hot as hell.
I'm so eager to know what he did in the past, but 8 months in jail cannot be serious crime right? Not like he killed his old lover. Maybe vandalism or assault?
I love that Hoot (and you) treated Bill as if he's a piece of crystal. He really do deserve all the attention and care.

wow! speedy update!! this was a great chapter, I like getting to see things from Tom's perspective, it really adds to the story. I can't wait to find out what this is all about. keep up the great work!!

Oh god, you're killing me! But I still love it :) Pleeeeeeeaaaaaassssssseeeeee update soon!

aaaaaaaaaaaack! I'm dying to know what's going on with Hoot! Please update soon. Good job on this chapter, though, it made the suspense bearable. :)

How many times have you ended it like this, really?
There's not much I can really say about this chapter, since it was all pretty much on the same subject and I don't just want to gush about how amazing this fic it either.

Tom, as per usual, is the epitome of adorableness.
I still can't believe that I can stand him in this fic while Bill's not with him.

And Hoot, awww. I want to know what he's done, badly, but at the same time, I don't care, he's Hoot and he's too brilliant to have bad thoughts about.

Guuuh, the earthquake, let me guess, it's going to happen when Hoot pops Bill's cherrie then the shaking's going to make the fucking so much better? Or something like that.
Could you've been building up to it for much longer?
There's so much tension waiting to explode, I can't wait to read the rest of it.
Sorry it wasn't a better review :/

i love it when Hoot is calling Bill : "love" and "little one"

i hope it's not what i'm thinking

update

Lmfao at the first sentence.
And phwoarrrr it was well hot.

You wrote the initial penetration amazingly well.
Normally it's no more than a line or two which consists of the same old trollop that's in every other fic which feature's someone's first penetration, however this was a thousand times better.
It was almost as if I could experience what Bill was going to, and at the same time watch what was going on as if it was before me.
Wonderful.

And guh, Hoot, he's so caring and gentle, it's amazing.
I've probably said this before but, daaamn, I'm so jealous of them both for having each other, you've created characters that I want so badly.

Seriously with the cruel endings! Woman, but oo, I'm liking it, is this what you were talking about being the other thing that would cause them stress and turmoil?
I don't know if I'm happy or not, but either way, the cliffhanger was just mean -.-

ah!! what a cliffie!! I'll be on the edge of my seat for the explanation of this one. keep up the great work!!!

O_O

GO ON!!!