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Reviewer: Anberlin Cutie 12 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/08/08 09:38 pm Title: Chapter 8

Very sweet chapter. I love it. Bill and Andrea's friendship sounds like mine and my friend Jess's friendship. It's pretty cool. I love the story so far, it's really cute. Update soon.

Reviewer: crystality Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/08/08 03:50 pm Title: Chapter 8

Can't wait for the next one :)

Reviewer: siouxsiiiie Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/08/08 03:40 pm Title: Chapter 8

Another amazing chapter! I love your Andi, he's so different from how people usually write him! He's so unique and complex like all your other characters!
I got all teary-eyed reading his discussion with Bill...
Keep up the great work!!

Reviewer: Amirathe Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 06/08/08 10:55 am Title: Chapter 8

Wow, I loved the deep talk Bill had with Andreas. I almost teared up at the pearl part.

Reviewer: catmio Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/08/08 07:44 am Title: Chapter 8

Oh wow! This chapter was so perfect! Lots of funny moments but also some big revelations from Bill. I'm really happy that you made a chapter concentrating on Bill and his feelings.

Great job! I love this story so much!

Reviewer: Sapere aude Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/08/08 06:16 am Title: Chapter 8

Just started reading this up to here and I really like this! Don't know how I could have missed it! I think it deserves way more reviews than it's getting! Probably most people don't give it a chance because there's no Bill/Tom in it, it's not always easy to make Bill/OMC appealing to everyone but I'm really liking this, Hoot is great :D

Can't wait to read on ^^

Reviewer: theyaylady Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/08/08 05:17 am Title: Chapter 8

OMG

I just read it all

MOAR MOAR

LOVE LOVE LOVE

The detail is perfection

Reviewer: catmio Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/01/08 02:44 pm Title: Chapter 7

Thank you for another great chapter!

I loved the talk between Hoot and Tom. Tom seems like a good protective older brother. I'm glad that he kind of gave Hoot a permission to date his brother. He truly made Hoot consider his motives and responibility as well.

Hopefully you will update fast! Maybe Hoot and Bill will truly reveal their feelings in next chapter..? Maybe there's a kissing scene as well..? I can't wait!

Reviewer: Rook Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/26/08 11:57 pm Title: Chapter 1

Great story so far! I can't wait for the next chapter.

Reviewer: oxoxbill4lifeoxox Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/26/08 09:15 pm Title: Chapter 7

Awww that was a really good chapter I like how Tom was being all tough and I liked how it almost seemed like they were going to fight. Can't wait for the next chapter.

Reviewer: Amirathe Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 05/26/08 04:30 pm Title: Chapter 7

Very interesting story so far...update soon!

Reviewer: siouxsiiiie Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/26/08 04:02 pm Title: Chapter 7

Wow, I just read all of it in one go, and it's just amazing! How come I missed it before??
Your characterisation is so detailed and your original character is very complex and likeable... and hawt >///< I can't wait for the next chapter! And hopefully a kiss!

Reviewer: myEbrokenMheartO Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/26/08 01:15 pm Title: Chapter 7

OOOOMMMMEEEEGWAD!!!IL URVE IT!!UPDATE AGAIN SOON PLEASE!!!

Reviewer: crystality Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/26/08 12:40 pm Title: Chapter 7

Ohhh, I love this story so much!
I can't wait for your next update!

Reviewer: Majestrix Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/26/08 08:38 am Title: Chapter 7

You know how much I adore this fic! No thanks is required! :D

Go get your man, Hoot!

Reviewer: pandapanda Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/26/08 08:38 am Title: Chapter 7

I'm surprised this hasn't got loads of reviews, it's a very well written story, very sensitive, I hope to see more soon!

Reviewer: TH4everbaby Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/22/08 08:30 pm Title: Chapter 6

aw right when they were gonna kiss. I want a kiss sooooo bad. AND Tom oh my god Tom. I hope he doesn't like destroy Hoot and Bill's relationship ^_^

Reviewer: MagicalGirl379 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 05/22/08 02:16 pm Title: Chapter 6

What? WHAT? ME WANNA KNOW!!! >_

Reviewer: veestone Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/22/08 01:43 pm Title: Chapter 6

Yes, we do. :)

Reviewer: crystality Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/22/08 04:50 am Title: Chapter 6

Oh, I can't wait to see what happens!!

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