Glad you decided to get back with this story. It is quite unique and I enjoy every bit.

Oh God. This is amazing, beyond amazing if I'm honest. The previous chapter practically had me panting.

As did this one, simply because it was so wonderful.

I remembered the fic from when you started this, but I never read it since I was adverse to anything other than twincest. Now however, having spent the better part of two hours reading this, I don't think I've read a fic that's more incredible. I've fallen head over heels in love with it and your writing.

I'm so glad that I've just started to read this now, I couldn't have dealt with waiting. It's going to be agony waiting for the next chapter.

I didn't know it was possible for Bill to seem more delicate and fragile than how he is often portrayed, but this is just worlds beyond that, in the best possible way of course.
I do kind of want him to be playful and as vibrant as Jamie was, or how Hoot described him atleast. However, how you've written him for this is spot on.

And Hoot, oh wow. I'm so damn jealous of Bill for being with him! He's he epitome of man tbh. His gentleness and kindness, mixed with his raw strength and manliness is almost overpowering. And when he holds Bill, making him seem small and almost flowerlike in his arms is... I can't put it into words...but perfect, wonderul, amazing are pretty close.

Tom had me worried before I read this, I thought he'd be a major factor and i'd just be heartbroken for him, not being with Bill. But the amount that he's in it and the part he plays is perfect.

You've done an outstanding job with this.

Author's Response: WOW. Thank you so much. Your review literally left me speechless. I'm so happy you like the story, it's very close to my heart and now it seems I'll be able to finish it.:) And yes, I totally agree, Hoot is just...perfect. I have to admit, he is my dream man, and as a writer I'm allowed to create such a dream man for me to play around with, right? Too bad he is gay:( but good for Billy!XD I'll try to update soon, promise.

thanks!! I love it!!! please continue!!

Like Hoot will say: u’ll be the death of me,i swear
U can easily make me forget about the surroundings because u have such a way to draw me in
i really like it because it’s not only about sex…it’s so full of variety…so much emotions…that i can easily become Bill or Hoot or Tom

if Hoot was real i’d be jealous because he’s gay
ohhh man he’s a real prince charming,no wonder poor Bill can’t resist him
and the way he tells Bill: little one is so adorable
and he has a big cock….that was *cough*…i’ve never met this line in another FF
i see that u have a thing writing about dead people….and i have a thing reading these kind of stories
i like that u don’t rush things but u don’t make it slow either and that’s perfect for me
can’t wait to read more about their relationship and i hope that Tom won’t interfere too much


POST SOON

Author's Response: thank you so much. this story will be the death of me too, i guess, unless i finish it and can finally breathe freely :) and yes, hoot is mr perfect. with a big...ehm...cock. there, I said it. he has a big one. but someone had to write a story about such a guy too, right? and as for writing about dead people.well, i wouldn't say i particularly like writing about them, but somehow these themes just find me. i'll try not to drown into melodrama, promise!

amazing! I'm in love! I was so surprised when I saw an update already but extremely happy! Wonderful job! Bill is so sweet and Hoot is amazing. Love it

:) Good update! I'll be waiting patiently. I love the dynamic between Bill and Hoot.

There is definetly a demand, I order you to finsih this story mortal!!!!

Yes, ma'am, I would definitely like to see this finished. I've actually been waiting for more of it but I didn't want to bother you about it. I love the hell out of this story. The way you describe their feelings is magnificent. I'm just constantly impressed with how colorful the language is and how I can really almost feel how Bill is feeling or Hoot is feeling. So if you can, if you have time, I would love more.

And by the way, this chapter nearly killed me. God, it was good. *.*

of course theres a demand for this story. its so different and so good. why did you stop in the first place? this story is to good to be true so plz complete it

Hot, hot, hot! I just read all 11 chapters at once, and you did an amazing job! Going to change panties now.