Date: 08/13/09 12:39 pm Title: Chapter 13
Absolutely delightful. I smiled the whole way through. (^_^)
Date: 08/11/09 10:50 am Title: Chapter 13
Sweet chapter! But my brother couldn't stand when I sat on his bike, and he wanted to kill me must of the time!
Date: 08/10/09 11:43 am Title: Chapter 13
Great chapter. I'm loving this story! You're such a great writer. I'm amazed that English is not your primary language. I love reading stories where people want to protect Bill. Hoot AND Tom are protective of him in this story and I love it!
Date: 08/10/09 09:44 am Title: Chapter 13
I loved the dialogue! The interaction between Bill and Tom is so genuine and feels so real! Great chapter!
Date: 08/10/09 05:42 am Title: Chapter 13
Just read the whole 13 chapters and this is another favourite wrote by you. Although processing slowly, it's amazingly sweet and bill and hoot's interaction makes my heart melts.
I think it's totally different from scar issue, not just the pairing. Here I can see you put a lot of attention in bill finding out who he is and what he wanted.
This is a great fic. You should never doubt your writing.
Date: 08/09/09 10:14 pm Title: Chapter 13
Awwwwww... Thats sooooo sweet. The bonding part. its so cute with Bill and Tom.
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm glad you are following this story.:)
Date: 08/09/09 06:25 pm Title: Chapter 11
oh wow!!! k for some really wierd thea-esque ( because its me) reason i forgot to track this after i left my last review and i saw it on the recents pages todaY AND I WA SLIEK omg!! 3 NEW CHAPTERS!!!!! so i am off the read the other new chapters too! and i am soo glad you continued this!
Date: 08/09/09 05:05 pm Title: Chapter 13
I loved how Bill just came out and told Tom, and giggled at Tom's reaction while driving. Tom is the most wonderful big brother and their brotherly playing is so adorable. Thank you for more of this! :D
Author's Response: Thank YOU! TOm is amazing. I'm determined to fill this story up with amazing people. It may not be too realistic, but I don't feel like bothering with evil people right now. I'm having the time of my life here!:)
Date: 08/09/09 03:38 pm Title: Chapter 13
That was simply perfect. It wasn't a cliched scene and it wasn't overly fluffy. It was simply phenomenal and breathtaking. I enjoyed it so much. Your characterizations never cease to amaze me and cause me to fall more and more in love with the characters. Lovely job and I can't wait to see the next chapter.
Author's Response: Wow. Thank you so much. Yeah, I tried to make it real and avoid the cliche-landmines.rnSuccess as it seems.:)
Date: 08/09/09 03:31 pm Title: Chapter 13
*wibbles*
Author's Response: hehe. you what? I had to look up the word on the net...rnso now you can go on wibbling.:)
Date: 08/09/09 03:19 pm Title: Chapter 13
aaaaaawwww i love it!!!! it was incredible!!! this conversation have to be done already hahaha i love bill and hoot together, they just fit with eachother !!!! thanks!!! continue!!
Author's Response: Thank you so much!!!
Date: 08/09/09 11:59 am Title: Chapter 13
Emotional blackmail. Tom really started to panic now.
Oh god, that made me laugh! XD I love protective Tom, it's adorable!
This story is so good and quirky! It's very original and I just get sucked into it so easily. I love how you describe Tom and Bill's relationship, it's just enough so my twincesty side is happy in this Bill/OMC story, haha.
I also love how you write Hoot and Bill's romance, I love all your romance stories, you just have that unique spark, and I can find it underneath all your stories and I love it.
Well, anyways, I really liked this chapter, keep up the good work!
Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading this story and for leaving such an inspiring review!
Date: 08/09/09 09:52 am Title: Chapter 13
awwwww. this was definitely cute ^^ i love how this story is moving along ^_^
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you still like the story.:)
Date: 08/09/09 09:32 am Title: Chapter 13
Thanks so much for the quick update! You're starting to spoil us readers :)
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you are still reading this!
Date: 08/09/09 09:25 am Title: Chapter 13
i like that Tom is much older than Bill and that he really cares about him
hmmmm about that i must say that i find it odd when he’s saying or thinking that Bill is beautiful….that’s not very brotherly
is it me or here we have a lil’ incest?
When Bill told Tom that he’s in love with Hoot ,Tom had a strange reaction :
„His grip tightened on the steering wheel and he could feel sweat breaking out along his spine, but he forced calmness on himself as he turned to look at Bill with million questions in his eyes.”
I know that it’s not an incest story but i’m very observative ,Tom loves Bill very much and protects him more than necessary and he doesn’t want to lose him for Hoot
I like the way u make them…it makes me sad and nostalgic but in a good way
I’m looking forward for the next chapter and i hope for more Bill-Hoot action
Author's Response: Thank you so much! actually, I didn't intend to put any twincest in it, but yeah, Tom and Bill are extremely close and Tom may have noticed his lil'brother's exceptionally beauty in a not so brotherly way...:)
Date: 08/09/09 08:59 am Title: Chapter 13
Awwwwwwwwww.
I've thought of almost nothing else since I last read this. Everytime I logged on to here or refreshed the recent updates page I only wanted to see this updated.
Hearing Tom mention Rita is just painful. It feels like he's cheating on Bill, but when Bill and Hoot are together it's nothing of the sort.
But god damn, Tom's amazing in this! I so want a big brother like him! He's a lot like Hoot in a way, how he acts and treats Bill so carefully and has nothing but love for him.
Dammit I'm jealous if your characters! I want a Hoot and or Tom.
Bill bless him is so adorable. His naïvety and sheer innocence contrasts so well with his maturity and understanding of things.
A Hoot/Bill/Tom threesome would be so amazing. I'm not asking you to writenit in or anything, but damn, just think ofthem together, hit and sweaty in Hoot's bedroom, writhing and moaning and being so damn sweet and fluffy. Guhh.
It's wonderful that you left out any awkwardness between Tom and Bill during their little chat. You did it perfectly, having them both behave the way they did, it fit withtheir characters and wasn't painful for everyone, including the reader.
I'll be eagerly waiting for the next chapter, and possibly re-reading the fic again.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for this amazing review!!! It's glad to know there are people out there who are so interested in this story:)
Date: 08/07/09 01:16 am Title: Chapter 12
I really like how easy Bill is with Hoot now, not so shy, but how he's still bashful about the sex. Of course, he would be. And I can sure see Hoot spoiling him rotten! Wonderful chapter, darling! I adore this story, and I'm here to the end. :D
Date: 08/06/09 05:28 pm Title: Chapter 11
continue!!! continue!! please i love it!!!!
Date: 08/06/09 04:27 am Title: Chapter 12
awwww, yay so much happy fluff
Date: 08/05/09 05:53 pm Title: Chapter 12
i am so very glad you have starting writing this story again. thank you, keep up the good work!