Date: 02/27/11 07:46 pm Title: Chapter 12
Aw I just LOVE how Hoot is with Bill, even when he was talking about Jamie it treats him so perfectly and avoids what could easily be an uncomfortable moment. This stage in their relationship is so beautifully despicted and as ever I am so looking forward to watching it progress even further ^_^
Date: 02/26/11 06:11 pm Title: Chapter 11
Oh that was so so so SO UNF *___* I was holding my breath the entire chapter, I swear! It was so sexy but in an entirely beautiful way. I can't get over our talent, it's extraordinary! I never thought I'd love Bill/OMC as much as I love this. I've always been a twins girl, or Billshido but OMC isn't something I would fall in love with as much as I have with this. It's stunning!
Date: 02/26/11 05:57 pm Title: Chapter 10
Ooh that was so so amazing! I'm almost out of breath, it was so dramatic and exciting and just, guh, it gave me shivers .-. Your writing is just so gorgeous.
Thank you for your author response ^_^ I was going to ask whether you were going to continue with this fic. I'm always telling myself not to read fics that haven't been updated in a long while but I've read a bit of your other fics and REALLY couldn't resist this. So I was kind of expecting not to finish this. So thank you for letting me know, don't worry about it at all and don't regret it ^_^ We all move on and leave things. But when 've finished reading this I'll definitely email you because I'd love to find out what happens. God I just adore these characters :)
Date: 02/25/11 06:30 pm Title: Chapter 9
This was amazing, so so amazing! They kissed and aw it was magical ^_^ The way you write is really gorgeous, it's so detailed and full of so many emotions, god I can't get enough of it! This really is an amazing fic :D
Author's Response: Thank you so much for taking the time and effort to leave so many kind reviews! Forgive me for not responding to all of them, but unfortunately I don't really visit this site anymore...:( and I've stopped writing TH fic. But The Fault is really close to my heart and it's one of my greatest regrets that I left it unfinished. Now I've re-read it, thanks to you!, and I regret it even more. I'm sure, though that it will remain so, so if you've reached the last chapter there is, and you are interested how the story was supposed to end, I can email you a short summary which will, hopefully, give you some kind of closure. I know it's terrible when a story leaves you hanging.rnTHanks again!
Date: 02/25/11 05:40 pm Title: Chapter 8
I really really enjoyed reading Bill and Andi's interaction, it was one of my favourite chapters, and I'm not even sure why xD When Bill was talking about giving himself to Hoot, wow, I was melting over my laptop *_*
Date: 02/25/11 07:00 am Title: Chapter 7
Aw the face off was fabulous :D You wrote it so well I felt like I was in the room with them. I love Tom's character, how he loves Bill no matter what but he wishes he didn't put himself in situations because of how he is. It's realistic that way :) I hope Hoot and Bill are able to get their kiss soon!
Date: 02/25/11 06:09 am Title: Chapter 6
YAY I have time to sneak in another chapter *o/* This is fabulous! So so fabulous but szoih;fsjdk TOM! They were so so close and maaan I was biting my lip but then Tom came to steal the moment xD I hope they can have their kiss soon, that's two opportunities they've had and missed!
Date: 02/24/11 10:57 pm Title: Chapter 5
Ooh I'm so tired but this is soooo beautiful *_* I'm looking forward to reading more soon *love*
Date: 02/24/11 10:07 pm Title: Chapter 4
Ooooh they so nearly kissed! What a BEAUTIFUL chapter, Hoot and Bill together are just so *__* perfect! I am thoroughly enjoying this fic so far :D
Date: 02/24/11 09:23 pm Title: Chapter 3
Aw things are developing between the two of them ^_^ This is such a beautiful fic, it's absolutely gorgeous! *__* I can't wait to see how their relationship develops :D
Date: 02/23/11 09:15 pm Title: Chapter 2
Oh Goooood you right in the most gorgeous way! I adore Hoot! He's such a wonderful character. I love how much detail you put into their thoughts and the background of their lives. I hope that continues throughout the fic, so we can see into more of their lives ^_^ This fic is so cleverly crafted, I'm so excited to be reading it :D
Date: 02/23/11 09:04 pm Title: Chapter 1
I know this hasn't been updated in a while but I couldn't resist, I really couldn't. And seems within good reason; I'm a little bit a lot hooked already. Bill's character, well he's fascinating! And I'm really looking forward to finding out more about him, he's a bit of a mystery as of now :3 Your writing is absolutely stunning!
Date: 01/18/11 01:30 pm Title: Chapter 1
Are you still planning to continue this? I want to read it, but I'm afraid to commit to a story that isn't going to be finished. It looks really good, though, so I hope you do come back to it so I can read it. :)
Date: 12/29/10 06:54 am Title: Chapter 9
i liked it so, so much. i reread some of the passages multiple times coz they are so intricately, beautifully articulated it left me awed. my favorite one is this:
From under the eyelashes of his half-opened eyes Hoot could see the metallic expanse of the ocean beyond the edge of the bluff and in the bright light of the sun past its apex the periphery of his vision was tinged with molten gold.
*dies*
Date: 12/28/10 03:34 pm Title: Chapter 6
wtf, tom? leave them alooone! i want hoot to be kissykissy with bill, go away! ugh. your fic is making me insane, i blame you)))
Date: 12/28/10 12:35 am Title: Chapter 2
this is completely and overwhelmingly ugh... cool? adorable? amazing? you name it. i can`t settle for one adj))
Date: 08/07/10 02:21 pm Title: Chapter 1
Wonderfull! Are you still writing this? I want to know how it ends x)!
Date: 06/15/10 12:23 am Title: Chapter 23
Are you still writing this?
Date: 04/14/10 07:53 am Title: Chapter 23
still very interested...Hoot is my absolute favorite original character.
cries..no, you cant stop the chapter there. hope the next chapter will be really soon!
Date: 04/13/10 10:41 pm Title: Chapter 23
goosh finally we (and bill) get to know why hoot went to prison
awww i felt like a warm feeling reading to what all hoot said to bill *3*
i guess next chapter is the moment of thruth D: