Date: 10/21/09 11:34 am Title: Chapter 15
Corrr, smexing sounds amazing in the next chapter!
You don't know how much I've missed this!
Anyone who gives up on it because of it taking a while to update is just a complete idiot.
You're honest to God killing me with the lack of Bill/Hoot interaction!
Two...maybe three, I'm not so sure, without them being together is the epitome of cruelty!
But it makes me all the more eager to read you fantastic writing.
You tease too much, and from other, lesser writers, I think I'd have been pissed, but you make it okay.
At least they talk/think about each other every moment they're apart, and you don't just have whole chapter on deciding what to wear.
I adore the relationships with the four males that were in this chapter, Tom and Bill, but that goes without saying, and Bo and Hoot.
They work extremely well together and it's just darling to see that they are still so close even after both loosing someone they love and living so far apart.
Hoot totally needs to pick Bill up from school one day, see him being bullied and beat the shit out of each one of those twats.
It would be the cutest, sweetest thing ever...after the smex of course.
Date: 10/21/09 11:18 am Title: Chapter 15
Smexing - yea!! : )
Date: 10/21/09 10:49 am Title: Chapter 15
YAY! I'm so excited to see what happens next. Please update soon :)
Beautifully written, as usual. I love when Bill is thinking "... and yes, I want him to fuck me, I want it so much you fuckers could not even begin to imagine!" That is my FAVORITE part! I almost wanted him to say those things to those idiots. Awesome!
Date: 10/21/09 09:21 am Title: Chapter 15
OMG!!!!! I LOVE IT!!!! HAHAHAHA TOM, BEAWARE!! THERE IS SOMEONE AFTER YOU!!! HAHAHA!! XD
PLEASE CONTINUE!! I LOVE IT!!! XD
Date: 10/21/09 01:21 am Title: Chapter 14
ooh, mystery death?
please dont leave us hanging for too much longer. :D
Date: 10/18/09 04:03 am Title: Chapter 14
Words can really not explain how much I love this story. I love the relationship you've built up between Bill and Hoot. I love how they came so close to kissing, and then when they finally did, the way you made it happen. The sheer emotional in it actually made me tear up right along with Bill.
I honestly cannot wait for another update! =)
Date: 10/03/09 02:44 pm Title: Chapter 14
more more more more ... luv you story the plot is great would luv to read more of the story...would be cool to have a crossover with twilight and edward/bill heheheh ....
Date: 10/03/09 02:44 pm Title: Chapter 14
more more more more ... luv you story the plot is great would luv to read more of the story...would be cool to have a crossover with twilight and edward/bill heheheh ....
Date: 08/28/09 03:13 pm Title: Chapter 14
i just love this story. it is so well written. i just want to read more about it. update soon.
Date: 08/27/09 01:24 am Title: Chapter 14
Still loving this!
Continue soon? :D
Date: 08/26/09 10:42 pm Title: Chapter 14
eh?? (O.o) So how did Jamie die? It doesn't sound like it was an accident or a terminal illness.
Date: 08/26/09 09:43 pm Title: Chapter 14
thanks!!!!!!!!!!! i was waiting for so long!!!
i love this story!!! XD
Date: 08/26/09 08:12 pm Title: Chapter 14
Oh goodness, what did Jamie die from? Did I miss something? Am I being unobservant?
I think I really like Bo. :)
Date: 08/26/09 01:31 pm Title: Chapter 14
Great update!
I liked your decision to move forward a little bit. I'm on edge of my seat here! The earthquake and Jaime thing are really interesting, and I can't wait to see what will happen in the future.
Date: 08/26/09 12:36 pm Title: Chapter 14
Jamie didn't die of cancer? What? Did I miss something?
Anyway. Amazing chapter. As always.
Date: 08/26/09 11:37 am Title: Chapter 14
I'm really liking this story! And now I'm very curious about what really happened to Jamie.
Date: 08/26/09 08:53 am Title: Chapter 14
So there's something Hoot's not saying! I can't wait to find out what it is. I also want to see what Bo thinks of Bill. Well, good update! Awaiting the next one with bated breath!
Date: 08/26/09 07:39 am Title: Chapter 14
Guuhhh, you're killing me with the lack of Bill in this chapter!
However I did love it, since the relationship between Bo and Hoot is so wonderful and understanding that you can't help but smile.
I can't help but think of Bo as looking like that guy off of American Chopper...I don't know his name, but they both fit the same description.
You're making me nervous with all this Earthquake talk.
Talk about a feeling of foreboding!
It's wonderful how you're not hinting, but just dropping bits and pieces about a big one coming, it's working exceptionally well and making me on edge.
I'm actually worried for your characters.
I put that down to you being such an amazing author.
Since this was last updated, I still think of it all the time when I come on the site, hoping that it's been updated.
You had me hooked from the first chapter, I'm...besotted with it.
Date: 08/26/09 06:40 am Title: Chapter 14
I loved the conversation between Bo and Hoot, and I'm desperately interested in finding out what really killed Jamie.
It wasn't Hoot's monstrous cock, was it?
Date: 08/15/09 08:28 pm Title: Chapter 13
is that the end??? please one mroe chapter, i wanna see some hoot and bill action ^_^