Date: 10/24/09 04:20 pm Title: Chapter 16
As well they should have fogged up; that was steamy!
I'm sorry about not reviewing the last chapter; I actually read it at work and couldn't review. Too long to explain. Anyway, that was a painful chapter, and this was, too, in a way, but cathartic. Finally, Bill got to let loose with his feelings about the people making fun of him and bullying him, and it's good it was Hoot that got him to. The sex was good, such a release for him, and Hoot's love and dedication for Bill is just beautiful. I do love this story so much, and I'm glad you are continuing with it. :)
Author's Response: It's okay. I wasn't about to shoot into the crowd or smth for not reviewing (I might have taken you out accidentally ;D) I'm glad you are still on this ship, though. Sometimes I get this urge to write on this story and then there's no stopping me. And then other times I just can't bother. But I'll definitely finish it. Maybe in the next century. :)
Date: 10/24/09 03:31 pm Title: Chapter 16
Yay! You don't know how excited I was to wake up and find an update for this! This story is so beautiful, I can't even handle it. I love the 'smexing' :) Makes me especially excited for when Bill turns 18. CanNOT wait for that! Anyway, this chapter was so sweet. I love how Hoot reassures Bill that what they have is so beautiful, no matter what those idiots at his school say to him. I also love that they did it at Bill's house, with Tom downstairs. LOL! Awesome! Oh, I am hoping for more 'smexing' soon! Thank you!
Date: 10/24/09 02:47 pm Title: Chapter 16
My glasses fogged up while reading this (^_^) lol. I think Hoot just might be my favorite OMC pairing for Bill.
Date: 10/24/09 01:47 pm Title: Chapter 16
I loooooove this story so much, and that was fucking HOT.
Date: 10/24/09 01:08 pm Title: Chapter 16
Wow! Okay, obviously I enjoyed their very intimate sexy stuff here a lot! It was HOT, yet gentle and loving at the same time. I loved the ending here.
The beginning of this chapter was great! I loved the way Hoot decided to take matters into his own hands and left to see Bill.
I'm desperatley waiting for a new chapter!
Date: 10/24/09 12:38 pm Title: Chapter 16
yeah, my glasses did too!
Date: 10/24/09 12:11 pm Title: Chapter 15
Yay! two updates!
I love how with every chapter you continue to amaze me with your writing talent and you often surprise me with the way your story develops. (I was SO sure that in this chapter Bill and Bo would meet.)
Poor Bill and the bad guys in PE! I loved how Bill was thinking about Hoot there! Also, I enjoyed Hoot's reaction to Tom's news. Can't wait to see what happens next! (yay for smexing!)
Date: 10/24/09 11:41 am Title: Chapter 1
HOLY SHIT!!! I'll BET your glasses fogged up while you were writing this. Mine certainly fogged up when I was reading it! Whew! Mercy....
Date: 10/24/09 11:24 am Title: Chapter 16
Well damn! I felt like I was in the room with them. I really want to let you know how well written this chapter is, but my mind can't quite form the words right now, so I'll be reviewing again later on in the day when I'm a bit more coherent. Having said that, Thank You Sooooo Much for this story and updating it so soon. :)
Date: 10/24/09 09:49 am Title: Chapter 16
Oh God.
Talk about wow.
I adored this.
As I usually do with this fic, and tbh, it's the first time in months, probably over a year that I've actually read a sex scene, they're all so generic that I skip over them and only focus on the dialogue, however, with this I was glued to the screen.
I always figured that if I was to have a favourite fic, it'd be twincest without a doubt.
Damn was I wrong, I can't tell you how much you've made me fall in love with this pairing, even if he is an OMC.
It's your writing tbh, it's so eloquent and clean that it's more than a pleasure to read.
I love the descriptions and the details that you put in that actually fit the plot and don't just seem to be dumped in as many other authors do.
That position, his face almost trapped under Hoot's groin, God that's so hot.
I was almost salivating.
And it was sweet and fluffy at the same time, not that I'd expected anything less of course, but it made it ten times better.
And squee for the fast update. :D
Date: 10/24/09 09:46 am Title: Chapter 16
As much as you love to write it , I love to read it more. They are the perfect yin/yang to each other. Good lord if the foreplay is that hot I'll spontaneously combust when they get to the main event.
Author's Response: Hehe! I'll combust first and then there will be no one to upload the chapter. LOL
Date: 10/23/09 07:21 am Title: Chapter 15
Yay!! please do update real soon. I want Bo to meet Bill!! and birthday sex of course! =)
Date: 10/23/09 07:16 am Title: Chapter 14
uh oh, he didn't die of cancer? what happened? i dont like dishonesty and i dont think bill will like it either, how ever good the reason, esp depending on how he finds out. i look forward to finding out myself.
Date: 10/23/09 07:07 am Title: Chapter 13
i adore the relationship between bill and tom. it is just so sweet. i am so excited you are working on this story again!
Date: 10/21/09 10:15 pm Title: Chapter 15
after graduation, I hope Hoot gets to go a few rounds with those evil fuckers.
yay for smex in the next chapter.
Date: 10/21/09 08:11 pm Title: Chapter 1
Thank You So Much, You have no idea how you have made my Wednesday at least ten times better. :)
Date: 10/21/09 07:29 pm Title: Chapter 15
I CAN"T WAIT FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER! WOOT WOOT!
Date: 10/21/09 07:03 pm Title: Chapter 15
So glad to see more of this! I really enjoy these characters, and I so hated to see Bill being tormented at school. At first I was shocked that he didn't ask for Hoot, but it made sense after it was explained, of course. I'd love to see more soon. :)
Date: 10/21/09 06:09 pm Title: Chapter 15
yay! i've been waiting patiently for you to update this story as it is one of my favourites. and that you're going to update real soon again sounds very good to me! i feel so sorry for bill :( he needs something smexy to cheer him up for sure!
Date: 10/21/09 11:46 am Title: Chapter 15
really good, continue to write pease!!!!