Date: 10/25/09 11:15 pm Title: Chapter 17
I love you on a roll! lol I often forget about Hoot being nervous about his size and how sweet for Bill to do the research. I should expect no less, really! Oh, and no idea what's next! :)
Date: 10/25/09 06:45 pm Title: Chapter 17
yay, this was a great chapter. it was a convo they needed to have, it makes the story realistic. i look forward to seeing how it all plays out. and as i said before, i am very excited for bill and bo to meet. keep up the great work, thanks for the super speedy updates!!
Date: 10/25/09 06:42 pm Title: Chapter 17
i love the update. story is coming out very nice. can't wait to find out what happens next.
Date: 10/25/09 06:39 pm Title: Chapter 16
hot and steamy for sure! and another chapter to read too! you spoil us!!
Date: 10/25/09 06:23 pm Title: Chapter 17
I've been loving all the frequent updates, because I adore this story! I'm so behind on commenting it, but I just wanted to say that I really felt the way you describe Bill's feelings in chapter 15. It is so painful to see him hurting, and over something that is, as you said, nothing too different from what anybody else would normally do with his or her beloved. And then the following chapters where Hoot comes to comfort Bill were so lovely and hot all at the same time. I really hope you don't lose your momentum because, wow, I love reading these two together!
Date: 10/25/09 04:42 pm Title: Chapter 17
Me thinks sex on the beach is what's going to happen!!
Date: 10/25/09 04:33 pm Title: Chapter 17
i love this story, ive just read the whole thing. i read scar tissue earlier in the year and absolutely loved it, im so glad youre writing this one :)
Date: 10/25/09 03:28 pm Title: Chapter 17
I'm so glad to see you on a writing spree with this. It's one of my favorites. Keep going!
Author's Response: Yay! Writing spree! God, I've missed this so much... Thank you for the reviews you've left on these chapters! I'm glad you are enjoying this story!!!
Date: 10/25/09 12:28 pm Title: Chapter 17
Oh God, please go on :) This story is so romantic that I keep rereading it again and again and again. It melts my heart :)
Author's Response: Thank you so much! It is indeed romantic. I'm pouring my whole romantic vein in it. (I'm secretly in love with Hoot. don't tell anyone.) ;D
Date: 10/25/09 11:59 am Title: Chapter 16
That was WOW! Hot hot hot
Date: 10/25/09 10:48 am Title: Chapter 17
thanks!!!!! love this story!!!! please continuEE!! sex in the beach!!!! omg!!! incredible!!!
Date: 10/25/09 08:50 am Title: Chapter 9
I love the way you portray Bill. I wasn't wild about the Hoot/Bill pairing at first, but you've made it into a beautiful thing.
Date: 10/25/09 08:49 am Title: Chapter 17
:D:D I'd totally prepared myself for a long wait for an update, but you don't even know how excited I was when I got the email.
Aww, I think I died every time Bill was referred to as Hoot's or 'little one' it is easily the cutest and sweetest thing to ever be included in a fic.
I was wondering when you'd mention Bo again, or at least, when Hoot would mention Bo to Bill.
I imagine their meeting to be adorable, with Hoot showing Bill off as much as possible.
The sex. Oh the sex.
Could you be building up the anticipation much more?
It's so close that it's almost tangible, yet you seem to avoid getting closer to Bill's birthday like it's the plague.
And then with the added possibility that Hoot's cock would be too big for Bill's little virgin hole...
Are you trying to kill us?
Sorry for the rather shit review, it's still early here.
But I loved this chapter, as I always do.
Author's Response: Thank you fall all the reviews you have left recently! They keep me inspired very much! I can totally understand your infatuation with the 'little one' reference. I myself swoon every time I type it in...LOL And no, I'm not trying to kill you with the anticipation, but I have to call your attention to the fact that Bill's birthday is like 12 days away (mentioned in the P.E. scene)so their next little escapade on the beach will deffo not be the birthday sex scene. But it will be very very very satisfying. i can promise you that. ;D
Date: 10/25/09 08:40 am Title: Chapter 17
Wow, another update! Awesome! I loved this chapter. I thought the fact that Bill researched on the internet was so cute. And how he told Hoot that he wasn't afraid so Hoot shouldn't be either. So sweet! I can't wait for birthday sex but it seems I'll have to wait at least another chapter after this one because it sounds like Bill will be meeting Bo, right? (At least I think I remember the man's name being Bo). Can't wait!
Author's Response: Thank you darling! And thank you for your previous review too! But I need to warn you: the birthday sex scene is not gonna happen any time soon. Sorry. His birthday is about 12 days away. but you will like what I've planned for their trip to the beach. promise. :D
Date: 10/25/09 08:37 am Title: Chapter 8
Hootersexual. that was too cute. Love this story!! It should be featured.
Date: 10/25/09 07:29 am Title: Chapter 17
Loved the talk! I was kind of waiting for this kind of discussion between them at some point. This was a good time to have it and I like how we got to know a bit more about their relationship in this and past couple of chapters.
I hope they will fit together....*grin*
Author's Response: Thank you for all the reviews you have left recently! I'm so glad you feel this scene was warrented and appropriate. I had some doubts about it, but then decided to leave it like this. I'm glad now I did.
Date: 10/25/09 06:37 am Title: Chapter 17
*ahem*
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I can't wait for what's coming next, no pun intended. ;) Don't you just love an unexpected writing frenzy? Pray one comes my way. Awesome chapter, and I'm glad I checked back when I had two updates to read!
Author's Response: Let's pray together! :) I don't ever want this amazing feeling go!
Date: 10/24/09 04:47 pm Title: Chapter 16
That sex scene was great. You took a blow job and made it into something unique and amazing. Besides the sex, love the dynamic you're creating between these two. I just adore this story.
Date: 10/24/09 04:46 pm Title: Chapter 16
when i read the bike scene i thought that i'm in "Top gun" movie with Tom Cruise
i love when Hoot is telling Bill " little one"...it sounds innocent and nasty at the same time
hot chappie :D
Author's Response: LOL Exactly like in Top Gun! Heehee! Thanks for the review!
Date: 10/24/09 04:23 pm Title: Chapter 16
i truly love this story!!!!! please continue!!!! XD