Date: 11/09/09 04:24 pm Title: Chapter 19
Bill was so adorable when he told Hoot to "unpack me" and then got all flustered and excited. I love your Bill in this story--how sweet and innocent and pure he is and how that comes across in how trusting and open he is to love. It's such a beautiful story and I just know Hoot is going to treat him right. I want the next part nowwww...
Author's Response: Thank you so much! It means a lot to me that you like the story! Hoot is perfect for Bill because what I say goes here! There. I'm glad we agree on this. XD
Date: 11/09/09 02:30 pm Title: Chapter 19
Who cared about Bill being eighteen or not? I most certainly don't and I'm sure you, Bill and Hoot don't either.
Honestly, in the next chapter Hoot needs to pound Bill into the mattress until there's no air left in it and them some.
But of course keeping it as fluffy and adorable as this whole fic has been throughout.
Speaking of adorable, it's too good to last.
I kinda feel like something's coming, something which'll be proper heart breaking, but at the same time, I don't, since it's not that kind of fic.
If something does come though, I'm willing to bet my house that it's Bill's dad, huh?
Please don't let out like that happen, it's too amazing to have the fluff upset.
I dunno what to call the place where they're at, but is it real, or just something you imagined? I keep trying to imagine it but it won't work out in my mind.
Which I'm sure has more to do with me than your writing, which is as wonderful as ever.
Hoot really doesn't seem the kind to drive a station wagon, it just doesn't seem like his kind of car, I was a bit surprised by that.
But then again, I doubt he cared all that much.
Corr, a loved the much quicker update :D
And sorry this review was rather shit, again.
Author's Response: I kinda understand your impatience...:) But the boys are strictly keeping themselved to the not-until-the-birthday schedule. Sorry. But you are right about one thing: it's definitely too good to last. And not only Bill's dad will pose difficulty... The station wagon, well, I sort of imagined him having an old, ratty car, he does not really care about just uses it whenever he runs errands. Hoot is a very simple guy, he does not keep flashy cars, but he has flashy, custom-made bikes, got it? rnThanks for your extensive and entertaining review as always! :))))
Date: 11/09/09 01:21 pm Title: Chapter 19
wonderful chapter. It's really amazing how well you characterize these individuals. Great job! Oh, and don't feel bad about the reviews. I'm writing a story that's not twincest and I barely get any reviews on. it.
Author's Response: Thank you so much! And I totally feel for you...I normally write twc, but sometimes I stray and the difference in reviews is obvious. But I still think an author has to have enough respect towards themselves and towards their work to demand reviews, right? I have remained quiet for too long. Not any longer. :D
Date: 11/09/09 12:33 pm Title: Chapter 19
Oh, I love it! I love how Bill has become so playful with Hoot - it's so cute. I pretty much love EVERYTHING about their relationship, especially the sexy parts :) I want more! Need more! Can't wait for the next update =D
Author's Response: Thank you for your support! I'll update soon, promise!
Date: 11/09/09 12:12 pm Title: Chapter 19
i'm sorry i didn't review in the latest chapter. i dont know if i missed the one before as well, but i will better myself. and yes. you are mean, very mean in fact. i forgive you, only because this is such a great love story with so many layers and details and i can't wait for the next chapter. you leave me begging for more.
Date: 11/09/09 11:27 am Title: Chapter 19
Keep the chapters coming! : )
Date: 11/09/09 06:44 am Title: Chapter 19
oh, you are so mean!!! i was just starting to get excited. now i'm just gaping like a fish. how could you end it there? cruel! :)
great and sweet chapter, btw. WAY too short, though.
Date: 11/09/09 06:27 am Title: Chapter 19
Bill is so funny,poor boy he really thought that Hoot would take him to a nude beach
Omg i really start to wonder how will they have sex if Hoot has such a big cock
They’re going to fuck….or make love…whatever
I hope that Bill will be ok but it’s natural to hurt
mooooooore
Date: 11/09/09 05:55 am Title: Chapter 19
Whoa, can't wait for the next chapter...
That was incredibly sweet.
Date: 11/02/09 09:39 pm Title: Chapter 18
Great fic so far, I love it!
Date: 11/02/09 06:35 pm Title: Chapter 18
I'd love to have a big brother like Tom; he's so understanding and caring. I love how they all get along, though I am nervous for how things are going to be when dear old dad shows up. :/
And, of course, I'm looking forward to the trip to the beach! More Hoot & Bill time together is lovely. Thank you for the update! :)
Date: 11/02/09 02:30 pm Title: Chapter 18
i really love this story!!! XD it is amazing!!! XD
love it !!! :)
please continue!!
Date: 11/02/09 12:13 pm Title: Chapter 18
I loved the friendly way Tom and Rita teased Bill at the beginning. So funny! Also, I love how cute Bill and Hoot are together, I love the pet names Hoot calls Bill, so romantic!!
Date: 11/02/09 12:04 pm Title: Chapter 18
*whistle*
i really wanna be in Bill's place
u made me horny the way u described Hoot at work *gulps*
Date: 11/02/09 11:22 am Title: Chapter 18
Awesome! I loved the banter and teasing that you put throughout the whole chapter. I think it is so sweet how the other guys at the shop tease Bill. The meeting with Bo was great. When Bill says it's like meeting the parents and they laugh. That was so cute! Loved it! Can't wait for sex on the beach!
Date: 11/02/09 07:43 am Title: Chapter 18
The best thing to wake up to ever :D.
D'awww, I loved the Bo scene, it was simply charming, exactly as I had expected it.
I understand why the Bo/Bill scene was a hard one to write, but you excelled, as always.
Though I've got to say, seeing Bo/Bill before I read the sentence gave me a massive heart-attack to say the least.
I had to go back and check to make sure there'd been no new side pairing added.
I simply adored the Tom/Rita scene, even if I still think that Tom's almost cheating on Bill with her.
I wasn't expecting Rita and Bill to have a good relationship either, especially not to the point of her hugging him, but it worked so much better than anything I had imagined you'd write for it.
Lol, Tom's too dense to pick up Bill's hints, it sounds so much like his character, but then again it doesn't.
That was mean, leaving out the beach part, especially when you're building everything else up and just teasing us.
Though, I can't complain, this was a brilliant chapter, as per usual and cute as hell, with every aspect.
Oh, and the mechanics, treating Bill as they do, has to be the sweetest thing ever!
It's a break from what you would expect from people like that, but then again, it's Bill, so I can see it working.
This is still my favourite fic on the site, it's brilliant!
Date: 10/30/09 01:07 pm Title: Chapter 17
Reading this made me blush and giggle like a teenage girl. I think bill feels the same too.
'before or after we chuch the clothes' haha, that's a good one.
This fic is just so sweet. I'll be waiting for the next chapter.
Date: 10/27/09 12:33 pm Title: Chapter 17
(^_^) Bill gets to meet the Ex's Dad, and they're going to a nude beach?
Date: 10/26/09 12:41 pm Title: Chapter 17
Please I can't wait till his birthday, let it be tomorrow!
Date: 10/25/09 11:53 pm Title: Chapter 17
omg yay!! 2 chapters at once for me. Ive been away the past day or two, and I knew that 16 was up. when I came to read..here is 17 too!
omg 16 was soo HOTT!! so glad that Tom didnt come banging on Bills door to see what all the noise was..lol