You are a cruel, foul, evil woman!
Seriously, why do this to us? To tease us with the possibility of sex for a few lines, then to rip it away and not even take pity on us and include the almost sex scene.
It's just mean.
And patience my arse!
Don't need it don't want it, shan't have it.
Who cares about a birthday apart from Hoot?
No one!

I adore how you go into detail about their intimate little moments.
Most people either write too much or too little for it, however, you seem to put just the right amount, and it makes is so so so much more enjoyable to read the fluff, which is also improved immensely by the gentle teasing and jokes that the two share.
It makes it believable, even if you have parts which are so far fetched that it can't even be considered a tall story (Hoot saying no to Bill when he's presenting himself so willingly).

Corrr, nipple piercing, om nom nom at Hoot getting to play with it.
And fluff with the tattoo I expect?

I even blushed for poor Bill when Hoot pulled the dildo out, I so did not see that coming! I had just been expecting him to pull out lube, and spend some long, glorious hours over the next week stretching Bill.
But damn, you're making the wait unbearable almost!

Author's Response: LOL Is it really that unbelievable that a man can control himself? XD Oh, well, we both know Hoot is Mr Perfect and it is because that's how I want him to be. My Bill deserves nothing less than a Mr Perfect. Aha! I surprised you with the dildo! :D And you blushed! Well, I hope it won't be the last time with this fic...

wonderful, great job! I really love the continued development of the characters

Not frustrated, just excited for the next chapter! I really hope you plan on writing about them using the little toy! That would be so hot! So cute that Hoot went and got it after their little talk - and then brought it! Awesome.

"i'm more interested in the real thing anyway..." i am too
OMG
i really understand needy Bill
Hoot is perfect

This is down right blackmail!!!!
(I would have reviewed anyway!) Love how hot this is shaping up to be.

Author's Response: Well, blackmale is the surest way. See? XD

CLIFF HANGER!
how dare uuu >.<
OMG how did u do it?
mix innocense and at the same time make it SO HOT!
i kept laughing at hoot's BIIIIG issue while the reading XD
thanks 4 continuing it
hope u upload soon n.n

HI, I've just discovered your story and I love it.
I like the way Hoot takes care of Bill, he's really patient, protective and mature, the prefect boyfriend, unfortunally this kind af guys don't exist in the real wordl, or at least they're rare. I wonder if in the next chapter Hoot will be completly honest about his previous relationship.

I hope the next chapter will be update sonn.

Author's Response: Hey, I'm glad you have found your way here! And I totally agree with you. Guys like Hoot don't exist, or at least I have never met one, but that does not hold me back from writing about him. My Bill deserves a guy like Hoot and I, the writer, deserve the pleasure of writing about a character like him, don't you think so? XD

Dear GOD i just started to hyperventilate when i saw to to be continued....why in all that is holy fanfiction would you do that to my heart...It better be good or im heading to an early grave because of shock!!!

Arrrgh cliffhanger!!! Must...know...what...happens! Aii great chapter!

Very sexy. Can't wait for the next one. I liked your description of the place they went to; I could really picture it in my mind. I was hoping for a hot spring though. That would've been awesome.

Author's Response: be careful what you wish for cause it may turn reality...:D