Date: 05/25/08 06:28 am Title: Chapter 3 One turns
Interesting idea! I like how Simone knows all about it, and how clueless the boys themselves are. Looking forward to the next part!
Author's Response: hihi I can have a lot of fun with them that way ;) thanks!
Date: 05/25/08 01:04 am Title: Chapter 3 One turns
Ah...I've been waiting to see if you were going to work on this one. I loved the bite. Like Billa & Tomi, I want more :-)
Author's Response: yeah, sorry bout the update thing, sadly the next chap is far away as well :( but my others will come soon though
Date: 05/25/08 12:19 am Title: Chapter 3 One turns
It's official: I *heart* everything that you write -- even when it gives me cavities ^^ This one isn't causing any trips to the dentist tho; it's just a damn good (hot) TH vampire fic XD
Author's Response: oh noes ;) I'm giving you cavities, bad lucy :p thank you so much sweety, you know it means the world to me !
Date: 05/24/08 11:50 pm Title: Chapter 3 One turns
Hiya Guapa! No I don't live in a spanish speaking country. I just know a few word here and there from school (I'm actually taking latin right now though). If you want to know more about me email me. ask me anything you want. Now, about your story. I loved the part where tom goes nuts. Bill's reaction is great too. It's obvious they're each other's mates but b/c they're brothers does that make it a crime in the vampire world? Or is it just a human thing. Once bill turns completley will they be able to live off each other or will one of them have to go to another source for blood for both of them (talk about eating for two!). Can they go out during the day when they turn?
Also about My Little Brother. Update it really soon! And what I missed. Is it definately in the previous chapter? Bill nightmares, did something happen? I know, I should stick to one story in a review but I can't help it.
I love all your stories though so update whatever you want next.
*hugs you very tightly back*
Author's Response: oh Queen *grinns like an idiot* thank you! I'm learning spanish right now, my fourth language :) Two of your questions I can answer, it will be enough to live off each other considering the amout of blood they drink dosn't really do anything to the pray, so there will not be a problem there, the actual drinking part though... ;) And yes, both twins can go out in daylight since only their father was vampire, not their mom! Even though they turn they'll still have a lot of human in them. The thing in My Little Brother, it's actually extreemly simple, I think that's why a lot have problems getting it, it's got something to do with Bill's 'reaction' to do ;p *hugs you even tighter and refuses to let go any time soon*
Date: 05/24/08 08:36 pm Title: Chapter 3 One turns
Oh the feeding is nicely written. So sexual, I kinda miss those stories that are interesting because of that.
Maybe that's why vampires are hot.
Author's Response: I've always had a thing for vampires, not the ones that kill when they drink though! thank you sooooooooooooo much :) you're so good to me
Date: 05/24/08 07:33 pm Title: Chapter 3 One turns
Luce! This is so intense! I thought i was going to die because i was feeling the humiliation Simone was feeling as she watched her sons get off, without actually knowing :O I don't even know what i would do if i was her, though becuase they are vampires its not AS bad, but you know what i mean ;)
Awww i love you!(replying to your reply from your other fic) I am working on the next chapter! I've just haven't been able to write a lot lately because i've been so GAHH cuz i saw TOKIO HOTEL in concert last week!! XDDD You'd think that would give me more motivation to write, but apparently not! lol I'm about halfway done, so i will write twice as fast just for you bb.=)
Aww that sux(the downfall part) D: *hopes your okay nows*=)
Yeah i am a total sucker for good literature too, i will pretty much read anything(genre, style etc.)But no i have never read that book. :O Must find it and read it.
We have so much in common :P, sucks that we live half a world away from eachother though DD:
I will defs let you know when im gonna be hiding, which hopefully won't be anytime soon, though examples are coming up in three weeks so i probably won't be on much then DD: *cries* I hate school.
Anyway, can't wait for the next chapter!=)
Lots of love,
Andi
Author's Response: Andi *hugs* well, if I was Simone, but you know, were really my self on the inside, I'd be openly ogling twincest and loving it xD (peeeeeeeeeeeerrrrrrrrrrv) I really do miss the story (replying to your reply to my reply to your review), and I'm tremendously jealous that you've been at a consert, my country was one of those who didn't get a new tour date scedueled :'( and the downfall, yes that was a bad one, got a hate review ;p but I'm back in the game now! school can definitively be a bitch sometimes, but I'm lucky, only a 8% chance of having exams so hopefully I'll get to skip them ;D love ya Andi *hugs again...and again...and again...*
Date: 05/24/08 04:42 pm Title: Chapter 3 One turns
i'm enjoying this fic a lot. tho i don't want to be too selfish, i do wish it was updated more frequently.
also, hmm..recently, you've been messing up a bit on your spelling. just thought you should take note of that.
can't wait for the next bit :)
Author's Response: so sorry bout the spelling thing! I'm guessing it's words getting confused for others? I really want to update more frequently, but I'm not sure I can, what with my other stories as well :) loves for you !!!
Date: 05/24/08 04:25 pm Title: Prologue : Born Beautiful
I love this story!
And I especially love the poem as the summary, for totes.
:D
Author's Response: oh thank you, I wrote that and it means a lot to me that you like it !
Date: 05/10/08 05:10 pm Title: Chap. 1 Bloody brothers
Aww! ;-;
Author's Response: hihi
Date: 05/02/08 12:16 am Title: Chap. 1 Bloody brothers
Mmmm...fabulous! I've been reading Beren's vamp fic and I love it so much that I almost didn't want to give any other vamp fic a try. However, I love everything else you've written, so... *favorites*
Author's Response: I have it bad for 'put with the old in with the new' it's just such a marvelous story, basically my life at the moment. thank you so much, it really means a lot to me !!!
Date: 04/30/08 08:32 pm Title: Prologue : Born Beautiful
Your right i love that one =), but yours is so interesting and different. I love how subtle the relationship between Tom and Bill is, where they know its there, but they don't or try not to act on it, except for the time when Tom first bit him, but they were just like *whistles and looks away* :P like it didn't happen.
I also looooove the foreshadowing, with the whole "mate" thing. When Bill says "will we ever find mates Tomi?" innocently, and tom thinks to himself that him and Bill will both find bondmates, but he just wants to stay his brother. I like when those literary devices are used, it makes the stroy so much more interesting and fun to read becuase then you can predict what happens and when it does your all like YAY! i was right! well atleast thats what i do *blushes*
Still love this and can't wait for the next chapter :)
Literarily yours,
Andi
Author's Response: and now I am blushing worse then ever :) you're spoiling me Andi, but I'm not gonna complain ;p
Date: 04/30/08 07:20 pm Title: Chap. 1 Bloody brothers
Lucy! Congradulations! You've officially got me hooked, though I do love a good vampire story so that could be part of it, but it's probably just you. They don't sound much like brother to me (imagine that in a sing-song voice). From a mother's stand point they sound like a double heart attack to me but that just makes thing more interesting. It's cool that bill the more forward one. Tom's usually portrayd that way. I honestly have only the slightest idea where you're going w/ this so I'm looking forward to some nice suprises. Can't wait for an update (on both your most recent stories). I'm sorry this isn't longer but I'm getting yelled at to get to work. Update soon!
Author's Response: aw poor you *yells at yelling people to stay off my girl* I kinda feel sorry for Simone, imagine bringing up the kaulitz twins, only you add sharp theeth and a lust for blood ;) pretty much a nightmare...
Date: 04/30/08 03:44 pm Title: Chap. 1 Bloody brothers
A REVIEW???!!! And i will defenitly give one to you because that was friggen amazing! There are a few vamp fics out right now, but yours is defenitly my fave, which isn't a surprise =)
Can't wait for the next chapter!
Andi
Author's Response: oh my god, thank you so much, although I don't believe you have read Beren's 'out with the old in with the new' then, because that fic is just epic ! you know Andi, sometimes you just hold me together really well :)
Date: 04/30/08 01:55 pm Title: Chap. 1 Bloody brothers
This chapter was amazing. The exchange of blood was very hooot!!
*hugs*
Author's Response: oh, thank you so much, that really meant a lot to me !
Date: 04/30/08 11:07 am Title: Chap. 1 Bloody brothers
awww^^
that last paragraph just melted my heart:D
*hugs n kisses*
Author's Response: *hugs you back* thank you so much girl, you totally rock my world :)
Date: 04/30/08 08:41 am Title: Chap. 1 Bloody brothers
Ah, so they are both vampires then, that's a relief. It's interesting, your characterisations here; how it's Bill who seems to be more forward and Tom who wants to stay the same and not find a mate. I like it a lot... I wonder how long Tom will be able to resist his little brother, if Bill keeps pushing him like that^^
I adore vampires Lucy, I find the whole idea so fascinating. I liked the way you described the feeding scene, with Tom and Bill and the sexual undertones to it. I have absolutely no idea why, but I loved this line: Blood became a treat, but it wasn’t essential. Just the idea of blood being a treat for them... It was sexy. (Yeah, I'm strange^^)
Author's Response: I have to admit Emma that I have a thing for vampires as well, it's just too sad that most movies show their...worse sides ;) I could never make one twin mortal and then the other vampire, that would just cause to much pain...I don't like pain :( not to our boys anyway. I'm so glad you actually found a favorite line in it :) I tried really hard to put in some sentences that would give the story an...acient..undertone, if you get what I mean. So happy you review me Emma, makes it worth writing !
Date: 04/30/08 08:20 am Title: Chap. 1 Bloody brothers
it's fun.. how Billis going after girls not Tom.. ))) a nice reversal.. ))
Author's Response: well he couldn't go after his brother now could he...I mean they're twins, they would never do such a thing ;p
Date: 04/27/08 04:13 pm Title: Prologue : Born Beautiful
I seriously LOVE wampire stories!
basically anything supernatural appeals to my "madness" XD
Author's Response: haha I hope I can satisfie your madness with this then ;) I swear you review anything I write don't you ? seriously love you for it !!!
Date: 04/26/08 07:18 pm Title: Prologue : Born Beautiful
Lucy! My favorite author! You're back! With a new story that's not a one shot! Yay (thows a small party). I actually have no theories at the moment. If I thought about it for a while or bounced ideas off o someone I might come up w/ something but right now I'm not sure. I'm also kina rambling in the hopes that something will come to me. Let's see... the twins certainly won't be alone, they'll always have each other, unless one mortal and the other's not (don't you dare do that!), they might be ostrasized in school b/c they're differnt or something. They'll probably have speical powers. At some point in time (probably a rediculously long time in mortal years later) some vampire will decide that they souldn't exist or something and cause trouble. Their relationship could start out brotherly and then change, I haven't got any reason why though, or they might just love each other from the start. Um... That's all I got. Lookin forwar to seeing where you take this. Update soon.
Also, I want to know more about the vampires, how many are left (roughly) what are their rules, does Simone have contact w/ them at all? And more about how she raises bill and tom. What does she do w/ them for the first 17 years? Do they need anything special? etc...
Author's Response: Hecuba, such a pretty name for a queen :) my god this review was amazing and it's so fun to hear you call me your favorite author, og by the way we have something in common, saphere aude is one of my favorites too, she's a goddes for sure !!! it's so fun reading other's speculations and your are very interresting ;) and I love you for making hopes at the end because it helps me to figure out what I should sneak in, cus you know how authors have the story planned out, but they need something to fill out the blank spaces with and give the stories more depth :) and this really helps me, actually to prove that I really do apreciate this I'm gonna make sure that you will get answers to them all in the following chapters, hope you'll like the story hun! love Luce
Date: 04/26/08 04:34 pm Title: Prologue : Born Beautiful
Wow, this is really interesting Lucy... Definitely a potential favourite ^_^
Hmm, I already have lots of thoughts and questions about this... I wonder if they'll both inherit from their father, or whether one will be a vampire and the other mortal? Or whether they'll have different powers?
Whatever, it's going to be interesting to see how they'll face whatever lies in ahead of them.
More soon please, honey, I'm completely intrigued by this!
Author's Response: oh Emma I'm so happy you find it interesting cus I've wanted to do this for quite some time now :) Your questions will be answered in time love, I promise. Thank you so much for reviewing everything I wright, it really helps me through things !