Date: 07/07/08 09:42 am Title: The world is never fair
Are you kidding me? THIS IS THE END?? No. Write a sequel or something, I want more.
Author's Response: sorry, it's the end. I don't know about a sequel, but something in the same genre might be fun ,)
Date: 07/07/08 09:34 am Title: Chapter 3 One turns
OMG, no! STICK WITH THIS FIC! I am so in love with this plot, like you won't even believe.
Author's Response: lol thank you so much, I must say, you are one of the most passionate about this fic ,p
Date: 07/07/08 09:19 am Title: The world is never fair
The end already? :(
Author's Response: sorry ,)
Date: 07/07/08 09:16 am Title: Prologue : Born Beautiful
I AM REALLY EXCITED FOR THIS FIC!! And i really want to know how they will turn out. Will both of them be vampires/mortal, or will one turn out to be mortal and the other a vampire???
Author's Response: hihi, well you'll have to wait and see I guess ,p thanks for reviewing !
Date: 07/07/08 04:45 am Title: The world is never fair
ps:......................fuck
.........I liked it ..... -_-'
Author's Response: knew you would ,) *pets you* love <3
Date: 07/07/08 04:45 am Title: The world is never fair
O.O .......... omg, WHAT!?!?!?!?!?!
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!! *grabs you and shakes you like crazy* ARE YOU MAD?!?!?
First you kill Simone and then you END the story?!?!?!
...
*hides in a dark corner to cry her life out*
...
I hate you...
...*sob*
......................*cries even more* I'M GONNA CALL MY SIS TO BEAT THE CRAP OUT OF YOU! THIS ISNT FAAAAAAAAIIRRRR....!!!!
I LOVED THIS STORY SO MUCHHHH!!!! *sob*
*goes emo*
...love ur poetry btw...
NO! IM NOT ALLOWED TO LIKE IT CUZ U ENDED THIS! *slaps herself*
....
Lucy is bad... *sob*
..
no wild, sweaty and hot vampire sex...
damn.
*pouts*
Author's Response: sorry..omgomgomg SORRY...sorry sorry sorry *pulls you out of emo corner and hugs you* didn't mean to do that to ya honey, but I wasn't feeling the story :'( happy you liked my poetry though ,) thanksies
Date: 07/07/08 04:42 am Title: The world is never fair
The end? It doesn't feel like an ending to me. =o I guess it could be Bill and Tom's beginning, but it certainly doesn't feel like the end. More like it was incomplete. =o I still like it though! It just feels like something's missing.
Much love!
Author's Response: well, I've never written a fic with an open ending like this one before and I think you're right because I wasn't feeling it when I wrote this. Maybe the next time when I try it out it'll flow easier ,) love <3
Date: 07/07/08 03:43 am Title: The world is never fair
Oh that was such a good story. :D I loved it, from Simone's dealings with the twins to their own reaction to the entire situation. It was a bit of a bitter sweet ending, but wonderful none-the-less. Good job.
Author's Response: thank you so much, it really means a lot to me that you liked it because I was strugling a bit with this story !
Date: 07/06/08 10:20 pm Title: Chapter 4 The second turns
Ah, I was wondering what was going on w/ this story. So Bill's turned huh? Apart from the whole incest thing, is it wrong on other levels? Like vampire levels?
I really don't know what else to say. Are they ever going to encounter more vampires? What's going to happen now?
Author's Response: in vampire worlds it would be wrong as well considering their brothers, but as mates they will be accepted without question. love ya Queen <3
Date: 07/06/08 03:06 pm Title: Chapter 4 The second turns
I must say that I love that Tom isn't always the dominate one in your fics. I like that they go back and forth; it's just more realistic (and hotter) that way. And then when you make them both vampires... XD yum
Author's Response: you like that ? oh that makes me smile so bad because I really think hat in real life Bill is more dominant, or at least just as dominant as Tom is. They both have such strong personalities that I like to flip their roles around a bit to make it more belivable. lots of hugs <3 luce
Date: 07/05/08 11:43 pm Title: Chapter 4 The second turns
Wow that was...amazing and ...well... Just letting you know I read it...and loved it...and...excuse me >.>;
Author's Response: hahaaa are you feeling hot and bothered my dear summers ? ,) becasue that was indeed my intention, thanksies <3
Date: 07/05/08 11:27 am Title: Chapter 4 The second turns
Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah, I’m soooo glad that you updated this:-p
I was wondering when you would ;-) Did I mentioned that I really like the title of this story :-p
“Bill gasped as he finally pulled his teeth out, his mind clouded with lust and his trembling body pressed against his twin. He had no desire whatsoever to remove his mouth from the skin beneath his lips; Tom tasted far too intoxicating. And so he nibbled his twin’s neck, drawing deep moans from the older boy.”
That was just sooooooooo HOT. Girl you are really good at this, I all ready said it but you just are.
My stomach just flipped :-p *squeal* Just love the way you write ^^
““Oh. Holy. Fuck!” Tom was gaping at his fingers, rubbing them against each other as he examined the dried white substance. He lifted the covers and saw another spot of liquid at the bed, right next to him.”
Haha, that was funny. Tom realize what they did :-p
“It’s the vampire thing!” Bill’s voice was stern and Tom nodded his head. “That has to be it. When it happens I lose control over myself. That must have been why I…”
Jeah, sure blame it on that :-p And of course it is just that :-p hihi
“I can’t remember it all, but yeah…I remember it feeling good.” Bill’s turn to blush. “God, of all the places I could use my tongue and I had to use it there?”
OMG, haha Bill what an answer :-p jeah where would you use that tong then :-p I think that Tom got some ideas :-p
“So then we wait.” The dreadlocked boy peeked under the blanket carefully, resurfacing with a triumphant look on his face. So battle against boner had gone well after all.”
I had to laugh at this :D gaze at it did seem to help :-p Love the pieces of humour you putt in here ;-)
“Yeah and until then, you can always think of my tongue squirming around inside that tight, little hole of yours.” Tom turned freakishly red at that and Bill laughed, getting up from the bed and heading down for breakfast.”
Bill that wasn’t very nice of you :-p hihi ^^
This story is great so continue this to when you can ;-)
*hugs and kisses*
-xXx-
Author's Response: hihi now I'm happy I updated as well, cus I get to read your amazing reviews ,) I just love writing this kind of sex! LOVE it! hihi and Tom realizing, he's rather adorable sin't he ,p well if they can't blame it on alcohol, blame it on a blood high xD and I'm happy you like my humor it's just something that I like to fool around with and put in everywhere ,) hihi and Bill's naughty little comment at the end there *grinns* I'm evil aren't I xD I promise to continue as soon as I can, oh and I'm so happy you liked my title! a lot of people don't pay attention to those kinds of things and it's really nice that you do! lots of kisses, luce
Date: 07/05/08 07:50 am Title: Chapter 4 The second turns
aaaaawwwww I was SO missing reading ur stories!!!! *glomps u*
i dont know how the hell i survived 3 weeks without internet o.O
oh my...this chapp was breath taking hun!
so sexyyyyyyyy *melts*
please update fast! this story is..... *is feeling frustrated* u know.
:D love you so muuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuucccccccchhhh *hugs u till ur eyes pop out*
Author's Response: *trying to put eyes back in while hugging you at the same time* Great God I've missed you! we havn't talked in like...AGES who am I supposed to be dirty with huh? huh? haha so I managed to make you frustrated huh, well I've got much more to come! and I wanna tell you...like NOW ... shit ! princess *sobs* I miss you *wails* but you're here now, so life is good...until monday when I go away again!
Date: 07/04/08 09:50 am Title: Chapter 4 The second turns
no I wanna read more that was really hot.^_^
Author's Response: more will come...with time
Date: 06/30/08 03:36 pm Title: Chapter 3 One turns
I'm sorry to see that you won't finish this one, since it is such a great storie?
(Hmm... I could ask Andy if I could borrow her bazooka...)
Could you at least write Bill's turning and perhaps some explanation from Simone, why it would be such a horrible thing for the Twins to be each others mates?
(And maybe some gratuitous sex scene???) Please???? ;)
Tom losing control and scaring Bill... very nice... :D Thank You!
I read some of the reviews on this, and I must concur with the analysis that "out with the old..." REALLY is a GREAT storie!" (I actually cried when Tom received the news of his brother; I could feel Tom's need to get to his brother)
Author's Response: oh no, but I am finnishing it, it's just taking some time, new chapter up now though! I think Andy already has thretened me with her bazooka for this oO but I've updated now so ,) and you seem to be reading my mind, as you will see if you read more of this xD that's so fun! Beren's vamp fic is epic, no one compares it is my top one favorites story of all times! it even beats HP cus there's no sex in that (perverted yes I know) thyank you so much for this love, you know it means a lot to me!
Date: 06/30/08 02:46 pm Title: Chap. 1 Bloody brothers
"Guess what I wish for…"
A new computer? Ice cream? A soft toy puppy? A new light bulb to replace the broken one? A vacation? Higher grades? Sunshine? Snow? A stapler? Cd-player? The pirates of the Caribian trilogy on Blue-ray? New shoes? What??? How should I know...
Oh... A review!
Yes... Well...
Excellent! Very well written! I like it a lot! Yay for you!
Thank You! :)
Author's Response: although I would love a soft toy I would like it to be a kitten...kitten Bill preferably! and I don't like shoes so no thanks, but the rest I'm totally up for ,D hihi thanks a lot
Date: 06/30/08 01:52 pm Title: Prologue : Born Beautiful
Interesting... Hmmm Very interesting!
I like vamp-fics! Thank you!
Hope Bill and Tom turn out to be vampires!
Author's Response: your wish will be fullfilled ,) thanksies <3
Date: 05/26/08 05:17 pm Title: Chapter 3 One turns
Wow, that particular sin was amazing to read. >=P *licks lips* Loving this so much! This is really erotic! Vampire Bill, as I experienced once before, is very hot, but vampire Tom! *fans self* Wow! I still favor Bill though and can't wait til he has his share of Tom. ;D What Simone doesn't know won't hurt her, right? Guess I'll find out. =]
It's been a pleasure. ;] I'll be watching for updates.
Author's Response: aaaaaa *blushes* oh Summers I can't begin to explain how much this means to me! thank you! I guess vampire tom is more of this wild beast and vampire Bill is the seductive tease ;) I like them both! you've read 'out with the old in with the new' right? cus that's like the best vampire fic EVER !!! thanks again summers, love ya for it :)
Date: 05/25/08 08:50 am Title: Chapter 3 One turns
I like this story. Can't help it, I got a thing for vampires, well defently your kind of vampires :-p I wonder what will happen next. They really liked the biting didn't they, hihi. I feel sorry for their mam, it can't be easy raising vampires while she's human. She will never truly understand them, I think ;-)hihi, I really can get carried away in stories :D But I would love it if you would Update one of your sories as soon as you can of course, you would make me so happy ;-) I like them all, you're an amazing writer. Keep one writing. ;-)
Author's Response: Oh thank you so much sweety, it really means the world to me! I have a thing for vampires as well, they're great xD and you're probably right about Simone, must be hard for her indeed! I'll try to update to night or possibly tomorrow on 'The Kaulitz Residence' :) thanks again love *hugs*
Date: 05/25/08 08:42 am Title: Chapter 3 One turns
Lucy baby,hi!
this is my first time,i read fic with character death.
i usually dont read fics with this gentre cause i m a little sensintive to death.
But it worths it.
its so dark, so full of motions between the twins.
One for sure is that you can write very well, whatever you have in your mind :)
always the result is perfect.
love you for that.
Author's Response: *BLUSHES* god you make me do that so often ;D I totally agree with you, character death sucks, but in this one it was only for Jorg, promise! man, you are so good to me girl, I don't deserve you :) *hugs you tight*