Date: 04/01/09 07:59 am Title: Chapter 9
...Bill felt guilty for being in danger of breaking Tom's heart once more... -don't Bill, it's not tom's fault for being a lil' cold
Author's Response: <3
Date: 04/01/09 07:51 am Title: Chapter 8
...Only Jack trying to get what he wanted... - he's a selfish biatch.grrrr
...Tom is cursed...Or until he found true love... - that figures...poor Tomi... T__T
...This was just some sick dream he had and it was probably from the large amount of sunlight he was exposed to daily... - the same excuse, again
Author's Response: I blamed sunshine when Gestapo visited me at my bed. It is the cause of all evil. And everyhing good xD
Date: 04/01/09 07:35 am Title: Chapter 7
...He hated it when Tom did that! Yeah, lately, he hated a lot of things... - it's like, you hate him, but you can't stop loving him *sighs
Author's Response: I hate that feeling... aye.
Date: 04/01/09 07:23 am Title: Chapter 6
...Because you love him already and you've only known him for a week... - jealous now are we?
...But I am their captain and they will walk the plank if they care the wrong way... - aye, aye captain (we don't mind actually wuahahaha...)
Author's Response: Hahaha xD ;D
Date: 04/01/09 07:12 am Title: Chapter 5
...If only it wasn't for the fact that you actually managed to do it, I would've killed you myself. Again!... - owh no you won't! erm, please don't..???
Author's Response: xD
Date: 04/01/09 07:02 am Title: Chapter 4
...Tom was in the front, standing strong and not falling over, even if the boat rocked a bit... - aye, a pirate captain he is
...“You don't lay hand on my men, you understand?” Tom said with a dark, scary voice... - o0o0o0o0o0o H.O.T. (eh, was that even a right word to decribe this situation? - hot...haha)
...You just called me Jack... - yes!!! i was right *squels in delight
Author's Response: Hahaha xD I am getting predictable...
Date: 04/01/09 06:49 am Title: Chapter 3
...I can't let you die from me once more!... - o0o0o0o0, i have a very good guess about what captain tom meant *winks
Author's Response: Uuuuu! ;p
Date: 04/01/09 06:41 am Title: Chapter 2
...“This, Georg, is Bill, the landlubber"... - that's a pirate slang for 'land-lover' right?
...starboard meant right and port meant left... - owh, i didn't know that! you must have been studying ^__^
Author's Response: Something like that, yes :) And I was studying a bit, yes xD
Date: 04/01/09 06:25 am Title: Chapter 1
...that this pain would be there to remind him of why he did this, of why he abandoned everything he knew to become what he feared and loved the most; a pirate... - i loveeeeeee pitates too!!! especially when he looks like Johnny Depp... *sighs dreamil
Author's Response: Pirates are forevaaaah *sings*
Date: 03/29/09 10:49 pm Title: Chapter 16
Awww yay!!!
Author's Response: :)
Date: 03/07/09 06:53 pm Title: Chapter 16
I love the stories of pirates, but above all I love your stories :3
Author's Response: Aww, thank you! xD
Date: 03/02/09 11:45 am Title: Chapter 16
yay!
Author's Response: :)
Date: 03/02/09 11:03 am Title: Chapter 3
woah really good!
Author's Response: Thanks :)
Date: 02/19/09 07:25 am Title: Chapter 16
AWAWAWAWAWAW - I LOVED.
Eeek I love pirates - and I think I love pirate Bill and Tom more! X]
Yey for you! X]
x
Author's Response: Hahahey! Glad you think so! ;D Thanks.
Date: 02/15/09 12:30 pm Title: Chapter 1
He called Bill by his old boyfriend's name. That is commonly called a "freudian slip." It's a psychology term that basically means that you say what is in your subconscious. He didn't mean to call him by another name. It just happened to slip out.
Author's Response: Aye, that happens... All the time with me xD
Date: 01/28/09 04:04 am Title: Chapter 5
Whoa this is getting really good.
Author's Response: Glad you think so!
Date: 01/28/09 01:43 am Title: Chapter 3
Wow... Jack... As in Jack Sparrow?
Author's Response: No, as in "I like the name Jack" ;p
Date: 01/21/09 04:01 pm Title: Chapter 16
you have talent!
Author's Response: Three little words and my heart is fluttering with joy <3
Date: 01/19/09 02:11 am Title: Chapter 16
This whole story was bloody briliant from start to finish. I loved it.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for telling me ;D
Date: 12/29/08 06:01 pm Title: Chapter 16
omg that was teh best and i loved how you didn't even mention they were twins. everyone does... which doesnn't bother me... but it's still cool. i never would have thought of that! you are a wonderful writer!
Author's Response: Haha, okey ;p Thank you very much!