Date: 12/15/09 07:15 am Title: Chapter 1
Wow (: Unexpecting ending there! But your use of descriptive skills and idea lines are amazing :)
Date: 03/04/09 11:13 pm Title: Chapter 1
Damn! This is really good, I mean really good! I loved the detail and how you worded stuff...amazing. I cant wait for more of this.
And you dont write like your new to this at all.
Date: 12/26/08 02:42 pm Title: Chapter 1
Oh god! you write really good! keep this one up plz!!! is Bill a vampire?!
Date: 08/12/08 11:51 pm Title: Chapter 1
oooh, how sexy and mysterious. Keep going!
Date: 06/17/08 05:22 pm Title: Chapter 1
UPDATE UUUUUUUUUPPPPPPPPPPDDDDDDDDDDDDAAAAAAAAAAAAATTTTTTTTTTEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE
ppppppppplllllllllleeeeeeeeeeeaaaaaaaaaassssssssssseeeeeeeeee!!!!!!!!!!!!
Date: 05/24/08 02:13 am Title: Chapter 1
WOW, Awsomeness.
What comes next?
Date: 05/09/08 09:09 am Title: Chapter 1
I enjoyed reading this chapter, and I hope you will continue on writing it^^
Itīs awesomely good! :D
Date: 04/26/08 08:39 am Title: Chapter 1
go on babe
sound interesting.
Date: 04/25/08 12:54 pm Title: Chapter 1
Damn. This is good so far.
I'd like to be one of the slutty guys that Bill goes with. Damn he's sexy.
I hope you continue soon.
-Eddie-
Date: 04/25/08 11:41 am Title: Chapter 1
What creature is that?? I'm confused.
But otherwise, the story is great.
You're a fantastic writer xD
*hugs*
Date: 04/24/08 06:29 pm Title: Chapter 1
Wow. This is really good!
What is Bill?
Please update soon!
Date: 04/24/08 06:25 pm Title: Chapter 1
Dammn!!! That was pretty hott for a beginner as you say.
WOW!!! I look forward to more from you!
Date: 04/24/08 03:31 pm Title: Chapter 1
Yesss! I love vampire fics!!!
Bill is a vampire right??
Meh who cares the kissing was hot
And its really really well wrote!!!
Well done for on your first fic (:
Date: 04/24/08 02:14 pm Title: Chapter 1
its really good for ur first one i loved it i wanna know more please write more
Author's Response: Thank you!
Date: 04/24/08 02:04 pm Title: Chapter 1
HE's a vampire or something? And um, if Bill and Tom aren't related in this story, it's not twincest, right? Anyway, I like it, go on!
Author's Response: Yeah, he is sort of. And I'm new to this thing but I gathered that even if it's an AU then its still twincest...
Date: 04/24/08 01:43 pm Title: Chapter 1
Is Bill a vampire or something?? Oh Gosh!!!
This story is great!!! I LOVE it!!!
Please I need more!!! Update soon!!! *puppy eyes*
And be very welcome, hun
Author's Response: Thank you, and I knew there was something I forgot to mention lol.
Date: 04/24/08 01:04 pm Title: Chapter 1
hopefully it will get better? you are too modest! lovely work, more please!
Author's Response: Thank you ever so much!
