Date: 04/23/08 04:47 pm Title: 1 - 7 months
whoa...weird... What is he like a clone or a robot or something? I'm intrested in seeing where this goes
Date: 04/23/08 01:36 pm Title: 1 - 7 months
i think i might know where this is going, and if it is, then i love you! 'cuz i love stories like this. and the gradual shift into the futuristic setting was very good. i'm impressed. i think i'll wait until the next chapter to make any big assumptions. i hope this updates as frequently as 'filter' but i'll understand if it doesn't. i'll be waiting for the next chapter!
Author's Response: Go ahead and make assumptions, I love to hear what people think!
Date: 04/23/08 11:25 am Title: 1 - 7 months
whaaa...?
o_O
it said oder instead of order a few times, by the way XD
Author's Response: Yeah, I accidentally posted the unbeta'd version the first time >.o BadMuffin! I think it's fixed now though.
Date: 04/23/08 10:47 am Title: 1 - 7 months
I like this!! I would prefer if he never had a brother . it would be sad see him to want this clone to be the same as Bill
Date: 04/23/08 10:30 am Title: 1 - 7 months
what???
mi no comprede
Date: 04/23/08 09:33 am Title: 1 - 7 months
It is quite intriguing to why Tom would like to make a clone of himself... to make a Bill??? this is because he lost a real Bill or Bill never existed before???
I enjoy the way you are writing... it's a nice flow...
Author's Response: Thank you, I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Date: 04/23/08 09:00 am Title: 1 - 7 months
wow!! it's gonna be sci-fi of sorts!!! really interested... ))))
good beginning!!!! and i will be waiting fro an update!!!!!!!
Date: 04/23/08 08:22 am Title: 1 - 7 months
Too sleepy for a coherent review, but you know how much I love this. Hopefully I didn't do a shit beta job in my sleepy state.