Date: 04/25/11 10:34 pm Title: Chapter 3
Yeah I got that it seemed like it focused around the G's more, even thought it was like 5050 Twins and Gs. But it was just sad. Tom apprently dead even though he's still breathing and the Gs hopeing that Tom would get better. I was actually thinking that he was gonna jump out of the building.
Author's Response: I do tend to somehow focus more on the Gs, even if I'm including twins
Date: 11/03/08 11:35 pm Title: Chapter 1
Anchy, it looks like this person:
Reviewer: barra_arisa Anonymous
Date: 04/26/08 06:21 am
..has plagiarized your fic. I was searching on livejournal.com and found this: http://barra-arisa.livejournal.com/5255.html. She also posted it on fanfiction.net: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4255803/1/Broken_Silence.
She has also plagiarized Majestrix, Little Muse, Haylz, and others in the Tokio Hotel fandom. Feel free to bitch her out. We're trying to get her banned.
Author's Response: thanks a lot for telling me :)
Date: 04/27/08 08:13 pm Title: Chapter 3
Wait who said goodbye? was it Tom or Gustav?
Author's Response: it was Tom
Date: 04/27/08 01:58 am Title: Chapter 3
I totally got that feeling!!! Great fic!!!
Author's Response: Thanks :)
Date: 04/26/08 06:21 am Title: Chapter 2
O.o Oh my God. This fic is now my crack. I mean, gah! Seriously, oh my God! I thought they'd had a fight or Bill was on tour or something that's why he wasn't there and the G's were. But, oh no! You had to go and do - that! And it liked, killed a little bit of me, but don't worry if you write another chapter soon that part of me can be revived. But I already know it'll be one of those sad/happy stories because we already know the end is sad. He's not Jesus, its not like he going to come back to life. Amazing chapter and by sleep deprived brain loved it.
Author's Response: Thank you for the long review your sleep deprived brain managed to write. ^_^rnWell tomorrow is Easter for me, so i can revive him if you want, but it won't make for a very convincing story, would it?
Date: 04/25/08 10:37 pm Title: Chapter 2
OMG that is soooo sad!!!
Author's Response: I know. I have an addiction to writing sad stories
Date: 04/25/08 12:25 am Title: Chapter 2
Are you gonna make this into a whole Tom Sees Billas ghost kinda thing and then he commits suiside... >.> Whichever way.. I don't want time getting over Billa. I know how horrible that sounds but erm.. Yeah, I'm a bad person >.
Author's Response: Nope. I'm not planning on killing Tom, nor am i planing on showing Bill's ghost really.rnI just want to show a lovely friendship that survives throughout the years-namely Tom-Georg-Gusti. And i said it only 3 chapters long, so I wouldn't really have enough space to write all of those things.rnrn
Date: 04/23/08 06:09 pm Title: Chapter 1
O.o I can't wait for the next chapter. I wonder why Tom's in the hospital and why Bill's not the one visiting him instead of Gustav. We know that Georg and Gustav come to see him regularly, but what about Bill? What put Tom in the mental ward in the first place? I can NOT wait for the next chapter.
Author's Response: Thank you for the lovely review. I'll update today if i have the time. I've already written half of the second chapter
Date: 04/23/08 05:12 pm Title: Chapter 1
oh this sounds too good you have to write more!
Author's Response: at least 2 more chapters yes, but i'm not making this into a long fic.