Date: 08/08/09 11:57 pm Title: One Shot
O_O i liked it, a lot, but i am SOOOOOOOOOOOOO CONFUSED!!!!!!!!! omg DX please explain this to me?
Author's Response: Glad you liked it! Sorry for the confusion! I'm just coping my big explanation I gave before i hope you don't mind! Anyway,... Simone was a friend of the twin and she always loved them both very much, but she always like one more then the other and that was ,i>TOm. She never admitted it to him, until that night she got drunk. She just blabbed it out then, but she was so pissed that she didn't even know exactly what she was doing. Or that's what I wanted the readers to think. So she slept with Bill and the day after she ran away seeing the BIG mistake she had made. She avoided them until they had to leave again and then she said goodbye at the airport. She never saw them again. Until on her wedding day. Then she thinks back to the night before, Tom called her trying to keep her from marring Mick. She told him he's too late and that he shouldn't make excuses up for her, why she slept with his brother, Bill. In the end he shows up on her wedding and asks her if she loves him. She answers no and then he shoots her in the chest. If he couldn't have her no one should. He walked away... I only let his name fall twice in the story where you knew it was him. I did this to confuse you (readers). I hope you understand it better now:) Thank you for reading and reviewing!
Date: 03/02/09 07:24 pm Title: One Shot
wow thats all i can say!!!!
that was really....deep and
confusing, shit i'm still confused, i mean i know the twin she loved was tom but did both twins loved her back or did bill only wanted to get in her pants????
but you know what i kinda like the ending, there's not always a happy ending to every story right????!!!!=DD
Author's Response: True! I like the ending too. It's the only way I can see it ending. Yeah, bill loved her, but just as a dear friend. He sleeps around with anyone and she was no exception. They got drunk, he was horny, she was too wasted to realize who she was sleeping with. *BAM* trouble xD Thank you for leaving some feedback!*hugglezzzzzzzz*
Date: 01/26/09 04:39 pm Title: One Shot
good story. =)
Author's Response: Arigato!^^
Date: 01/04/09 10:25 pm Title: One Shot
How sad! I was a little confused though...Which brother did she REALLY want to be with?
Author's Response: She always liked Tom^^ Sorry for confusing you *hug* Thanks for reading and leaving a review!
Date: 12/25/08 01:28 pm Title: One Shot
omg..Did she die ?
Nice story :D
Author's Response: AWWWWWWW thank you!rn*B's Hyper because it's her B-day she became 19 just now^^*rnYes she did. Tom shot her. rnThank you so much for reviewing!^^rnHuggels!
Date: 06/25/08 02:29 pm Title: One Shot
Aww, this story was so good and had a sad ending. I love it. And U did a good job on confusing me, hehe.
Author's Response: jeej love confusing leute^^ Thanks for reading and leaving a response^^
Date: 05/23/08 07:49 pm Title: One Shot
Can you explain what happened? I have no idea what just went on there...It was really confusing...
Author's Response: Sure!rnSOrry I like confusing people in more then one ways >.< Anyway,...rnrnWell Simone was a friend of the twin and she always loved them both very much, but she always like one more then the other and that was TOm. She never admitted it to him untill that night she got drunk. She ust blabbed it out then, but she was so pissed that she didn't even know exactly what she was doing. Or that's what I wanted the readers to think. So she slept with Bill and the day after she ran away seeing the BIG mistake she had made. She avoided them until they had to leave again and then she said goodbye at the airport. She never sees them again. Until on her wedding day. Then she thinks back to the night before Tom called her trying to keep her from marring Mick. She tell's him he's to late and that he shouldn't make excuses up for why she slept with his brother Bill. In the end he shows up on her wedding and asks her if she loves him. She answers no and then he shoots her in the chest. If he couldn't have her no one should. He walked away...rnrnI only let his name fall twice in the story where you knew it was him. I did this to confuse you (readers). I hope you understand it better now:)rnrnThank you for reading and reviewing!
Date: 05/22/08 06:16 pm Title: One Shot
it was good...cept i'm pretty sure Simone is their mother's name which disturbed me quite a bit.
Author's Response: XD it's my lil sister's name toornI dunno why I used it though...
Date: 04/22/08 10:10 pm Title: One Shot
fantastic.
i was a bit confused between when she was talking to bill and when she was talking to tom, but other than that it was perfect!
Author's Response: ^^rnYeah it was meant to confuse you, so you wouldn't know who was who until the end^^rnGlad you liked it.