Really nice one shot, one thing though.. you’re writing multiple things as if the twins are around 8-10 years old maybe, not older then that, cause if they were 13 they would’ve surely have had their first kiss already like a peck with some girl at least Tom and their mother wouldn’t think it’s normal for them to take a bath together :b And lastly a 13 year old boy definitely knows that orgasms are and have had them many times by that age… So change their age to 9-10 and it’s perfect :)

0.0 Oddly enough, my bff/sister's name is Em.

This was so sweet and adorable and sexy all wrapped into a giant happy package lol. I seriously loved this, you're awesome

gooorrgeesousss and completely wicked!!

Wow!
This was the second time I read this, and I don't remember it being that good!
Good, Yes! But not that good!
You really build the sexual tension up in this one, from the innocent fun in the snow, via sweet, but not so innocent, twin time in the bath, to loving first time sex in the end!
You do make it sound like the twins belong together, and that is something I really appreciates!

Bill's sweetness has no end, when he let Tom warm his cold hands against his own warm stomach...

Nice name for a snowman!

The ending with the seemingly indoor snowfall, is a stroke of genius! Loved it!

Thank You once again for a very nice winter story in the fictional lives of the Kaulitz twins!
Of to read a printout version of "A Wolf's Tale"

Love
Anders

Author's Response: Oh goddess *blushes* I figured I should read through the fic before responding to your review, so that I knew what you were talking about ,p and I noticed that I wrote this fic before the beta aura, therefore it contained a huge amount of very embarrassing typos -.- I honestly did not think people would still read it. But now I’ve renovated the whole thing, so there should be a lot less typos than before! This comment “you do make it sound like the twins belong together” that meant so much to me, because that is all I ever try to do ^^ I did the thing with warming someone’s hands on my stomach, and I can tell you, I squeaked a hell of a lot more than Bill did, but it was nice ,) lol, and the snowman’s name is from a cheese I think xD love you for loving the indoors snow! You have a printout version of ‘a Wolf’s Tale’? oh dear…well, that one is definitely next on my renovation project xD I wrote a sequel for that one by the way, dedicated to you! But it’s bestiality, so maybe you haven’t read it ,p which I totally won’t blame you for not doing! Love you so <3 yours, luce

Omg how totally cute. Now I'm just a soppy mess, lol.

Oh and I think I like mistletoes now :-)

XXX

Author's Response: hihi thanksies Rosy, I've always loved mistletoes <3

aaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhh!!!!
:D
This fic is beautifuly beautiful :)
You really are one of my favorites and this fic is full of cuteness


Luv luv luv luv ya^^

Author's Response: oh thank you so much mariah :) I'm so happy you liked this one cus it took me some time to get it how I wanted it ;) *hugs*

This just brought me back to feeling Christmas goodness. The twins are so precious in this, and the feel is just slow and snow and warm and awww.

Author's Response: haha that review made me smile very much dear ! thank you for this :)

Awwww thanks luce! That was amazing! I think you out did yourself this time =)
The plot and Tom and Bill were so cute. And even though at the end they were being kinda naughty ;) it was still so innocent and sweet...i didn't want it to end =P
Still trying to make up new words that decribe you and your fics, but haven't come up with anything good yet lol.
Im all most done the next chapter of my fic! I worked really hard and as fast as i could just for you, so it should be up by tomorrow =)
Thanks again for that amazing fic and the dedication at the beginning, made me smile *blushes*
Love you so much

Author's Response: andiiiiiiiiiiii *squeals really bad* hey girl, I've missed you !!! haha you know me, what's a story if there's not a naughty bill and tom involved ;) and you better post that chap soon *points finger at you* that story is freakishly amazing...andimazing, that's my new word, your fic is Andimazing !!! and I just had to dedicate it to all of you guys, I don't know what I would do without you :) loves you back *hugs*

awww!
this is one of the cutest things I've ever read...you know, there is just something about Christmas fics that make me melt

Author's Response: hmm me to darling, it's just something bout the whole cozy atmosphere :)