Date: 05/28/08 07:53 pm Title: Step by Step
I was waiting for thif for so long!!
I love to see their relationship develop between the lines
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you're liking how their relationship is progressing! :)
Date: 05/28/08 07:06 pm Title: Step by Step
This was an interesting chapter. does simone know about tom's real situation? why's gordon so mean? i hope bill remembers his part for the day. i bet gordon would be thrilled if he knew the truth (don't get any ideas!!!) update soon.
Author's Response: No, Simone doesn't know about his real situation since Tom keeps convincing her of how well he's doing in life ^^ I guess you'll see whether Bill remembers his part in the next chapter ;P
Date: 05/28/08 06:59 pm Title: Step by Step
Aww! Just too cute! I love it! And I was especially happy when you just so happened to have updated when i was reading this! =D
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you're liking it! :D
Date: 05/28/08 06:44 pm Title: Step by Step
Awww, SO cute!
Can not wait till the next update.
You're such an amizing author.
By far one of the best I've come across, better than most published ones aswell.
Author's Response: oh wow, that's one hell of a compliment haha, thank you so much! :D
Date: 05/28/08 06:44 pm Title: Step by Step
im glad about this update..
it was so cutee.
bill is just so sweet =)
oh and good luck with your exams ;)
Author's Response: Thank you very much! :)
Date: 05/27/08 01:52 am Title: Situations
yay! I love this, great job!
update soon please!
~ golden_leafs
Author's Response: Thank you! :D
Date: 05/26/08 12:12 pm Title: Situations
i absolutely love this story.
here in holland, the weather is very nice
it's warm and sunny outside
so today
i pretended like i was sick
i printed out the last chapters and took it with me outside
i laid in the grass the whole day
reading your story over and over again :]
i seriously can't wait for the next chapter.
oh and btw
i've read all your story's and i think that you are mt favorite writer of this faction site :]
especially Valentines day, i loved very much!
keep on the good work!
(and finish the next chapter of this story fast very very please)
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm glad you like it so much :) unfortunately my laptop is broken (I'm on my dad's computer at the moment) and it might take up to a week to fix, and I can't update until then :(
Date: 05/25/08 03:16 am Title: Situations
Girl, I don't know why I keep losing track of this fic! I thought I put it in favorites long ago. You know I love it; it's absolutely beautiful. I love the progression in their relationship, and the smallest of actions between the two of them that really mean so much.
Author's Response: aw thank you, I'm really glad you're especially liking their developing relationship, since it's basically what this story is all about :)
Date: 05/23/08 12:00 pm Title: Situations
can't wait!! i love your fic^^
Author's Response: Thank you! :D
Date: 05/23/08 11:51 am Title: The Best Day
so sweet! bill's past is very sad
Author's Response: Thank you! ^^ and yeah, poor Bill :(
Date: 05/23/08 11:39 am Title: On The Edge
lol! he's just as innocent as a child! great chapter!
Author's Response: Thank you ^^
Date: 05/23/08 11:24 am Title: The Nicest Things
wow!! i love it!
Author's Response: Thank you!
Date: 05/23/08 11:11 am Title: Complications
LOL LOL LOL
A blowjob??? XD i could die from laughing too much in this chapter!
ah i got it! bill was still dressed in his nightgown! sorry for my annoying questions earlier!
Author's Response: haha, glad you liked it, and don't worry about asking questions ;)
Date: 05/23/08 11:03 am Title: Tom
bill's naivety is just too cute!
but i'd like to point out that there are somethings that disturb me. Like, bill who slept in tom's bed the first time, his feet were all dirty? I don't know if i didn't read with enough attention but, you didn't mention either if bill had changed his clinic nightgown in other clothes or is he still in it? People would notice nee? I think i'm going back to the previous chapter to make sure that i didn't miss anything.
This story's just amazing! i really love it!your writing's just perfect!(forgive my mistakes,english's not my first language u_u)
Author's Response: Thank you for the compliments! And about the dirty-ness, they shower and brush their teeth like any other human being, I didn't feel the need to mention it but since somebody else brought the showering up earlier I mentioned it in one of the chapters ;)
Date: 05/23/08 10:45 am Title: Bill
one of the cutest chapter ever writen!!i could melt in front of my screen bill's too cute!
Author's Response: aw haha, thank you! :D
Date: 05/22/08 03:48 pm Title: Situations
aww i love this story please write more!
Author's Response: Thank you! I'll update asap ;)
Date: 05/21/08 07:59 pm Title: Unbelievable
oh great story
i read it all now :)
its really intresting
and bill is so cute.
i loved the scene with the hug.
he trusts tom.
aw, great!
keep going
i love it.
and im curious about the wedding.
Author's Response: aw, thank you very much :)
Date: 05/21/08 04:44 pm Title: Situations
Oh yay! You had them do that thing! You know what I mean. LOL! You rock.
I was really touched by Bill hugging Tom because he wanted Tom to know he trusted him--and also because he is starting to crave contact with Tom. Beautiful scene.
And the I Spy game was so cute. It's a wonder how Bill is just now starting to experience life after being shut up for so long by his mother, and then afterwards in the mental hospital. He's finally becoming free.
Kudos.
Now write more. LOL. And good luck with your tests!
Author's Response: haha thank you! Thanks for telling me what exactly you liked, I apprecite that ^^ and you seem to always be getting what exactly each scene 'means', which is good :D I've got a few exam free days after friday, I'll continue writing then ;)
Date: 05/21/08 09:16 am Title: Situations
Please continue soon :D I like this chapter, it's cute ;)
Author's Response: Thank you! ^^
Date: 05/21/08 02:47 am Title: Situations
wow, i really like this story, 'it's beautiful' :D now i wanna see the movie it's based on :(
plz continue
Author's Response: Thank you! I'll continue asap ^^