Date: 06/10/08 11:03 am Title: Verities
I love this story. Bill is so innocent. It makes me kinda sad in a weird way. ;_;
GOOD LUCK ON YOUR EXAMMM.
Date: 06/10/08 08:51 am Title: Verities
Love the whole thing and always expecting the next chapter.
Date: 06/10/08 08:50 am Title: Verities
That bitch. Bill should poke her with a stick!!!!
Please, let him poke her with a stick!!!
Date: 06/10/08 08:25 am Title: Verities
Bill is just sooooooo adorable ^^
It's a fact ;-)
Cute chapter :3 I hope you comtinue soon!
xx Chiiii
Date: 06/10/08 08:23 am Title: Verities
aaaah, this is the cutest story ever :- D
Date: 06/10/08 08:02 am Title: Verities
Back of ex girlfriends! Tom is Bill's. Grrr.
I love this story. Bill is too cute. But I have a bad feeling he's gonna get hurt. I may actally cry. Lol. x
Date: 06/10/08 07:17 am Title: Verities
I was cringing so so much!
At what Bill was saying to Gordon.
But I also found it really funny.
And everyone always thinks that Bill's adorable, when you write him...with the exception of Oh Brother.
Can't wait for an update, was rather mint.
Date: 06/10/08 06:48 am Title: Verities
I just read this entire story all the way through. I seriously could not stop. Bill is so adorable even when he's doing stuff he's not supposed to, haha. More!!
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Date: 06/10/08 06:02 am Title: Verities
Yes bill is so friggin adorable here!!!!
Date: 06/10/08 05:54 am Title: Verities
Ugh! I can't believe it! Well maybe I can. Uh oh! Now what's Bill gonna think! And to think I expected this little family thing to go well. Not smoothly, but well. And now you leave me wondering... =o I shall be waiting eagerly. =]
Date: 06/10/08 05:33 am Title: Verities
omg
what a bitch! i don't like rachel :(
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Date: 06/09/08 09:52 am Title: Unbelievable
Sh*t! my review has submitted itself automatically O___O...WTF?
Whatever, i said...Oh yeah,Tom: in truth he is just a human being who needs love and attention,he wants to be noticed but not in the way his family do. Bill's innocence and naivety is a refreshing change for him,Bill needs to be with him and it 's the only thing that matter to him. He doesn't judge Tom, he accepts everything Tom has to give. I think if someone like Bill happens to love me and show me how important i am to him like that...I'd never let this person go(even if it's not LOVE, but "love") ç___ç /i'm being incoherent there,my french mind lacks english vocabulary XD)
I think,the growing affection between tom and bill is one of those things you can really call pure love. It's full of sincerity,innocence, purity and true feelings...
I guess i better quit, i do no longer know what i'm saying XD.Great chapter! It was hilarious,especially the coconut XD!
Date: 06/09/08 09:34 am Title: "We aren't good friends but we haven't known each other for long"
Yaaaaaaaaaaah!!
I loved this chapter! (sans the scene with david and his wife, of course). Tom's brother isn't very likeable. His family seems rich,but his ego and pride stop him to accept anything from them, and i understand his feelings,i'd do the same no matter what U___U.
Bill is far too adorable! i can't help but smile everytime you mention him, i'm melting!!! I want to hug him *__*
Tom's personality is very interesting and he is so...I don't know, he has that something that makes you want to help him,in a way...He seems strong with his stubborness, but in truth, he seems like a
Date: 06/08/08 03:29 pm Title: "We aren't good friends but we haven't known each other for long"
Cute chapter ^.^ I haven't notice any mistakes...but well, I'm not that good in English xD I hope you continue soon :D
Date: 06/08/08 01:40 pm Title: "We aren't good friends but we haven't known each other for long"
i love it!!!! more soon please =]
Date: 06/08/08 04:49 am Title: "We aren't good friends but we haven't known each other for long"
Gorgeous!!!
Date: 06/07/08 10:11 pm Title: "We aren't good friends but we haven't known each other for long"
aww that was cute
Date: 06/07/08 09:50 pm Title: "We aren't good friends but we haven't known each other for long"
god, i absolutely love this story...
Date: 06/07/08 08:13 pm Title: "We aren't good friends but we haven't known each other for long"
Hi
long time reader, first time reviewer!
Just wanted to tell you i'm so happy you update.
You never dissapoint!
Date: 06/07/08 07:19 pm Title: "We aren't good friends but we haven't known each other for long"
Aww how sweet and cute Bill and Tom are together. What a bitch that Rachel was to leave Tom for his brother and then act so cold about it...grr evil cow!! Loved the story, looking forward to more :D