Date: 06/21/08 10:18 pm Title: Verities
i know i already commented,
JW when your going to update? :)
anywhooo, GREAT story!
Date: 06/21/08 03:55 am Title: Verities
Ohhh my god. I'mma gonna faint if you don't write more of this.
Date: 06/19/08 09:33 pm Title: Verities
How could we not find Bill adorable? He's so innocent...but I think that last statement of Rachel's is going to mess him up a little. A little more, anyway.
Yeah well I'm really entertained by this story. I like that they're both flawed, it's a really endearing characteristic, which you've pulled off well.
Can't wait to see what happens next. :]
Date: 06/18/08 06:08 am Title: Verities
This is a great fic, I love it very much!! It`s really touching the way Tom tries to help Bill, and Bill`s trust towards Tom! The naiv, innocente Bill is just adorable;-)
I hope you will continue this lovely fic, I`m waiting for it:-)
Date: 06/16/08 12:10 pm Title: Verities
OMG!
I seriously rolled out of bed at this part:
Gordon ignored her. “How about we sit down and have a little chat?”
Bill gasped, and Simone’s full attention was back on him.
“You can sit?” He asked incredulously.
“Yes,” Gordon snapped, his patience wasn’t unlimited and he didn’t like how this boy confused him.
“Really?” Bill’s eyes went wide. “With a… with a…” He couldn’t bring himself to say it.
“What is it honey?” Simone asked him a little worriedly.
“I thought… I thought he had a, um… a stick up his ass,” Bill whispered the last part, sending Gordon a sympathetic look. He imagined it wasn’t very comfortable, especially not to sit.
Absolutely love this story
Date: 06/16/08 06:27 am Title: Verities
Noooooo!
I need the next chapter!!
Its such a good story, I love the writing!
Date: 06/16/08 06:17 am Title: Verities
Noooooo!
I need the next chapter!!
Its such a good story, I love the writing!
Date: 06/12/08 01:19 pm Title: Verities
:O nein! I hope Tom won't be angry with Bill for what he said... and, no Bill can't stop trusting Tom now-- now that their relationship was developing! D: poor Tom, even the last opportunity he had... god, with such a short chapter all their situations got fucked :O POST SOON! Oh, I hope your exam went well ;)
Date: 06/11/08 04:49 pm Title: Verities
finallyyyy!!
te bill in this is too cute!
Date: 06/11/08 02:45 pm Title: Verities
Uh-oh, I can sense all the coming drama. And btw the whole "How can you sit down if you have a stick up your ass?" made me laugh SO hard.
Date: 06/11/08 01:36 am Title: Verities
Well Bill IS adorable, i mean come on ! Look at him :P :D When is the next chapter coming? im looking forward to it :D:D:D:D:D
Yayyy
Date: 06/10/08 11:25 pm Title: Verities
Yes, we find Bill adorable, and now our adorable Bill is gonna get hurt! I just wanna lay a smackdown on Tomi's family! And Tomi's been fibbing...? Gah! That's it, I can't think about it... lol
Date: 06/10/08 07:35 pm Title: Verities
awww that was so cute!!!!
Date: 06/10/08 04:31 pm Title: Verities
Lots of different stories being told by lots of different people. Gordon's a jerk. Simon's kinda clueless, Rachel seems nice enough, she has a bit of a point. Is she happy though? Tom's got problems, drugs? Bill and Tom's stories are not lining up, and Bill is not supposed to be there legally. What a mess. UPdate soon.
Date: 06/10/08 02:31 pm Title: Verities
Wow! I loved this chapter! It was so funny!
Date: 06/10/08 02:27 pm Title: Verities
I'm scared. I hope Tom won't be too angry at Bill. He's such a cutie. AND OMG, RACHEL KNOWS HOW THEY FEEL ABOUT EACH OTHER!! That bitch.
Date: 06/10/08 01:34 pm Title: Verities
“You can sit?” He asked incredulously.
“Yes,” Gordon snapped, his patience wasn’t unlimited and he didn’t like how this boy confused him.
“Really?” Bill’s eyes went wide. “With a… with a…” He couldn’t bring himself to say it.
“What is it honey?” Simone asked him a little worriedly.
“I thought… I thought he had a, um… a stick up his ass,” Bill whispered the last part, sending Gordon a sympathetic look. He imagined it wasn’t very comfortable, especially not to sit.
Simone’s eyes widened, knitting her eyebrows in confusion at the same time.
“Excuse me?!” Gordon exclaimed, gaping.
Bill took a step back, blinking nervously. “Well, I- I thought… Tom said…” He stuttered.
What can I say? It's..omg, so fucking funny! Poor Bill believed it literally, I can't stop picturing the whole situation...
Cookies for you, you made me laugh and made my day much better.
Date: 06/10/08 01:25 pm Title: Verities
love this story! Bill really IS adorable:D I admire your ability to sort of make the film into a Tom&Bill story, you know, with all their feelings and stuff^^ Like, you (well I haven't seen the film, but) write the feelings of the characters in the movie into Bill&Tom's feelings..eh, sortaXD yeah, sorta rambling here..:P yeye..if you didn't understand what I was trying to say; all you need to know is that this story is great! :D *feels kinda stupid 'cause writing so much shit* XD
Date: 06/10/08 11:56 am Title: Tom
i love this story. cute :)
Date: 06/10/08 11:46 am Title: Verities
hahahhah, i was completely clueless to why Bill was confused Gordon could sit and the explanation was hilarious! omg, he really is so adorable in this fic. XD
And god, Tom is completely surrounded by liars. I pity him so much. At least Simone's there for him. :