Date: 07/23/08 08:51 pm Title: Epilogue
ah. yes! very very good ending. aw it was too sweet. =D
Author's Response: Thank you :)
Date: 07/23/08 08:47 pm Title: Epilogue
OMG! I can't believe this story's over *sniffles*
The very last line - 'but think about it - how far would you go, if you were in love?' was genius. I loved it, every bit of it.
Woah, a year in a psychiatric clinic? He really IS in love! XDDD Bill's such a cutie, suckin' on his lollipop. I'm so sad that this story ended so soon...
But since it did, ya think you can update 'but you can't be numb for love?' That's my favorite story of yours so far!
Author's Response: Aw, thank you, glad you liked it! I'll make sure to update your favourite story next ;)
Date: 07/23/08 08:42 pm Title: Epilogue
I can't believe it's over, wow. After all that the reading was really sweet, and I don;t want you to feel bad at all, but it was kind of what I expected. The ending was just average, which was kind of a let down because I love your stories.
I wanted to tell you what I really thought, not the simple 'OMG I loved it' you know?
It really was a good story, but there was just something missing.
Author's Response: I can understand the ending isn't WOW, sinde the climax was Bill & Tom being seperated and re-uniting. But also since this is based off a movie, I had the movie in mind all the time and 'subconciously' kept the story close to what I remembered of the movie, and the movie ended with the shopping scene ;) Glad you liked it overall though.
Date: 07/23/08 08:39 pm Title: Epilogue
OH.MY.GAWD. That was so amazing! I even cried! You are a truly talented author!
Author's Response: Thank you so much, I'm glad you enjoyed it :D
Date: 07/23/08 08:39 pm Title: Epilogue
The ending was so beautiful.
Another great one by you.
Thank you for this wonderful, wonderful story.
Author's Response: Thank YOU for reading it! I'm glad you liked the ending :)
Date: 07/22/08 04:55 pm Title: Barefoot
:( Aw... Well at least it was a nice story ^_^
Date: 07/22/08 04:05 pm Title: Barefoot
How sweet! Finally they are together!! This Tom really love Bill, if he could move in a psychiatric institude for Bill!! By the way, I really sorry for you about your laptop!! It is awfull:-(
It has happened also to me, when a thunderstorm cancelled every information from my computer:-(
Date: 07/22/08 02:38 pm Title: Barefoot
aw i loved how you ended this. well done (:
Date: 07/21/08 03:43 pm Title: Barefoot
N'awwww T____T
What a way to end. I can honestly say I hadn't expected it to take a turn like that! Though I'm rather happy about it!
Date: 07/21/08 10:37 am Title: Barefoot
eek I love this *sobs*
Date: 07/21/08 09:09 am Title: Barefoot
that was so cute. three cheers for author. *hip hip horray* *hip hip horray* *hip hip horray*
Date: 07/21/08 08:58 am Title: Barefoot
waaaaahh i didn't expect that..
wow @ tom
Date: 07/21/08 08:18 am Title: Barefoot
My god, they're soo cute. And barefoot!
Date: 07/21/08 07:49 am Title: Barefoot
That was such a beautiful ending! It was perfect for this! *sighs dreamily*
Date: 07/21/08 07:09 am Title: Barefoot
AWW that was cute!! I'm glad Tom fought to be with Bill! It was just so...I dunno, perfect! Looking forward to more even if more means the end!
Date: 07/21/08 06:14 am Title: Barefoot
Great chapter ^^ Finally together ^^ I hope you continue soon :D
xx Chi
Date: 07/21/08 06:05 am Title: Barefoot
Awww. That was so beautiful, but so sad at the same time. Beautiful because they are together at least. But sad because he never got Bill out of the hospital.
When he went for the job I kinda thought he was gonna get himself some security and then fight to get Bill released.
But I'm just happy they are together :-)
This is a beautiful and very moving story, and one of the best I've read on the site. I'm voting it to be featured.
xx
Date: 07/21/08 06:02 am Title: Barefoot
Guhh
Asif this is finished soon
It's too good
Spoilers are looking so so good right now
But I'm not going to
I want them to get out, but in all honesty, I could careless what happens to them
As long as they're together
I want to watch the movie so bad right now!
Amazing, as always.
Date: 07/21/08 05:02 am Title: Barefoot
omg
good thing I knew how it would end, otherwise I would be crying my eyes out now!
I love the little change to the ending though, with Tom and Bill kissing! I kinda missed that in the film. Like, they didn't even share ONE kiss o.O
anyway, can't wait for the epilogue, it was one of my favourite parts of the movie ^^
but I'm so said it's almost over.
you could like, make a sequel? :D just a sugestion ^^
anyways, I'll stop rambling now, thanks for the update!
xoxo
