Date: 09/28/10 11:30 am Title: Chapter 23: Carvings & Promises
awhhh!! im loving this story!!!!!!!!!!!!!! UpdateUpdateUpdate!!! Puh-leaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaasee!! xx
Author's Response: I have had such writer's block for a long time. I am actually thinking of going through the story and rewriting it a little and continue it. but i have nothing for an update right now.rnrnThank you for reading my story and loving it.rnrnThanks, Cynnn
Date: 08/19/10 11:39 pm Title: Chapter 2: Shopping Spree
Damn you need a beta. Are you writing about yourself? You really need a beta. This is an eyesore.
Author's Response: I know i need a beta, and no I am not writing about myself. This story is on pause right now, because I am going to rewrite it, so its better. rnrnAnd you know you don't have to be mean about the story about being an eyesore, just don't read it.
Date: 03/07/09 08:23 am Title: Chapter 3: Crying
awww love how you've made Tomi!! =)
Author's Response: danke
Date: 03/06/09 04:38 pm Title: Chapter 2: Shopping Spree
Great Love it! I feel sorry for Cynn. No fun to cry over past memories
Author's Response: its not a story for the light hearted. Its a dark story to a point
Date: 03/02/09 06:54 pm Title: Chapter 1: Moving and Surprises
Ich liebe die chapter!!!
Author's Response: Danke, ich liebe diese Geschichte
Date: 03/01/09 09:30 pm Title: Prologue
Love the prologue!!!!
Author's Response: thanks. hope you read more.
Date: 01/31/09 12:46 am Title: Chapter 14: A Concert and Vacation.
I love this story! sorry I haven't been reviewing, but I had some minor keyboard problems. :( asdertzcg all would not work, and those are some damned important letters. I love love love the way you write. I was litterally on the edge of my seat half the time while reading it, you rock!*w*
Author's Response: thanks a lot. You are the reason I keep writing when I can.
Date: 12/30/08 09:34 am Title: Prologue
is that you in the banner?
Author's Response: Ja, but that is because I needed a picture and I got that picture made for me.
Date: 12/30/08 04:21 am Title: Prologue
I haven't read yet, so you could have created a marvelous OFC here for all I know, but from your prologue's author's note, I think the idea you have of what constitutes a Mary-Sue is a bit skewed. It's not based on experience alone; it couldn't be. Just recommending the site's "Understanding Mary-Sue" guide, it's really helpful.
Date: 10/10/08 01:37 pm Title: Chapter 21: Tears of Pain
Hey, I like the storie. Or at least the idea, but I think you have a lot of spelling mistakes. Not that I cear about that stuff, but you write it kinda like a list. Like, know that happend, and then that happend. And some times the names changes, like Raven suddenly was Ravyn. And some times Erin was named Jack? well keep up writing. Cuz I am kinda edicted....
Author's Response: I am sorry for the name change. From Jack to Erin. Because I orginally wrote with Jack and when i was rewriting it I changed the name. But if you don't like it then don't read.
Date: 06/29/08 02:29 pm Title: Chapter 1: Moving and Surprises
so so so cool!
Date: 06/27/08 01:46 am Title: Chapter 20: On Tour
OMG!!! Like Bill won't know Gus was throwin Ceral in his hair. LOL But that's so qute. He cares lol But who the fuck can ya'll be compy on that bed oh btw I think you are like a month???? But I'm not sure
Author's Response: Thanks for figuring out how along I'm. Lol
Date: 06/26/08 09:05 pm Title: Chapter 19: Part 2: Doctor's Visit
Yo!!!! You need to update!!! I'm on the edge of my seat. So is Bill. We really wanna see what happens. UPDATE SOON!!!!
Date: 06/21/08 11:06 pm Title: Chapter 19: Part 2: Doctor's Visit
I love it! Looking forward to the next chapter!! :)
Date: 06/19/08 01:52 am Title: Chapter 19: Part 2: Doctor's Visit
Thanks for giving me credit. Can't wait for the next one.
Date: 04/27/08 05:34 pm Title: Chapter 19: Part 1: Doctor's
Love it I hope you update it soon.
Date: 02/27/08 04:53 am Title: Chapter 18: Unexpected Information
omg sooo good!!! thank you for the update!!!! omg whuts gonna happen next?!?!?!?! gerr i want to know!!!! update soon please!!!
Author's Response: the next chapter is still being written, it's going to be updated this weekend because I am too tired to think and write.
Date: 02/11/08 12:21 pm Title: Chapter 17: Beach, Sun & Fun
I liked it I thought it was really good.
Date: 01/18/08 07:38 pm Title: Chapter 16: Seeing Old Friends
Where Am I??? I want to be back in the picture!!!! I mean me und Bill need a wee bit bigger parts you know!!! I love the whloe Chapter where We scare the guys. lol That's how they WOULD react too. lol I think David would just start to guve us CPR or something like that. Bill would faint. LOL man that's funny we should do that some day to them. lol
Author's Response: Well in your story, I don't have a big part. Well me and Tom are on vacation, ALONE.
Date: 01/18/08 03:52 pm Title: Chapter 16: Seeing Old Friends
really god, love it :D