Date: 10/02/12 01:17 pm Title: Falling In Love At a Coffee Shop
aw that was sweet :)
Date: 07/28/10 04:13 pm Title: Falling In Love At a Coffee Shop
Aww it was so cute when georg and Tom asked permission for a kiss X3
Date: 06/12/09 05:40 pm Title: Falling In Love At a Coffee Shop
you're welcome.
Author's Response: ;)
Date: 06/12/09 03:05 am Title: Falling In Love At a Coffee Shop
Haha this made me laugh.
I wrote one to this song (although it wasnt twincest.)
good job.
Georg and Gustav were awesome.
Author's Response: aww thanks. ;)
Date: 05/07/09 06:38 pm Title: Falling In Love At a Coffee Shop
So.... my review hugs you ;) Great story, I love how you describe what they love about each other... I LOVE Georg's eyes. :p glad to see they are in the fic. I love the ending!
Author's Response: awww ♥ thanks!
Date: 12/29/08 04:55 pm Title: Falling In Love At a Coffee Shop
ah, so adorable!!!! i wish you'd have gustav and georg say 'i love you" though. kinda going through an obss]ession at the moment. anywho,was there really a twincest photoshoot?!?!?!?!?!
i have to know, i have to find thaqt picture. you know, if it exists. let me know.
Author's Response: lmao. sorry, but the picture i was talking about was just a manip. ): i didn't know that when i was writing this. ): but yeah, hha. thanks for reviewing. :)
Date: 07/02/08 08:25 pm Title: Falling In Love At a Coffee Shop
Awwww that was amazing. *grin*
Author's Response: danke! :D
Date: 06/24/08 01:56 am Title: Falling In Love At a Coffee Shop
Aww, so sweet. That just made my insides melt.
Author's Response: why thank you. (:
Date: 04/22/08 03:42 pm Title: Falling In Love At a Coffee Shop
That song is amazing. My friend showed it to me, and I loved it from the start. Very very good. Especially if you say that's your first song fic.
Author's Response: the other song fic-ishh thing i did was in rescue me. thanks so much. did you review all my stuff? hahaa, thanks again. :]
Date: 04/21/08 05:12 pm Title: Falling In Love At a Coffee Shop
i'd love to see bill and tom do fanservice. XD
Author's Response: if youve ever seen the picture with tom putting his hand in bill's pants, thats fan service; it wasnt photoshopped. and any pictures of them kissing are fan service pictures. theyre paid to do it, but i know even if they werent theyd do it anyway. thanks for reviewing. :]
Date: 04/21/08 04:30 pm Title: Falling In Love At a Coffee Shop
Aww, so cute :)
It was one of those historys that make you feel good, you know? And I love fluff, and you used it really well haha
Sooo, I loved it :D
Author's Response: awwww, thank you. :] i felt good about this one. :]
Date: 04/21/08 11:57 am Title: Falling In Love At a Coffee Shop
Sweet ^^
Author's Response: danke. :]
Date: 04/21/08 03:38 am Title: Falling In Love At a Coffee Shop
this was really cute!
Author's Response: woooooohhhh, yay! thank youu!
Date: 04/21/08 03:01 am Title: Falling In Love At a Coffee Shop
Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww
Author's Response: yay, thank you!
Date: 04/21/08 01:20 am Title: Falling In Love At a Coffee Shop
Cute! Loved it!
Author's Response: thank you!
Date: 04/21/08 12:26 am Title: Falling In Love At a Coffee Shop
Firstly there are a few grammar mistakes you need to look over. Get yourself a beta sweets
A little note, I'm one of the one's listed if you'd like for me to dress it up some
Points up to where it says Beta Readers under Main Menu![]()
Bill remembered the only time it was okay for him to touch that lip ring with his own lips; the photo shoots they were paid to do, or fan service as the photographer called it. After their first shoot like that, Bill tried to get more booked, but always failed.
omg I so have a similar idea of my own for a future fic
So hot right?![]()
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I L
VED it. I've never heard this song before, btw. I'll do a youtube search for it later.
It's so cute
I think it's hardcore. It's a humorous piece of fluff
and I swear, lol, I thought that Bill and Tom were actually having a telepathic conversation while they were at the table
I was all like, "Well isn't this new?" ![]()
Good job and very enjoyable length ![]()
~Ria ![]()
Author's Response: thanks so much. youre totally my beta, just beacuse youre amazing. ;] fluff is fun sometimes. ;] thanks again. :] you get cookies. :]
Date: 04/21/08 12:04 am Title: Falling In Love At a Coffee Shop
Its very "feel-good" and there are some grammar errors and misunderstandings, like its "hence" not "hints".
But other than that, it wasnt written badly. ^^ The fluff makes me want to brush my teeth. XDD. But its cute. ^^ I liked it. ^^ and its rare you get G/G with Twincest, so i was happy for that!
Author's Response: yeah, im kinda failing grammar. ill changed that. i almost always have G/G and twincest. i love both so much. just twincest a little more. hahaa, thanks for reviewing. :]
Date: 04/20/08 11:40 pm Title: Falling In Love At a Coffee Shop
cute loved it
Author's Response: wooohhhh. for being my first review, you get cookiesss!!! 858450384584530845843. that many too.
