Date: 03/07/10 10:32 pm Title: Chap 1: Some more waffles?
I really like this story!! please get anotherchapter up, the suspense is killing me
Date: 05/21/08 09:27 am Title: Chap 2: Like a child with Christmas
Lovely story :D Please continue soon :D
Author's Response: Thnx, I will, but it still needs to be beta'ad [a]
Date: 05/18/08 09:42 pm Title: Chap 2: Like a child with Christmas
aw write more, this sounds cute and weird :)
Author's Response: Thnx!^^ It needs to be beta'ad again 'cause it's stil full of errors...
Date: 05/07/08 08:51 pm Title: Chap 2: Like a child with Christmas
AHH!!! GEORG!! you have to continue this!! the band should meet ella's mum or something.. and then they like.. let her stay.. somehow cope with thomas..?
Author's Response: Maybe, even I don't know![a]
Date: 04/26/08 07:52 am Title: Chap 1: Some more waffles?
great story
please continue soooon!!
Author's Response: Thanks, I will
Date: 04/22/08 01:54 pm Title: Chap 2: Like a child with Christmas
Um... tis 'she laid'. Nu zeg je 'ze loog'. En JEEEEJ!!! Daar is La Luup! Merci!
Is Bill bezet? ^^
Author's Response: Oh ja? Whatever^.^ Ik zal zien, ik zal zien!:Prn
Date: 04/21/08 06:57 pm Title: Chap 2: Like a child with Christmas
nice going!
you've actually got a really nice beginning to an OFC story. most are crap. :D
Author's Response: Well, thank you! =D I'm flattered!
Date: 04/21/08 06:42 pm Title: Chap 2: Like a child with Christmas
Cute story, im liking it so far. Please updae xD
Author's Response: Thanks, I'll update it in a minute^.^
Date: 04/21/08 04:50 pm Title: Chap 1: Some more waffles?
i'm confuzzled.
is Ella an angel?
is her brother dead or alive?
can her mom see her dad and brother?
could you explain in the next addition?
plz + thanx
Author's Response: Well, I'll explain it to you like this. Ella isn't exactly an angel, she just has wings. Dunno what I'm gonna do with that, but I'll see^.^ Her brother is dead, and her mother can't see ghosts. I think Ella's the only one who can. Something like this?
Date: 04/20/08 03:38 pm Title: Chap 1: Some more waffles?
ummm...i think you posted the story twice, out of order or something?
and try to work on sorting out what tense you're going to tell the story in.
Author's Response: Yeah, I saw, I've edited it. rnrnHow do you mean? I thought I had put it all in the past?
Date: 04/20/08 03:22 pm Title: Chap 1: Some more waffles?
ok im not sure if its ment to be like tth but it repets the hole thing agen afta the kitchen bit but ofa dan dat its gr8 plz write more
ly
x
Author's Response: Of course it's not ment to be like that, thanks for saying, I've edited it.rnThanks =) I'm waiting on the Betaversion right now of chap 2
Date: 04/20/08 03:13 pm Title: Chap 1: Some more waffles?
Yep het hoofdstuk dubbel gepost. En is er nog een plekje voor La Luup? ^^
Author's Response: xD Aangepast! En ik zal ens ffkes kijken hoe ik je erin prop^^ Maar ik beloof niet dat het een grote rol wordt!