Date: 04/19/09 06:30 am Title: Mon 2:13 p.m., Hamburg
Wow, that's my first reaction. I wasn't sure about the first person style when I started reading - I don't usually like that - but it worked really well for pulling the reader in. Very powerful stuff.
Date: 04/15/09 06:15 pm Title: Wed 8:52 a.m., Berlin; Wed 2:52 a.m., Georgetown
Okay this is like my 100th time reading this story I love it that much.
If you don't mind me asking who did your banner?
Author's Response: We credit the banner artist of each story in the story notes.
Date: 04/15/09 03:32 pm Title: Mon 2:13 p.m., Hamburg
Oh. My. God.
I cried during this ENTIRE chapter, and after finishing it, I reread it three times. I am sooo happy you didn't kill Bill! :D Wonderful story, fantastic job!
Date: 04/07/09 12:16 pm Title: Mon 2:13 p.m., Hamburg
WHEW
Date: 04/07/09 12:13 pm Title: Wed 8:52 a.m., Berlin; Wed 2:52 a.m., Georgetown
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH NNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!
Date: 03/28/09 11:53 pm Title: Mon 2:13 p.m., Hamburg
ahh, i just couldn't bring myself to go to sleep after reading the first chapter. this story was so addicting! it was thrilling, it has so much suspense, and it seemed like a movie i'd go out && watched. i loved this so much, && you guys couldn't have ended it more beautifuly. definitely favoriting this.(:
Date: 03/28/09 11:06 pm Title: Wed 8:52 a.m., Berlin; Wed 2:52 a.m., Georgetown
loving this so far! i must remember to go back && read the rest of this. but for now, it's time for some sleep :D
Date: 03/21/09 12:17 am Title: Mon 2:13 p.m., Hamburg
I hate you. That's the second story in a row that I've read where you make me think that someone's dead or something happened that didn't and then they end up NOT being dead/it didn't happen. Its messes with my heart, gives me palpitations, makes me cry, but I fucking LOVE IT. Great story. Just.... amazing. Thanks again.
Date: 03/17/09 04:13 pm Title: Mon 2:13 p.m., Hamburg
omg! you have no idea how much i love you for not actually killing bill, i'm so glad i didn't stop reading at the last chapter, that i had the force of will to belive you wouldn't really kill him!, omg, this is stupid but i feel so releaved right now. i litterally slumped in my chair when the 'soimebody' asked if there would be that many people at his funeral, when he gripped his hand, and sadly i skipped one paragraph a head to see who it was, i was so releaved.
this was a different style for you two isnt' it? i'm not sure iv ever read your stuf in first person before? or maybe i'm just delusional.
Author's Response: This was our first collab together, so you could actually say the rest of our stuff is what's different, lol. But we thought the first-person, present tense would be better for making the reader nervous and putting them right there.
Date: 02/18/09 01:27 am Title: Mon 2:13 p.m., Hamburg
dude, i cryed...
Date: 01/20/09 03:39 pm Title: Wed 8:52 a.m., Berlin; Wed 2:52 a.m., Georgetown
oh mein gott this great
i love it!!!!
(oh hey, i'm the 483th reviewer)
Author's Response: Hehe, noticed that too. ;)
Date: 01/11/09 05:50 am Title: Mon 2:13 p.m., Hamburg
Oh my god BILL!!! *crushes him in a massive hug*
I didn't see the next button! I thought he diiieeddd!!! My friend told me to look again...I'm gonna go kiss em now... XD not really...umm...
So sad, so lovely...
Date: 01/11/09 12:34 am Title: Mon 2:13 p.m., Hamburg
Oh my god dude, you know how to give a girl a heart attack xD I started to think I'd be crying myself to sleep, mourning poor Bill's death and Tom's sorrow until I read the last paragraph. Loved it ;))
xxx rin
Date: 12/28/08 12:24 am Title: Mon 2:13 p.m., Hamburg
Oh my god! You made me think Bill DIED!!! I actually cried!! This was beautiful and wonderful and and and too good for words. Again you did an awesome job! Thank you!
Date: 12/27/08 03:15 pm Title: Mon 2:13 p.m., Hamburg
Oh my god. That wasnt funny, we are all sitting here and reading this thinking it is Bill who died and then its Saki's grave. What happened to Time of Death and all that. Did he come back from the dead or something. What happened,
Date: 12/27/08 03:11 pm Title: Wed 8:52 a.m., Berlin; Wed 2:52 a.m., Georgetown
Oh no. How could you. Im crying. You cant kill Bill. and how did they get off the plane. Bill is being shot and then it is fourty mon later and he is in the hospital. What happened in those fourty min. We were all waiting on the rescue and we dont even get to see it. come on. So far this is a good story just add the rescue and what happened to Gustav.
Date: 12/27/08 02:59 pm Title: Wed 5:22 a.m., Berlin; Tue 11:22 p.m., Georgetown
You are evil. I have a feeling not all the band is going to make it out and then it will suck. They are all going to be messed up it the mind. Oh think of their parents. Its got to be all over the news by now and they are going to be freaking out. Poor Simone, now she knows what Bill was saying, but at least she thinking that if they were to die then she got to talk to them one last time. The others didnt. You should have a short chap or a blurp on the parents. that would be good for the story. And think that the other people on the plane are feeling. Oh well. Its fiction. But really good fiction. Thank goodness that it is fiction. Dont even want to think about what would happen if it wasnt.
Date: 12/27/08 02:51 pm Title: Wed 3:39 a.m., Berlin; Tue 9:39 p.m., Georgetown
Why would someone put celebrities(?) on a plane with a criminal. Dont they have to tell the passengers that there is anyway. I dont think Jost would do something like that. He wouldnt take the risk. Oh well it works for the story. I really like this story and it is keeping me on edge. Im geussing that the reason that Tomi passed out is the head wound. And that means that they are almost ready to be rescued since otherwise Tom would have passed out by now. And the fact that they went to the bathroom, I think that maybe someone called for help since in the begining Tom had service on his cellphone. Yeah now I am rambleing so I am just going to say I really enjoy this story a lot and am looking forward to the next chapters.
Date: 12/27/08 01:51 pm Title: Wed 12:18 a.m., Berlin; Tue 6:18 p.m., Georgetown
Oh no. Gustav, Georg, Bill, and Tom, all better make it out. But I have a feeling one of them isnt. This is really good and Ims sitting on the edge of my seat to get to the next chapter.
Date: 12/27/08 01:45 pm Title: Tue 11:48 p.m., Berlin; Tue 5:48 p.m., Georgetown
Oh shit! Oh no. Tomi is screwed. Either he gets out and is hen killed and then his brother is killed, or he doesnt give up, and they kill them both. Except we know that they both live long enough to see a paramedic when they get off the plane. Thank goodness.