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Reviewer: tomik Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/11/10 10:37 am Title: One-shot

take a bow. good one-shot.

Reviewer: Maria Dane-Edwards Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/10/10 12:02 pm Title: One-shot

This was a beautiful little story. Although it's a few years ago, you could still write that sequel :D

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Maria

Reviewer: aynickay Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/25/09 10:36 pm Title: One-shot

This made me smile from ear to ear. :D

Reviewer: CrystalTCM Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/17/09 08:08 pm Title: One-shot

ohhh that was good, totally not expecting the ending its was great!!

Reviewer: TokioHotelfanSam Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/09/08 04:19 pm Title: One-shot

Wow! Another amazing story ^^
I totally fell in love with your writing!

Reviewer: tokios_latest_victim Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/21/08 05:59 am Title: One-shot

please don't tell me that's all!?!?!?!

Author's Response: thats all fer nau. but there might come more ;)

Reviewer: Scarlett Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/20/08 06:42 pm Title: One-shot

So warm and beautiful!!!! Sequel?

Author's Response: maaaaybe :)

Reviewer: Saol Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/20/08 11:08 am Title: One-shot

I really liked it :) soft and pretty. I would very much like to see a sequal in which Bill shows that he's awake.

Author's Response: thank you (: I'm considering writing a sequel but I'm not sure yet :P

Reviewer: shimmery Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/20/08 07:04 am Title: One-shot

That was incredibly sweet. You did an amazing job.

Author's Response: thank you! :D

Reviewer: Rocky Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/20/08 02:54 am Title: One-shot

sequel? :p

Author's Response: i might consider it xD

Reviewer: spreadxthexiubesc Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/20/08 12:20 am Title: One-shot

wow, this was very beautifully written!
I really loved it!
the way you described bill's breathing was great.
you really captured the moment.
♥♥

Author's Response: thank you so much :D

Reviewer: xEmoPenguinx Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/19/08 07:34 pm Title: One-shot

omg that was so adorable!
i loved it!
you're such an amazing writer!
*hugs anna*
^-^

Author's Response: aww ^-^ thank you so much Sarah! I think you've read just about every story that I've written xD thank you again! *hugs Sarah really tight*

Reviewer: Raine Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/19/08 05:27 pm Title: One-shot

^.^ OMG! this was wonderful! *gasp* You should do a sequal!!!! ^.^ *dances*

Author's Response: thank you so much ^^ I might do one...

Reviewer: SaraInes Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/19/08 05:13 pm Title: One-shot

OMG it was so beautiful. You're an amzing writer. You left me hanging with the end. I did not expected that. Shit, best thing I've read in weeks!!!
Don't stop writting please!!
*hugs and gives cookie*

Author's Response: wow, thank you! :D *eats cookie* yum ^^

Reviewer: pandasarelovex Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/19/08 05:09 pm Title: One-shot

I liked it! :D

Author's Response: yay :D thank you!

Reviewer: firelucy Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/19/08 04:49 pm Title: One-shot

beautiful sweety...just breathtaking

you portraided tom so wonderfully, maiking him possesive and vonerable at the same time, really impressive

this just screams for a sequel where Bill kisses Tom back

with the great writing skills you just showed us I can only imagine what it would be like to read about to twins and their feelings for each toher when coming from the tips of your fingers

it was extreemly good honey and as I said, just begging for a sequel

love and kisses lucy

Author's Response: Aww thank you so much (: that's so sweet of you *blushes* I might consider writing a sequel!

Reviewer: mrowski Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/19/08 04:05 pm Title: One-shot

Oh that was amazing! I loved it so much. The only thing is, cos Bill felt the kiss, YOU HAVE TO WRITE MORE!!! :)
Loved it, so please x3

Author's Response: thank you so much! :D I might consider writing more xD

Reviewer: EmmaKafrum Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/19/08 04:02 pm Title: One-shot

well, im the first to want it.
ill be in the front of the crowd screaming your name!!! xD

Author's Response: haha ok, I'll keep that in mind xD thank you again ;)

Reviewer: EmmaKafrum Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/19/08 03:55 pm Title: One-shot

oh god.......it was fucking amazing.
so deep, so....great...
are you gonna do a sequel??
PLEASEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!
this was so breath-taking!!! (oh the irony xD )
c'mon...it wont hurt (puppy eyes) p-p-p-p-pleaseeeee

Author's Response: aww (: thank you! :D I might consider it...maybe...if people really want me to continue xD

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