Date: 04/20/08 10:03 am Title: Chapter 1 - Bitter Goodbye
Ooo a vampire fic!
Please keep going!
Date: 04/20/08 09:13 am Title: Chapter 1 - Bitter Goodbye
its very interesting
i like it girl
continue please
i want more!!
Date: 04/20/08 07:35 am Title: Chapter 1 - Bitter Goodbye
B'aw... I want to know what Tom does. And, and... B'aaaaw... Poor little vampire Bill. I like that you made his transformation harder, that's not something I would have thought of. I may have to bribe you for more with Fan art xD But then that's going to be 3 things I'm wanting from you! -shakefist-
Date: 04/20/08 07:31 am Title: Chapter 1 - Bitter Goodbye
awesome, awesome, awesome, awesome.
can't wait to find out moar! i never understood vamp. fics, maybe this one will finally make me understand.
awesome!
Date: 04/20/08 01:00 am Title: Prologue
Very interesting start. I'm looking forward to more.
I particularly loved these lines:
"I couldn't stand the sound of it drumming in my ears when I knew that its other half had ceased beating."
"The flow of blood in my veins was agonizing when I knew that the same blood no longer moved through his."
Date: 04/19/08 08:17 pm Title: Prologue
Intruiging! I look forward to more.
Date: 04/19/08 02:55 pm Title: Prologue
sounds interesting i'll DEFENETLY follow along!!!
Date: 04/19/08 01:50 pm Title: Prologue
So far very interesting!
Date: 04/19/08 11:03 am Title: Prologue
Yay! I'm so glad to see you took up on this - now that it's really public, you'll have to deliver :) Can't wait to see where this takes us.
Date: 04/19/08 06:29 am Title: Prologue
Yay. I think I'm going to love the alternating POV and it's going to be a challenge for you. :)
Date: 04/19/08 05:32 am Title: Prologue
woah, i like it so far, your writing style keeps amazing me.
Date: 04/19/08 05:21 am Title: Prologue
this is creepy o_O
in a good way XD
by the way, in the summary it says 'trough' instead of 'through'
Author's Response:
Crap. I thought I fixed that.
I think there is some kind of rule that I have to make one horribly embarrassing mistake in every new fanfic I post.
Date: 04/19/08 04:41 am Title: Prologue
hm..its very interesting
i want to read the next chapter!!!
its very good!!
i like it!!
i wait for the next chapter...
Date: 04/19/08 04:39 am Title: Prologue
Very well-written. Can't wait for read the rest =)
Date: 04/19/08 03:25 am Title: Prologue
Very sad, and very potent. The mirrored thoughts are intriguing. Which one do we believe? I guess we'll have to wait until the next chapters.
This has sucked me in already.